Good Villain

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Yuki_Nightingale

It is I, the author! Yes, giving myself a shameless 5 stars review... This is my first creative writing, especially one shared with the world. As an author, I wanted to create a different world full of different people, all to enjoy being a creator. Sure, this creator may create some mistakes somedays, but I strive to make my creation as wonderful as possible! And this novel has room to improve, I do realize that, and I appreciate every comment and review and anything given. Even if you comment that I am missing a comma in the 5th paragraph, I am willing to edit that 5th paragraph. So do be willing to comment on mistakes and your thoughts!! A little info just if you are curious to read: - The MC does have a little narcissism in her blood, AKA the Princess Syndrome, but I try my best to keep it at a rate where you don't want to slap her face at every turn. 0-0 She has a life just like any other, just that she loves herself more than anything. - Avina's goal is to return to her own world to her best friend Bea. She seeks out friendship in every world, so Avina is not alone in these worlds. Plus, she has her trusty system, 5025! - There is a romance tag, and that is where I shall warn you. No, Avina does not have one of those going-into-worlds-with-her male leads. Instead, the romance will only be active if the original hostess had romance. So Avina is not actively seeking love, she just wants to go home. - 5025 is definitely not a super powerful system. Just a warning. Avina has her MC plot armor, but she's not always going to have a smooth sailing journey. There will be waves, storms, or her ship may have a hole. Author here shall have no sympathy in order to bring the greatest plot to life! If you are interested in my journey, there is a nice little Author Introduction/Diary chapter. :) It keeps my thoughts inside and shows how much progress I made so far. Makes me happy to write a new entry every time. Thank you if you do decide to read! It may be a bumpy start at first, but I strive to improve every day! By the end, I hope to bring the best possible amusement to my dear readers.

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Oversized_Lizard

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Cool_Nega

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TheSuccessor

This is a very interesting and fun book to read, the development kind of confused me on where the plot diagram was going, but I understood by the end. This book has a good cover and synopsis which grabbed me to read

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absoulte_softie

Hello, I've been enjoying reading this but then I realized that I never made a review statement. So I set out to write a serious, constructive review only to realize I have a goldfish memory. What I can tell you about this novel is that the grammar doesn't make my eyes bleed, and every day when I log in I am filled with the anticipation of seeing if I am able to read a new chapter. A big plus is the author! They have responded to every comment I've posted, have been super friendly, and super cute with their replies! I don't even know where I'm going with this anymore... Well, it's been great reading so far and I hope you'll join me on this adventure the author is taking us on.

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Jozan

One of the best non cliché system stories I've ever read so far. I'm on chapter four and TRUST ME! It's worth so much more hype than what is given. Send her all the gifts and stones you have and leave a compliment if you can under a chapter. She'd appreciate it ☺️ Also Avina is honestly too narcissistic at times and o hate narcissistic personality types but at least she isn't useless 🙄😒

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Person_man

A very well written and well rounded story that pulls you in and holds you close. The author does a fantastic job of giving the characters interesting and gripping personalities as well as shows us so many things we could want. The word "Excellent" is probably the best way to describe this novel. Please, if you have the time, give this story a read. You will not regret it.

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VioletC

wuv it 💜 I really love the mc and her character development is Pog 💜 ________________________________________________________________________________ 💜💕💘💞💓💗💖✨💖💗💓💞💘💕💜 I have a lot to say but if you're deliberating on wether to read it or not, read it! its worth it!

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Bad_Totodile

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illeannne

System stories have always been a treat for me, but this author manages to execute the trope beautifully! I love Avina and how she does her mission (although sometimes she forgets her plans *cough*) Anyway, this deserves a 5-star for me! —from your bear twin, leanne!

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daniella19

I honestly do not really like system books. But when I started reading this story I was enchanted by it. There are barely any grammar errors,which allowed me to enjoy. The character of Avina is one to die for. I love fierce and unafraid FL. Her system is quite the character. I definitely recommend this book. Good job author,waiting for more chapters

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Sakura_Misakito

Author huhuhu I don't have coins I will use my fast pass to read . [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Sakura_Misakito

First arc is finish Woahhhh go avina Love the story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Riley_Steverose

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Zombie

Can't believe this novel still doesn't have a rating! Read it! Now! Pssst Yuki how much for an autograph! Read this novel, you won't regret it (jokes you'll get addicted to)

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Bad_Totodile

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Nomed_Forcraziness

.................................................. I love System Books. This is nice. Not much Grammer mistakes but needs improvement in sentence construction Thank you for your hard hoping for more in the future

I have been reading your book and I love how you constructed your characters, the timing of when they enter the story and the plot itself. It's amazing. 👍🥺👋😍🥰

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Sakura_Misakito

Go avina take them down Woahhhh wilona for the win Team sandraXwilona go go go [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]