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I the reincarnated person that everyone likes has been Reincarnated as the son of HEAVEN And have been given Wishes because of my big karma
Hello im a new author and i luv reading fanfic so i got this idea.My goal is to reach 200 chapters for this novel. Oh and point out my mistakes so that i can make the new chapter better than the other one....
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Extremely lacking in most aspects with very little details and a no character development present as far as I could tell. It felt incredibly rushed and the quality of the writing is barely mediocre. Though the idea itself has potential, and can be brought justice with more experience. You can't be successful without first experiencing failure after failure. Perseverance is key, and planning is important. To make a project like writing successful, you need to input a lot more effort, and I mean A LOT more. Then again, I'm chalking it up to inexperience and that's alright, we've all started somewhere, and maybe this is just where you start and this is your embarrassing first book before you go on publishing something greater. Every author has an embarrassing first piece writing. So while I'm giving this novel a 1 Star, I'm not wanting to discourage you, not in the least.