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I Can't Attack, So My Summons do it instead

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Autor: Day_Dul

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What happens when a guy lives out his life just fine the first time, but his second life is determined by a random spinning wheel?

Find out with me as we delve into the world of Final Fantasy X anew.

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  2. Kurumi21
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Ascharit

Easily one of the best fanfics of a final fantasy. Also quite an enjoable OC with good interactions inside yunas guardian group also that he has a past with them and isnt just a tagalong helps a great deal.

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redstorm321

This is one of the better fanfics on this site but it loses points in a couple things. 1. Paragraphs are too long, this works when one tries to describe something happening but isn't as effective when it's a character speaking. Example: in chapter 11 when Yole explains to Tidus about Chappu and Wakka to Tidus about Yole's history with Yuna, it is longer than necessary. 2. Most of the story is Yole describing the things he see's or expects to see, because I've played the game I find these more annoying than usual as when I read a fanfic it's with me having played, watched or read the source material before. Besides these two things this story has potential.

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