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No One 17 and Under Admitted

Wöchentlicher Energiestatus

Rank -- Power- Rangliste
Stone -- Power- Stein

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the stars are for the idea, the lack of stars is for the ****ty writing... no one....not even fucking orochimaru knew about the Ketsuryūgan, or had any knowledge about them cause they were forgotten, so how did MC end up in a lab, plus would've been better if MC was just raised in an orphanage only he knew his secret power instead of this **** that happens here....MC seems to be an idiot, the story just seems to about MC who is perverted, [read chp 2]. Also, not saying i like MC who shows their abilities but when did a pre-academy child having chunnin level chakra seem just passable, thats genius level, but here its not even impressive? [chp 2 or 3] point so many stupid **** happens its annoying...**; just saying, the Ketsuryūgan is OP, cause sasuke needed rinnegan to break genjutsu cast by it not bash, just the idea is amazing but its written quite badly...a re-write would be amazing

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