I’m a Doorman at an Assassin’s Hotel

Pretty good concept and well written at the start however I feel it quickly becomes a book parodying other books. More specificly the lord of the rings arc, I found I could skip multiple chapters and still carry on as if I read them all. The book became what the other characters were doing about Sauron more than what the MC was doing at all. Adding into the fact it was following the actual books story line made it feel like there was no point in me reading it for the occasional OC character complaint here and there. I stopped reading around here to review the book, I’ll give it another read when there are more chapters.

This book has a good concept. the book is well written and has very few mistakes in the chapters. But. the writer of this book is missing some key points. 1. The MC is wat to whiny and timid throughout most of the book, and only man's up when he's being shot at. 2. the system issues rewards for completing missions, but the writer never goes back and explains them, and the main character doesn't use them and seems to forget about them. 3. The whole Lord of the Rings arc is bordering on plagiarism. I feel this concept has great potential. more creativity and imagination are needed for this type of concept.