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In the vibrant and enigmatic city of Everhaven, where class systems rule, renowned for its magical intrigue and exclusive social gatherings, a series of mysterious murders have shocked the high society. Each victim was found dead in a stunning, yet cursed attire, leaving the city's finest investigators baffled and the elite fearful for their lives.
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Your story's concept seems quite interesting. Character back story and description of the world background have potential. The pace is quite comfortable to read through but just be warned that not everyone has the patience to finish a long chapter. (I'm quite envious of how you can comfortably write action-oriented storylines) My only issue is technicalities: grammar, being one of them. You can easily have your work edited. Some sentences were cut in half when they shouldn't have, others had me confused if what happened was a dialogue or an internal monologue. Keep up the goodwork.
There isn't much to say yet, as there are only 2 chapters but they are detailedly informative. The whole theme that the author went with is the cup of tea I like! The story has more to be written and there are bearly any grammatical mistakes the writing is smooth and goes well together. Information is given smoothly the words are engaging and at times I feel as if I am in the novel it selff. Your writing shows that u practically know everything going on. Buttt the long chapters for me personally get overwhelming..... But that shouldn't discourage ur hard work. Your story is uniquely entertaining and I tbh would wanna read more. So pleased update soon and ill look forward to the process:) Thanks for reading Author-shii Yours sincerely -Author nim
I love how it turned out, the synopsis was great and the 2nd chapter was also great, the writing quality is superb and the world background is interesting, it has a lot of potential to be popular for readers to see, definitely worth recommending!
Just started reading and I never had ever experienced my heart racing so fast on the intense part of the chapter, I'm loving it already. And the cover is really eye-catching, just by looking at it both at the art and the title you can instantly understand what this novel is about. You did a great job, keep up the good work!
Glad I finally fpund time to write this review. To be honest, the synopsis and cover were unique and got me interested but I wasn't able to put ot down and ai can't wait to see what will happen next The plot is interesting and will keep you at the edge of your seat. And the worldbuilding! The author's way with words really feels as though you've been transported to the sanctuary with all its futuristic technologies. Cab't wait te see more of your work!
The foundation chapters are packed with necessary information. The details on the world background is satisfactory. The pace is fast but the story does not appear to be rushed. Plot is interesting and engaging. This work has a lot of potential. Please keep updating, I want to read more!
Wow! Wow! Wow! This novel is absolute gold. The writing style is really my cup of tea and the world building was done in a way that's really understandable and will make you love the world. The characters so far are as human as can be. Very dynamic and very lovable. It's unique to see a character who actually suffers from mental trauma and stress, not just magically forgetting the trauma Ang instantly getting better. Ana's innocence is so adorable and I love seeing the world from her perspective! Although she's been through so much she still sees the beauty in the world and I think that really says something. And the fight scenes?! It kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time!!! Keep up the great work author-san. Can't wait for the next update. Ps. please don't kill off Alpha
wow ❗ this story is outstanding, really amazing, it keeps me wanting to read more and more of it, honestly Im, not a fan of these kind of novels, but this one is an exception , Im really impressed great work author, I cant wait for the next chapter