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Zedgamer

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LV 3

DaoistwgQxZL

The light novel is very well written, it has a good story so far and the characters need some work but are well made (some more than others). The biggest problem I see so far is that there arent a stable income of chapters, one week there are chapters every day, and the next we dont see any until next month. Even with all that is a good story and I am waiting to see more

LV 2

qq_qq_1060

I really like the character design in this story, the MC feels like a real person without making them feel annoying / frustrating to spectate. The events of vulnerability happen at the right time to not get in the way of the story and they do not happen often enough to make them seem like a person who can only cry and mope. They also do not seem like a soulless badass MC that has no thought put into them. Docked points cuz it kinda seems like a arifureta clone :p Docked points cuz kinda the coming to power event seems like a arifureta clone :p

LV 15

Fallen_Angel_88

THIS IS MY PERSONAL OPINION I MEAN NO DISRESPECT TOWARDS THE AUTHOR (I found the story entertaining and unique) 1) Character building- was really detailed for the mc(obviously) but could use some work on the side characters as we barely know anything about them 2) Story Progression- in my honest opinion I think that the progression was too fast there was so many time skips(not that time skips are bad) and the character development and world progression suffered due to this 3) World Building- there wasnt much of a world at all and the little progression that we got in this department was from a few comments that the mc said during her thought process 4) POV- the point of view was kinda bad as the author kept jumping between 1st and 3rd or switched to a character that we had no need to know their thought proccess for example when it went to a flash back of the King this would have worked better if this was in a slower paced novel and if the transition happened before the event happen while adding a touch of mystery by simply making it so that we didnt know who was the one speaking also when we got Graces pov that could have been used as a flashback when she was talking about when she started following 5) Combat- while we got some combat discribed it was very short and usually ended way too quick she literally went from being afraid of a slime to suddenly becoming a killing machine while there is a good reason for this in the story its not really touched apon how she learns her techniques how she practices or anything at all (while the dream showed did cause her to die a lot with the way it was discribed makes sence why she grew in a certain way it didnt help with the sword techniques or the magic manipulation) 6) Magic and skills- not much to say all we know is that there is fire, wind, water, earth, light, and darkness for magic while for skills are pretty much the same as any other type skills though the most intresting was the way that the mc used danicing as her movement technique while using her sword(tho it wasnt metioned after that one time) 7) Classes- seems to be based on your talent(example mc loves everything related to music and was able to play most instuments caused her to be a bard) 8) The System- its literally called the Bard System but is lacking theres nothing setting it apart from a regular system the only real indicator that its a bard system happened when the mc got a quest to preform in front of 4 people and for them to like it which gave better rewards then killing an S rank monster 9) Rases- this was mentioned briefly in the story that there where different races such as elves, dwarfs, beast-kin and so on but what I want to know is why the mc became the race they did as it stopped making sence when she assimilated with the plant and gained the skill photosynthesis I understood the half human half angel part at the start but then she gain the blood line of a dragon which didnt change her race until she evolved but what about the fact that SHE IS PRACTICALLY A PLANT she literally grows flowers on her

LV 2

homeofthelostqueen

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LV 2

H_Williams

Bard Iseikied system is a hilarious journey of finding the power within. There are many twists and turns that you would never expect. If you like Afuinta: from commonplace to strongest place this is a must-read. This novel truly shows that even though your week and different you can still save the world. I truly hope the author continues to update because this is a truly special piece of work.[img=recommend][img=update]

LV 15

deadhydra50

Definitely a great start for a new author.

This is a pretty good story and it’s pretty slow burn character development if you like that. I don’t really so I was skipping through the character getting more and more op. It doesn’t have that many chapters but I’ll continue reading it as time progress.

LV 10

Phantowhite

I like the story but the name should probably be changed at this point. Mc really isn't much of a bard at all. honestly, if she didn't have bard as her class no one would even remember she is one. It's just a regular isekai system. which isn't bad mind you, just kind of misleading. There's just a lot of wasted potential imo. still worth the read though if you forget about the whole bard thing

LV 2

crafty_kiwi

It was confusing at first but is gradually better the story overall is good and interesting just please don't drop it and it will be great keep up the great work

The is really good! I kinda wish that your story, that the main protagonist learns more about the world and the entire kinds of races like beastkin, monsterkin, humanoids like, etc. Hoping that she get a older girlfriend relationship or more to give her the love that she deserves the most!!

LV 5

Peryite

Ima be honest loved the story when u made it you just didn’t do it good and didn’t update it, the reason it wasn’t done good is that you completely restarted the book to only change minor details about it I think u should just stick to the story or edit the chapters not make a whole new book and tell the readers that it was edited as for updating I mean it’s obvious what I mean

LV 4

ByDefault

Noice

LV 12

Darkest_Sky_6745

I really like the book, love the music idea and the character dev. Just why is the book deleted? Also can he(she) be called an angel with all the animal parts? Other than that I love the book and hope it comes back it ended on a cliff hanger.

LV 1

Layn4

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LV 4

Colton_Todd

I really love this book and really want more of it since it has great storyline and characters the world background could ise some work but thats ok since we can learn that as we go tbh i would give five stars if it had consistent update schedule overall great read that i wish gets continued