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Michael, formerly a military veteran turned mercenary was having a blast, living his best life. That was until an accident happened that caused him great misfortune, rendering him unable to continue being a mercenary.
After that point, his life spiraled into that of an alcoholic, eventually leading to his demise.
Before he died he saw something odd however, it was a blue hologram with the words 'Do you wish to start anew?'
Michael readily accepted and was thrust into a fantasy world with a mysterious system companion that seemed to be hell bent on making him the best healer in the world.
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So, good effort. Fair warning, I've only read to about chapter 27. My thoughts on this... I hate the time skips and the character is jumping around all these places, it's very irrational. Unfortunately, before any side characters can be fleshed out or even any situation can be fleshed out properly the scene is changed and then the MC is doing something else. The world is never really fleshed out, I know the author says there are 3 huge continents and you HAVE to go to the academy in order to get a certificate to get in a dungeon... We also know that the police will allow an 11 year old 'healer' to go into a hostage situation with no knowledge of his skills other than that he can cast a powerful heal spell.... had me scratching my head at this version of the police who would allow this based on an 11 year old HEALER saying 'Trust me'. Then suddenly the author brings religion into it and they are calling him a 'saint'. Honestly, it reads like the author wasn't sure what they wanted to do and kept deciding to change it around as he went. Also, even though it's called 'Healing System' and his class is a 'Healer' it still seems like the author is taking it down the road of the MC being a warrior/sniper (or similar) with 'healing ability'. (I've only read to about chapter 27 though) I do NOT want to discourage the author. Even though I am dropping it, I wanted to give the author this feedback so that they can improve on these things. There is only so much disbelief you can ask a reader to do before they are pulled out of a story. I recommend slowing the pace down and fleshing out the world and the MC. You can still have him move around, but there should be more descriptions and backstory on why things are the way they are. Unless it's just a video game he's stuck in there should be a reason. (And most game developers try to add a reason in as well).
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so far, so good. There's lots of jumping around, and it can be a bit confusing, but may be intentional. All in all, it's a good read so far, and I'm looking forward to more.
Hello everyone, thank you for checking out my book! I wanted to put in a few warnings before you start: 1. The pace might feel jumpy at the start since I wanted to set everything up for the future chapters. It becomes slower as the chapters go on since I will be making this a high chapter count book. 2. World building/Characters might not feel as fleshed out at the start, that is because I will introduce both of them gradually with the addition of different worlds and a wide array of all kinds of different characters. 3. The story might seem like it is ignoring some details, however, I can assure you, everything has a purpose, if it was introduced, It would be explored further in the future. Those are the main issues that could put someone off, besides that, this story is no-harem, it will have future characters from all sorts of mythologies and religions and lastly, the upload schedule is 2-3 chapters per day. I hope you give my book a try!