/ Anime & Comics / Genshin Impact : Transmigrated with Gloxinia template
Zusammenfassung
Hello ! I'm Meryuki, a freshly new writer. This story is my first work so please be gentle lol.
I appreciate comments and good criticism but if you just comment just to spread hate please leave.
English is not my first language but I will do my best. Expect some faults in my writing but I will be more than happy if you kindly correct me.
I write mostly for fun and to relax so don't bother with powerstones, but don't hesitate to comments.
Here's the not so great synopsis :
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One day, a young man woke up in a forest in a different world, a world of adventure and fantasy where strength is a must to survive. Armed with future knowledge and a system giving him power, Gloxinia will pursue his goal of a leisure life in the world of genshin impact.
Our protagonist will do anything to avoid danger and to interact with the characters of the story, will he be successful in his endeavor?
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The protagonist Gloxinia will be lazy most of the time but he will do what is necessary to have what he wants.
Don't expect a hero-type or a villain-type character, he will just do what he wants.
He won't be a weak character, I think the power of gloxinia are quite cool and powerful.
He won't act like a cliche overpowered character where he will defeat every being he see or on the contrary hide his power until the very end.
Again he will do and act like he want, he will be a free character who don't really care about others opinion.
That's all, enjoy the story !
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nice work author (☞^o^) ☞(☞^o^) ☞(☞^o^) ☞(☞^o^) ☞(☞^o^) ☞(☞^o^) ☞(☞^o^) ☞(☞^o^) ☞(☞^o^) ☞(☞^o^) ☞(☞^o^) ☞
truly a unique story i must say and i like the interaction between the characters (ex:MC and arranaras)
Love the story so far wondering if you are going to give him a vision and/or a gnosis? Oh, also a idea is connecting to the abyss or something like that.
nice work author 👍⭐⭐🌟🌟⭐🌟⭐⭐✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐✨✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^
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everything is good the problems's is. pacing and the paragraphs feel off meaning it just needs sum update and it should be good
I wonder if gloxinia will become stronger or stay that way because there are fatuis and other characters that are stronger than the archons that would be a problem if they notice it you could give him the power of meliodas the full counter as a last resort that instead of reflecting magical attacks reflect elemental power with double the power to have a chance against enemies stronger than him although it is just my opinion.
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It got potential, though the story pacing a little to fast. i hope you give pov to the village people so we can see how they met mc