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Autor: 0_Jordinio_0

4.83 (24 Bewertungen)

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Zusammenfassung

Kei Sota's parents were killed in the Fuyuki Fire ten years ago. Not long after after, he was picked up by a passing magus due to his potential. A few years later, Kei killed him. Now, he's a Highschool Student and gang leader and the 5th Grail War is here. Second Person POV

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0_Jordinio_0

It's time to hunt those legendary heroine booties! Let's get this party started boys and girls, but mostly boys I'm guessing if you were drawn here by that cover art. Mmmm, BB-Sakura be stacked yo!

2yr
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Daoist_Anime

I'm only writing this review to warn some people it is written in 2nd person point of view. I like the writing of the author I just find the fanfictions he writes in 2nd person weird? other than that it's good.

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2yr
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Ali_Ates_Ozbay

The only thing that can be considered bad about this story is the fact that it is in 2nd person. Your stories are awesome but I feel not only bored but also irritated when I see so much 'you' in a paragraph. It would have been far better if it was in first or third person view. ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww ww

2yr
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Hakujo

The story is good but my only issue here is the 2nd POV. Idk if I'm the only one who feels irritated and weird seeing the 'you' so many times. It's like I'm reading a story from Wattpad(many novels use 2nd POV).

2yr
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Kiloreee

nominate a Rock you deem the most beautiful one ......................................................................................................

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2yr
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PUERKO_Senpai

GREAT FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but...MORE LEMON, PLEASE AUTHOR-SAMA!!!!!!!!!!! ...................................................................................

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2yr
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Good story. Not is pov [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

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2yr
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VamPyr00

Bruuuhhhhhh! I understand this story is dead but did you have to leave it with such a teasing cliffy!? Come on! It's actually a pretty good story, even if the MC in this one is even more arrogant than your other MC's — practically to the point of hubris. Anyway, it's still really good way to pass the time; even if the ending is frustrating.

3mth
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Exp :) [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
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DaoistgD2KUM

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2yr
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Pinguinmonster

Pretty good fanfic, first time reading 2 person pov. and not minding it ....................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
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Danie123

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2yr
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ChefKoch

good Story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

0: la historia es mas entendible que fate original. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

2yr
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alessandro_mela

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2yr
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LaughingArkBuilder

One of the greatest OC Fate series Fanfiction I've ever read. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
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fatloser

the writing style is unique, i dig it. it's pretty good too . . . . mm m. . . . nm . nm . . nm . . nm. nm . . nm nm nm . . . . . . . .

2yr
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NovelMonster

Best fanfic author. Never felt like I was wasting my time reading your stuff like I do with a lot on this site. Hope that all is well and everything’s cool or as cool as it can be in your life

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