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Essence of a Viking [Custom CYOA]
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Zusammenfassung
This is a fanfiction about the Vikings' television series. Just a harem and world invasion, conquest, and expansion story about Vikings and Norse culture.
It is centered on someone in the body of Rollo, who possesses an Essence power. Read if you're interested. The Essence leads into the multiverse by virtue of its annexation of territory.
I'm terrible at writing sex scenes and don't want to devote too much time to them, so the majority of them will never make it past the first half of a chapter. Sometimes just a few paragraphs.
The main character has the ability to improve his physical beauty and that of women he has slept with, so if you don't like this type of madness, don't read.
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You had a good background to play with but you just followed the show. The MC is a moron and just not very interesting, being OP to stupid heights from the beginning is not engaging to read. His obsession with Lagertha who is god forbid acting like a young Chinese Mistress is ugh. How others treat him including his family is very confusing, to say the least. Last but not least the author seems to be petty to criticism and has traded insults in both comments and reviews so pointing out any flaws in the story seems to trigger him.
a good story But there is one thing I don't like in the story the protagonist doesn't want to be the king because think with me you have incredible power you can become King by becoming a king and your family and your children will have more comfort you will have the authority and power to protect and support your family But instead you work hard for someone else to become king has more power authority than you who can betray you Because as he said power corrupts people and ragnar was corrupted in the original story now i I wonder if when he traveled to the multiverse and bring let's say Vikings to travel with him will Ragnar be the owner of the ship too
love it so far! hope to see more soon really like that it is from the pov of rollo instead of the more commonly seen ragnar.
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It’s my honest review. Author, u need really to rewrite some chapters. Mc - is too broken from the start. My advice is to make him stronger after time, and receive godly abilities after confronting against so called gods. Otherwise, it’s just really sad story of too broken mc playing in ants ground. Start was interesting and Rollo should had gone to England and conquering land for himself, like a true viking. Maybe afterwards, when he have children from different women, mc could confronted the gods (cuz of their plot against him).
Good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Still early but I like the direction the story is heading. OP protagonist who is pretty intelligent. Grammar and spelling is very good. Looking forward to more.
Ya so the author decided that the mc doesn’t want to be king but can’t find any reasons for it almost like he is trying to keep the plot as similar to canon as possible which is mostly true as well as he has an intrest in lagetha but refuses to go after her until the other women shows up and she loses verything. He also has a huge intrest in lagetha even after acknowledging she was to arrogant etc. he is also trying to make her out to being one of the best warriors they have when she isn’t even close. In the show she was only good not great at combat as were any shield maidens. Also when a lot of people pointed out that he wants to conquer the world but in his brothers name and his brothers descendents and how they didn’t like that instead of giving reasons asked why he should. When I did tell him why he told me “go away Mufasa” I can now see why so many dropped it as I was looking forward to his stories but from them it seems he hates making his MCs king in medieval eras for no reason.