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Kapitel 74: Pointless Face Slap q(❂‿❂)p (*)

I woke up while being embraced by my cute chubby girlfriend.

I did not move as our hands and legs were wrapped around each other which would definitely wake the other up if one of us tried to wake up.

About 5 minutes later Zara slowly opened her eyes and looked at me sucking her big boobs attentively and passionately.

" Good morning, big baby", Zara caressed my head while my face was busy sucking and enjoying those big breasts of her.

" Oh.. you woke up, I couldn't stop myself from having a taste of these, I love them a lot", I said while pushing my face onto her breasts while tightening my hug around her body.

" Huh... for how long I waited for moments like these", Zara said with nostalgic eyes.

" Hey, don't act like an old person, it's not even a single year since we were away", I said looking at her face.

" You don't know Ritik, I wanted to have moments like this right from the start when I saw you during high school. Your touch, your body, your love, your feelings, your emotions and at last your cock, I wanted it all from the moment I loved you. I just love you so much", Zara said while gripping my face and pushing it again onto her heavenly cleavage.

" I.. vuv.. yu... too..", I said while letting her have her fun.

" If you two had woken up then get up, we have a busy day today", Natasha shouted from the door after knocking on it.

" Shit.. do you think she saw us", Zara covered our bodies fully including our faces inside the blanket and asked.

" So what if she saw us, there's nothing wrong as she herself is someone who knows all about me, my girls and my body", I said while pushing the blanket away.

" You... you don't understand, there should be some sense of respect between elders and children even if... even if there's a relationship like you and sister Natasha", Zara said while being embarrassed.

" uhh.. well... anyways let's get ready, fuxk this is really annoying", I got up and said while having problems pushing my boner inside my boxers.

" giggle* little Ritik I'm sorry but I can't help you now, wait for the night to come", Zara said while looking at my boner and started dressing up.

I came out while still being semi-erect and saw Shanaya and Sania brushing in the hall.

After greeting them morning I went to freshen up normally.

••••••••••••••••

3RD PERSON POV-

Shanaya and Sania were chatting while taking off their clothes before bathing.

" Did you saw he was having a boner in the morning", Shanaya said to Sania while taking off her clothes.

" Wh... what.. Really, I didn't had a perfect view", Sania said stuttering while blushing.

" Why are you blushing, we've already shared so much intimate time together and you still act like this, don't try to act innocent in front of me, I know all your secrets and desires", Shanaya said in a teasing way.

" You... so what, I too know all your secrets", Sania retorted.

" OK OK miss shy wife of Ritik, let's bathe now", Shanaya said while entering the bathtub.

" uff... so relaxing", Sania said while going inside the warm water filled bathtub and leaning on one of it's end while Shanaya leaned on the other. Both being nude their hot bodies were in full view. Shanaya being more than half a foot taller than Sania had her C cup magnificently shaped breasts almost floating out of the water while Sania being small and skinny had her short body inside the water upto her neck hiding almost her full body inside the water.

" How do you think Ritik will react after seeing him, I don't think he'll act like everyday but I'm sure he won't stop talking to you", Shanaya said while looking at Sania with a serious face.

" ughh... I'm also thinking about that only, I don't want Ritik to get aggressive yet I can't think of anything to stop Ritik. ughh... I don't know how can someone be so persistent, it's been more than three months and yet he is still going on with his approach. It's so annoying ughh..", Sania said and at the last sentence took her small fist out of water and punched cutely in air.

" I already told you I can wrap him up and he won't dare to even come near you but you always say you can handle him yourself. Now look what your kind and so called honest heart did. I don't know what Ritik will do to him if he finds out about him", Shanaya said while raising her voice.

" shh... please slow down or Ritik will know everything right now... let's just go and hope for the best. I know Ritik will understand after all it's only about a teenage boy and his crush", Sania said with worried tone.

" Yeah... come wash up I'm almost done", Shanaya said while throwing some water on Sania.

" Hey.. what are you doing

giggle*

giggle*

•••••••••••••••••••

POV COMES BACK-

I, Zara, Maya, Natasha, Sania and Shanaya were on the lift going downwards to the parking lot.

ding*

" So Sania and Shanaya on scooty, I and Zara on dragon and you two in car, you're comfortable there right??", I asked Natasha and Maya.

" Yeah, we are old people and can't face that much wind directly, you young people should enjoy your time", Maya said smirking.

" If you're old then these girls are just babies, OK let's go it's already 8:10, they wrote that gate would close down at sharp 8:30 a.m.", I said and opened the car door.

Maya and Natasha giggled at the compliment and sat inside.

I turned around and went to my orange dragon(DUKE 890).

VROOM* VROOM*

Coming beside Zara I pressed the accelerator twice and asked,

" Hold me tight or you might fall", I said while she sat behind me.

" Yes.. let's go", Zara said while holding onto my waist.

Click* vroom* I pressed on the gear suddenly and Zara's body jumped slightly and fell forward making her stuck tightly to me and her breasts press against my back tightly.

" I told you hold tight", I said laughing.

" OK OK I'm holding tight but don't do it again, I might really fall", Zara said in a wronged voice and wrapped her hands around my waist pressing her big breasts tightly to me.

" Don't be late, I'll be waiting for you at the school gate", Shanaya shouted while having Sania sit behind herself while she rode the scooty and going from right beside me.

" Heh! challenging a dragon with an earthworm", I leaned over slightly and started riding as Zara clutched tightly onto my clothes by wrapping her arms around my waist while pressing her soft body tightly onto my back.

••••••••••••

Zuup* Zuup*

" Ritik.. please slow down... I think it's too fast for this road", Zara said while sticking her head to my shoulder.

" It's just between 60 to 70 and the road's not that full. Also, it's the long way so we need to hurry", I shouted while increasing the speed to 80+.

" IT'S NOT FULL, YOU SAY IT'S NOT FULL. THERE'S LITERALLY BIKES AND CARS EVERYWHERE CAN'T YOU SEE", Zara shouted while keeping her hands tightly wrapped around me.

" So what, there's still gaps here and there", I said while controlling the brakes as with each break and thrust Zara's modest breasts pressed tighter and tighter on my back.

" ughh... do whatever you want just don't have accident", Zara said without opening her eyes.

" I know", I said while again fastening the bike.

••••••••••••••••

SCREECH*

I made a drift and stopped the dragon a little away from school.

Then slowly taking it to the school I went in and parked in the school parking premises.

It took me about 10 minutes to reach school on the longer road. Shanaya, Sania, Maya and Natasha reached quickly after me.

They were shocked of how fast I reached while I just patted my dragon.

•••••••••••••••

Being a prestigious and famous school, the parent teacher meeting was also different.

Two meetings were held each year, one being around December and the other after the final exams. The meeting after final exams would be simple and plain as parents would visit with their children and take the final report card and go back after meeting the teacher and listening the remarks about their children but the December one was totally different.

All the parents were called out at a specific time and were arranged so that they could see the report cards of their children while their children were attended by the teachers i.e. the parents sat on the back and check out the report cards while the students sitting in front of them simply had a normal study session while being under pressure by their parent's presence in the back. The large classrooms allowed this process to run smoothly.

So for that I and Natasha were sitting on the back while Sania was sitting looking nervous in the front with the students. Maya and Zara had went to Shanaya's section.

A simple looking female teacher came in and firstly presented the report cards to the parents i.e. us all.

She didn't talk much and just asked all the parents about their children and told their child's situation. She told us that Sania's quite an attentive and intelligent girl and praised her wholeheartedly. Then she moved forward.

It took a full 50+ minutes to finish meeting all the parents.

Everything was normal other than the slightly chubby boy trying to talk to Sania continuously.

I was standing at the back with hands fold as I saw a 5'9" slightly chubby boy trying to talk to Sania while sitting just beside her with little gap between them from where teachers move around in class.

Sania was turning her head to look at me again and again with a nervous expression on her face as the boy tried talking to her even after she looked disinterested in his words.

I just looked at them with a straight face sitting at my place, Sania's face turned sour and sourer with passing time but still the boy kept trying.

About 1¾ hours since our entry the bell rang and it was time that we can leave the school.

The students got up and so did the parents.

The slightly chubby boy came to us and bowed a little.

" Good Morning Auntie, I'm Sania's friend. Sania had talked a lot about you. Good morning brother umm... Sania did not talk about you but you might be her brother. Nice to meet you too", he said to Natasha and me.

" Oh.. Good morning boy, Sania had also talked about you", Natasha said smiling and looked at me with a knowing look.

" Really!!!", he said excitedly.

" Hey man, let's talk somewhere, I would like to talk to you about something PRIVATELY", I said emphasising the last word.

" Oh... what are you doing here, won't you came back with me??", suddenly a fat lady came to us and said looking at the boy.

" No mom, I'll go back myself a little later", the boy replied.

" Oh! so polite, how do you change so much", the fat lady said lovingly to the boy.

" Mom you go, I'll see you later at home", he pushed his mom out while she did not mind it much and just went out simply.

I just stood there with folded hands looking at the fuss with an annoyed face. I suddenly felt a tug on my shirt.

Turning back I saw a nervous Sania looking at me silently.

" You don't need to worry, I'll really just talk to him. Believe me teddy", I patted Sania's head and somehow her nervousness died down.

" But why didn't you told me about him before today, I could have already warned him", I followed with this.

" He... he's just a simple boy so I thought he would let go of wooing me but he kept insisting. You remember I told you about a fan of mine who had followed me since I had less than 5K subscribers, he is the one so I just thought it as nothing special I just...", I cut Sania's words in the middle.

" Hey hey, don't be nervous, I just asked why didn't you tell me before. I know it would had been quite difficult to ignore someone who is such a hardcore follower of oneself", I said trying to calm her nervousness when that boy came back after pushing his mom out.

" You came back, let's go and talk", I said while taking the hand of the boy and pulling him out with it from between the crowd of students and parents in class.

" Ritik.. it's school, don't try something bad", Natasha said from behind but I didn't reply. The boy too asked what is it that I want to talk about but I kept pulling him and he simply followed.

" You know any secret places here, let's talk clearly", I asked him with seriousness.

" What are youu trying to pull here man, we can just talk here. I don't want to go anywhere now, just say what you want right here", he said being agitated.

We were standing in the corridor on 2nd floor while some parents and children kept passing us.

" OK if you really want to talk here then let's.. thud*( I pushed him on to the wall) bam* ( I punched with full force beside him face right onto the wall), listen meatball I'm not Sania's brother or something, I'm her boyfriend so keep you pile of meat body away from her. I'm not stopping you from talking to her but flirt with her cautiously, you never know whom you might be facing blindfolded", I said threateningly.

" Oh... just this, I'll keep that in mind. Now that I agreed, would you like to meet me after school... ALONE", he said slowly.

" So you still won't agree, OK let's talk properly after school", I said smirking.

" You can see that abandoned building right?? I'll wait you up there", he said smiling as if we were best friends.

" OK then, right there in one hour. We'll talk out the main issue wholly", I said menacingly while smiling.

" Definitely", he said confidently and walked away after pushing my hand.

•••••••••••••••••

' What was that, how could he punch so hard right on the wall, above that he didn't flinch even in the slightest. Still, he thinks he can just threaten me with that. Let me teach you a good lesson Mr. the boyfriend of my girlfriend', the boy thought while walking away.

•••••••••••••••

" I have some work after the school, so you could go back with mom and Suegra in the car", I told Zara while standing with the 5 ladies.

" You're not trying to pull something funny right??", Natasha asked knowing my true nature.

" Obviously not, he just agreed easily to not try to tease her again", I said without much emotions.

" I don't want to know what you're doing but it should not affect these girls OK?? You could get beat up or beat someone up, I just don't want to get these girls into trouble", Natasha said straight forward.

" MOM!! don't you care about me", I said with wronged eyes.

" I do care but I know I can't stop you", Natasha said directly.

" OK I promise it won't affect them", I promised.

" I knew you would do something like this, why are you so eager to fight always", Shanaya said annoyed with my actions.

" Ye.. yeah, I don't think it's right to make the situation worse", Sania said being worried.

" Yeah, you should first use your brains before the brawl", Zara exclaimed.

Maya just looked at it all snickering. She didn't care much if I fight as she knew I too had some significant connections.

" OK OK, I'll only talk to him but if he really is eager to fight then I can't promise", I said directly.

••••••••••••••

I sent them home after talking them out somehow and then took out my phone and dialled the most chatted number I had.

" Hello Veronica, I want 50 men right now", I asked after the call was picked up from the other side.

" For what??", Veronica asked without much thoughts as if 50 men were nothing for her.

" I'll tell you later, I'm sending you the address, just sent them in less than half an hour", I said.

" OK I'll do that but you know the payment right hehe..", she laughed knowingly.

" Yeah I know you pervert", I shook my head knowing what she wanted.

" OK, love you boyfriend. ughh.. it sounds cringe but somehow lovable. I might get it as a habit.. anyways bye bye..", Veronica said and cut the call after hearing me greeting her off on the phone.

Then I started dragon and while slowing down the surrounding time I quickened the speed and reached the abandoned building in just some minutes.

Parking dragon on the side I got off the bike and went inside.

It was a half built broken down building with 4 floors.

After taking a round of the building I inspected it and found nothing special anywhere. Thus, I just sat on the centre of the first floor.

About 10 minutes later I heard some bike sounds and looked down from the first floor. There I saw about 15 boys coming in 7 bikes. 5 of them looked like college students while all other were the boys from Sania's school.

The slightly fat boy led them in and they simply followed. There were several wooden sticks, stones and some other metal rods lying here and there so I just picked up one of the metal rods and waited for them while sitting in the centre on a boulder while keeping that metal rod on my shoulder.

" Heh! you were so eager to get beaten that you came alone, aren't you afraid that I might handicap you", the boy said while coming up through the stairs with a cheeky smile.

" Heh! you really think these sissies could really touch me. You need the triple of these pussies if you want to do even a little damage to me", I said while laughing and waving the metal rod.

" Hmph.. pick up the rods and sticks", he ordered the boys around him and they did so.

" Wait a minute mango pulp, my boys are still not here", I said still having the same smile.

" Oh.. got afraid, you really think I would wait for them to arrive", he said sarcastically.

" No no you're misunderstanding, I'm just waiting for them to have a nice show of me beating up 15 pussies at once", I said with a smirk.

" You just wai...

VROOM* VROOM* PHAT* PHAT* PHAT* VROOM* VROOM* VROOM*.....

A lot of bike sounds came together as a big row of two wheelers with several burly looking guys with a villainous aura around them arrived in front of the building.

" So they came, time for the show then..", I said and laughed.

" Wh.. what is brother doing here"

" uhh... he's here too"

" brother tiger too, why is he here"

" why is the king baldy here.."

" no... I think he called them here"

The five boys that looked like college studs had their legs trembling as they saw the burly men arrive in front of the building.

" You... who are you", one of them asked me with trembling hands.

" uhh... me.. I'm someone he tried stealing the girlfriend from", I pointed my finger at the boy.

" Huh... what's with you all, you can't back down after you told me you'll help me in beating him however powerful he would be", fatty said with some difficulty looking at the nervous faces of the five boys.

I just looked at the guys on the bike looking side by side as if searcing someone.

I whistled at them and all of them looked upwards, waving my hand I called them all up.

They followed my commands and came up quickly.

" Boss R??", One of them bowed down and asked me.

" R?? Did she sent you all??", I asked thinking if they knew our real names.

" uhh... yes, miss just sent us saying that look for a tall young boy with a cut edge physique and the best and most beautiful face and to come here quickly. I now understand why she described you so briefly, I could really find you even in a crowd of thousands..", he said while scratching the back of his head and I cut his words in the middle.

" OK OK, don't bootlick I just called you all here as spectators, just stand here and watch as I beat these pussies", I said with a smile while turning towards the boys.

" Bo... boss.." " Brother Tiger hello..." " Brother.. I'm.. that short haired boy you met some days back" " brother I...

Some of those boys started to talk their way out somehow while being surrounded by the 50 or so gangsters on one side and me alone on the other side where the balcony was made.

" SHUT UP!!! Don't talk to them now, let's start now that you all are here", without another warning I moved my hand and pulled my ear, turning the time flow to 0.7×.

Coming just in front of the slightly fat boy who was now trembling in fear I slapped him once.

" Start fighting you all, it's been a lot of days since I last had an enjoyable fight like this. This is the last warning, start now or I'll tell all these... umm... subordinates of mine to start their play", I shouted after slapping him in the face while waving my iron rod.

" I... I'm sorry fatty" " I... I'm out of this too" " I also don't want to get involved in it"

Some of them tried leaving the place but were unable to do so as I already shouted,

" Don't let them go anywhere, either they fight it out with me or they'll fight it out with you all. Do you know, he tried hitting on my girl and you agreed to be on his side. You really think I'd let someone like that go so easily like this", I said to the burly gangsters while putting my rod on my shoulders.

"I'm really sorry", a boy from the school group came towards me running while trying to throw a punch.

It was a no stance simple punch which I deflected just by waving my hand and kicked him in the abdomen.

" ughh..", he cried. Then I hit on his back with my elbow and he fell down simply while clutching his back and stomach, writhing in pain while shouting.

" Weak yet courageous(I said looking at the fallen boy), the one who comes at last will get beaten up by them so think about it yourself", I said with a sadistic smile while waving my rod at the 50 burly gangsters.

Thud* " I'm really sorry brother, please let me go, I'll never ever see again towards Sania. I will do whatever you want, I'll give you all my pocket money, I'll give you everything I have but please let me go..", the slightly fat boy went on his knees and said while putting his head in front of me while some droplets of tears started falling from his eyes.

" You want to bribe me with money, what kind joke is this. Just take a look at my shoes,

80,000 KE SHOES H LAUDE 80,000 KE. GHAR JAINGA TERA".

" You know, if you'd been a simple depressed looking middle class fatty or something like that then I would definitely let you go, but you're a pathetic child running over others using his parents's money. I can't let you go easily and you all are also under the same jurisdictions. The last warning, fight or get thrown down directly from here", I said while showing the direction of balcony with my iron rod.

" You... it's too much. I'm sure you're gonna make all of us get beaten by these hooligans at last so I'll atleast beat you first to calm myself later. Come guys, we are gonna get beaten later so let's not get humiliated by him atleast now", one of the school boy said and tried motivating everyone.

" uhh... he's true, it's getting too much"

" Yeah, let's fight it out"

" OK I'm in"

.....

The school boys got ready at last.

" You sure you can fight them all, they are also 15 after all", A 6'5" something fat man with a lion tatoo on his hand asked.

" I know you're also ordered to help me but don't interfere during the fight. You'll see and will understand by yourself later. Also, just make sure that if any of them don't fight now then just throw them down and then beat that person to half death", I said with a confident smile.

" Fuxk let's go", the motivator school boy announced and ran towards me.

I smiled and let them come.

He came with the same technique, throwing his punch at my face but I knew what he was trying to pull.

I dodged it and he backed it up with an uppercut.

With 0.7× time flow I easily caught his wrist. During the short second he wasted on understanding what I did, I pulled him closer and punched on his face, again and again three time and his nose broke while he started bleeding from his lips. He feel down clutching his face as tears started dropping from his eyes due to the broken nose.

" It's not enough, come together or one by one you'll all will be like them", I said while jumping.

This time the warning did it's work as all other 8 school boys came running towards me.

" Haha.. let's play then", I laughed as I could perfectly judge their moves with 0.7× time flow.

2 of the boys kicked while 3 slapped together. 3 others waited just behind to strike next.

I dodged the slaps by lowering myself and caught the two coming kicks.

" Heh..", I smirked and made the boys fell down by pulling their legs wide and making them fall with wide legs making them cry out loud.

The three slaps striked again and I again dodged them while one slap grazed me from behind.

I moved forward quickly and punched on one of the boy's face and grabbed one's hair and pulled him down.

One of the other four boys fell down, scared of how quickly the other boys were taken down. The other three followed while punching and kicking with all they got. I easily dodged their attacks and took them down without much worry and only the fatty was left at last.

" Haha... you really thought these are enough, you're really a little boy", I laughed and mocked him when suddenly,

thud* I felt a sudden sharp pain on my back making me turn quickly.

I saw one of the college boy with my iron rod looking at me with a smirk.

He stretched his hand back again trying to hit me but I caught the rod this time. Pulling it from his hands I quickly waved it hitting his on his abdomen making him cry out loud.

This time I did not lower my guard and saw two college guys standing with wooden sticks in their hands and the other two with rods.

" It's fun..", I smirked and went to face them all.

Waving my rod I blocked two incoming wooden stick attacks and dodged the other two.

Again following with the same this time I moved quickly and hit one of them with my rod making him fall.

" Motherfuxker...", I cried out loud as I felt another sharp pain on my back.

I saw the school boy that I knocked down at the start holding his back and smirking after hitting me with another metal rod.

This time the gangsters interfered and pulled the school boy while throwing the metal stick away.

The pain was really something as I generated a sudden state of anger and started waving my rod wildly.

The other four college guys were easily taken down while I got hit two more times on each of my arms.

" Fuxk, it burns more than hurting", I said slowly while holding my arms.

" So what should we do with him boss", one of the gangsters brought the fat boy close who was still shivering while in a non beaten condition.

" ughh.." I felt a pain in my arm and looking at him viciously I said,

" Break the masturbating arm of this virgin dixkhead and let his parents know that he was getting related with the underworld and got beaten up", I said while getting up from where I was sitting.

" Do you need our help", the gangsters tried to help me.

" Just go and clean the mess up, don't beat anyone anymore, just give them some simple slaps and tell them to not follow anyone blindfold, it will act as a lesson to them for the future. I'm going now, I'll tell umm... miss that you did a good work", I said while going down the stairs.

" Thank you boss (some of them said)"

•••••••••••••••

" It's hurting but.... it feels awesome, now I understand how those Chinese MC's feel after so much show off, I might develop this habit of showing off. Well, let's first take a painkiller", I said while riding my bike rather slowly this time due to the sharp pain.

•••••••••••••

" Well, it was funny looking at him going all out", one of the gangster said while I went away.

" Yeah, but he was awesome, you saw how fast his moves were, those were right on the mark and yet so fast. It is hard to find someone with that level of speed and skills even in the military. He's really good with with his work", one of them said.

" So what, he's too kind for this business, I would not have let anyone who tried to steal my girl go just with one arm broken", another one said mockingly.

" Heh! you don't understand, if we let this meatball's mother know that he was getting involved with us and he got beaten up by some other gang then his whole schooling might get stopped, it might even leave a trauma in him which will affect him much greater than a physical harm. You could see how weak his mental strength is just by looking at him right now", they all looked at fatty after someone said this.

He was trembling while looking at them fearfully.

" Haha.." " haha.." " haha..." " haha..."....

They all started laughing together and then started beating the 15 of them up.

AGAIN....

••••••••••••••••••

" Ouch, I told you to press it gently", I said looking at Sania who was putting the cream on my swollen biceps while having tears in her eyes.

" I... I told you not to follow them, you know how much it hurts me seeing you like this", she said as the tears started streaming down her eyes.

" OK OK, I'm really sorry, I won't do something like that again", I said while hugging her.

She too put her arms around me and sighed while sticking her head to my chest.

" ouchie* my back's hurt too", I said meekly.

" Oh... sorry sorry, does it hurt badly", Sania said worried while having the cute expression on her beautiful face.

" I think it will go away after a strawberry flavored kiss", I said with a smirk.

" You're thinking about that even now, but... I think you deserve a reward for your work", Sania said shyly. She didn't knew how much beating I gave the fat boy and just thought of it as a small fight with metal rods.

" Don't be lovey dovey here, there's so many rooms just go in, let me watch the movie in silence here", Natasha and Maya were also very worried when I came home but as Sania took all the care of me so both of them did not mind it much.

Zara went to the office and Shanaya to her practice.

" We should obey the elders... let's go", I picked up Sania and took her inside the bedroom, minutes later pleasent moans filled the home.

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