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Harry potter: A Slytherin''s Story
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How much chaos can one unexperimented, illegal, modified Potion can do?
Read to find out the adventures of Blaise Zabini Selwyn.
An Si-OC HP Fanfic
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cucked in an instant 🤮. bro get those emotions out my boy not even his. All the people worried about him is feeling so forced and overdose of cringe. I swear if he gets on good terms with Harry and whatsherface ima throw up. it's aight I guess. Anyways please give him some backbone later on. also I feel like 2 much kindness ruins a story just me tho.
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I don't know if you will take my review into consideration but drop the dead weights i.e harry and Daphne. You have a mc with gamer ability in HP. A recipe for a perfect story. Instead you made a rom-com where the mc has one sided love that won't be answered. And muddling adults trying to butt in every conversation. Now again this is your story and you have the creative liberty. And that is the most important thing. But most readers I bet will be put off by the storyline.
This story is very impactful at the beginning, bringing a very heavy emotional load on the (host body) of the protagonist. But the difference between the reincarnated MC's feelings and the body he now inhabits is quickly explained. Some people have commented that the MC is running away from drama, but in fact he has no emotional or romantic attachment to his host's love interest. So I think it's only fair that he ignores the bad parts of old relationships and forges his own path, choosing who to love, what to do and what goal to pursue. All in all, it's an excellent story with good potential.
I love this fanfic pls don't drop it ............................... ................................... .....................................
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MC is Zabini, it's a SI. When MC transmits into Zabini's body, he learns that he is in an alternate universe. MC has to solve the ex-Zabini problem... in his memories it was Daphne's "SIMP", she became Harry Potter's girlfriend even knowing that he was friends with EX-Zabini. Good, I hate that MC came after Daphne and Harry are dating. 😅
dude it might not be the best but it's still a good read don't let negative comments put you off
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not Bad but please no more angst and no OC paring, please chose ever fleur tonks or Susan anyway, thanks for writing this story author[img=recommend][img=update]
This novel has really great potential, I can't wait for more chapters. ....................................................................................................................................
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Bro please don't stop writing it,the plot is really good so don't drop it and continue it plsdsssssssssssssssssssssssssssss.... ..............
*disclaimer* only read to chapter 2 as of writing this review. Pros: 1.intersting way of adding system into the story 2.the system is nice and simple(hate overly complicated systems especially talking ones) Cons: 1.quite a few spelling mistakes (not mistakes in diction or anything like that just spelling) 2. hasn't shown the status screen just described it (you can just add it in as a picture in the comments if that makes it easier) Over all I really like it and will be reading it going forward even if the 2 cons aren't fixed/changed. Good luck with this story author. Here's a pic I like.
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