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a guy dies but he is reincarnated but wait...he is the system and must chose his host and give him power's?
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Bland host. The only unique trait of the host is being a cat girl. She's as plain as you can guess. Boring to read. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
i can't read the book, chapters do not open!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bland, Boring and may give you a high blood due to frustration. The Mc is an Idiot who have a weak will. Cannot stomach killing humans but A okay with other species. Racist. Poor decision making and easily manipulated. Has a slave for a master. Who's his master is a slave from a princess. And a princess who works from a guild. Not a castle. Why she's still alive I have no Idea. Apparently she have plot armor to avoid assasins bull ****. The emotions are bland, boring or forced. Author has no knowledge of Politics, Geography, Physics, Real world, Deception etc. I can guess that you are a new Author so I'll give you a tip. Rational self inserts are well-written self inserts solely because they don't break reader's immersion. You self-insert yourself into the SI fanfic imagining what would you do in the self-insert's shoes. They need to be realistic. We need to be realistic. Think about it. You are reading a story where a guy is reincarnated/transmigrated to a foreign universe and the first thing they do is freak out. That's good. That is a normal human reaction from getting cosmically kidnapped from one world to another, especially a fantasy world you read manga about. But the next thing they do defines whether the self insert fanfic is rational or not, or I would like to say whether the fanfic is well-written or wish fulfilment trash. Does the self insert... Have fun carelessly exploring and trying out their new magical powers? Plan on meeting and befriending the canon characters? Instantly befriend the main canon characters through their apparent godlike social skills? Easily create a harem with their reincarnated good looks or otherworldly transmigrated visage? Instantly become a genius in the mystical arts without no hard training whatsoever? Constantly allude to knowledge and idiom they should not have and better yet, with the canon characters not questioning, calling out, or noticing this strange behavior? Save someone that they know is going to die if they don't do anything without thinking of the butterflied consequences? Congratulations. If the self insert fanfic you are reading answers yes to one or two of the following questions the SI you are reading is not rational. It's wish fulfilment trash. The next realistic and rational thing the self insert should do is Survive. The self insert should plan and secure their survival. This is their new life now. This is our new life now. This is not a game or one of the mangas we read pre-insert. The fiction you and the self insert read is now reality and we should treat it as such. If the SI was reincarnated, they don't have to worry as much compared to being inexplicably transmigrated. They have no identity, money, and shelter so they better be taking their situation seriously. It is after-all, our new life now. And if the SI got where they were by a ROB(random omnipotent being), I wouldn't be reading that Self-insert fanfic anyway because ROBs are trash and they ruin stories. The Mc's like that doesn't even deserve the power as they didn't have the right mind set. Or maybe this was just a wish fulfillment? Or you can just ignore my tips.
Ok since no one is saying it I will, the Grammar is absolutely atrocious I tried reading the first chapter I felt like I was losing brain cells, and thats all I can say because I dont feel like losing brain cells because of this atrocity against the grammar gods.
Really a good story would recommend to read especially for Minecraft players .......................,.,,......................................
Sigh... If he was a professional writer, the first thing he does is to set a goal for the hero, for example, why does he not think of creating a body for himself and for its formation, he needs some purposes, so he collects them by giving his host tasks and using it to shape his body and takes all the skills that he handed over to his host and you can put a manipulative character by choosing A selfish and greedy host who would do anything for power would be an excellent pawn I think it would be such a great job
A cute, lighthearted LN. I recommend this as a great stocking stuffer!👁👃👁 🏜🌋⛰🏔🗻🗻🏔⛰🌋🏜🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🔂🔂🎵🎵🔂🔂🔂🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵™️
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Great story!!! Keep writing!!!! I love it. Just maybe don’t make the mc’s host someone’s servant. I prefer it if they are freedom worshippers. This ****ty character limit sucks
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It's a pretty good story so far, but the author seems to be splitting into a lot of different paths too fast. A lot of people complain about multiversal novels that they spend too long in 1 dimension/world, but in this case, she is constantly jumping between them and multiple stories/events which is really confusing and could be a huge turn-off for new readers.
Thk for writing new book. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
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This is a good light hearted story that is both funny and interesting this is why I would recommend this to my friends I hope this novel continues.
It was a good story literally i saw it today 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 Fuck you 140 word rule
What happened to the "in a fantasy world with a minecraft system plot"? Though for me it is still nice cause with the crossovers gives me laughs.
If you like a minecraft I think you gonna like this novel. So take a bit of your time and read it. This novel is similar like I was a sword when I reincarnated. I also think the author is lolicon