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What happens when the one who trained all heroes, gets his wish at last

Follow as our protagonist given never before seen shortcomings fights through them to make something out of himself. He is helped by his companions he finds during his adventures, his parents and his teachers. He meets tragedies overcomes them and grows in the process, growing stronger step by step, one punch at a time

Please note that i am the same author for He has descended. For some reason i was locked out of my account had to start the story afresh.

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viru
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saw your post on he has descended. now you are going to have to start again??? please chatch up to the latest chaps. been waiting for the conclusion. i know you will have to realese chaps in small batches to bring in readers everyday :)

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Kingoftimepass_1

Helping my story along the way :P. Others are just words i am using allow me to fill this review up. Also just FYI, the story's good I am pretty sure you will enjoy it. The characters have got grit, they dont give up and work hard. I tried to keep the story as grounded from MC's perspective. Would like it if you guy could comment anything you like or any character you would like to keep and along those line

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