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Fate/illusionary speed
4.58 (40 Bewertungen)
Zusammenfassung
It was just an ordinary day, I took my brother to school, I did a few chores for my parents and while mowing the lawn I'm hit by a car. For most people that would be the end however due to a twist of Fate this is just the beginning of my new life, with a few upgrades.
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This story should be skipped. On the technical side, grammar and spelling is poor, and the author has no concept of pacing. Characterization devolves into flat plot devices and overused tropes. As for the more substantive parts of the story, this is one of those fics where going into original content is worse than the source material. The story starts with an interesting premise of the MC replacing Shirou as the one Kiritsugu saves, then proceeds to waste that promising start with a poorly thought out and rushed plot where the MC gets storybreakingly OP abilities to the point where the author starts introducing original storyline and characters and fully jumps the shark by Chapter 39. The result? Let's just say the Disney trilogy and Game of Thrones Season 8 are each better than this dumpster fire.
It has a very bad drama, because you don't separate the text into more paragraphs, in my point of view reading a lot of text and having just a few paragraphs ruins the experience of reading a fanfic for me. In the few chapters the protagonist is able to 'Create' a true magic, it is simply too exaggerated. The protagonist's interactions with Kiritsugu are very forced, it feels like you're reading an essay.
You good sir deserve a five-star rating! I haven't seen I well-done Fate fanfic in a long time, and this has all the makings of a good one! The chapters so far set a great foundation for the story, and a great foundation is half the battle won! Strive for excellence, and I wish you all the best!
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
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I want to read more and see were you plan on taking this I mean it is a fate fanfiction that doesn't have Shiro and comedy in it so I'm going to keep reading
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
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