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Eminent Shadows:The Trilogy

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This story contains Elemental magic and mysteries to come!

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—There was a shout, and I turned to see we were surrounded by a couple dozen men dressed fully in black.

“Who are you!?” Clay called to them. I pushed forward till I was standing beside him. “We are the shadows..” I stared at them. “We have come for our revenue!” The man who was speaking had a voice that was airy, almost like he wasn’t real.

“We have done nothing to you!” I called out. “Have you not?“ there as an echo of high pitched chuckles. “You dirt, stole our master and brought him into this world before you killed his father.” I was lost. I couldn't tell what he was even talking about.

“What master? What is his name?” I asked in a loud voice, fighting to make it sound strong. “Leonurus! He is a master of shadows, and a master of darkness.”

“And how did we take him?” The man chuckled again. “You are one to talk, greedy woman, you are the one who stole him!.” He pointed at me.

“What is he talking about, is he from that other world?” I shook my head. “Your cursed spells, you try to deny it!” I stepped forward away from the huddled group behind me.

“I have never messed with the darkness!” He stared at me. “You are the one that took him away through birth.” It hit me and I flinched, the baby! “I don’t know where he is.” I finally said after a second.

PS: There are many different POVs but only one main couple in each vol

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Duke_Cordellia

The plot and development is very good, but the writing quality can be better, use a stronger verbs and cut the less redundant information. Also, id recomment splitting the paragraph into a smaller substance will make it easier to read. Last but not least, make the transition more concise and smoother transitions between the setting...... a Very good read tho. Id like to check your other works.

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