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Loving playing Internet game，cartoon，American TV shows and AC fun and Bilibili，the doorman Wu Gang was invited into a parallel universe and inserted an internet system. this is a world that full of surprises like amazing pets, unimaginably weapons, and magic potions. being hungry, he has the food creation skill. when fighting with a zombie, he is able to hide himself and go to kill the zombie from the back. his teammate is nearly dying, then the teammate has to complete die so that he can survive this person. what should a person need to do if he doesn't lack any food or clothes? Wu Gang sighs lonely and thought as a man who doesn't learn the best skill, the best equipment, and a holy beast, there is a long way to go.
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i am pretty sure this is a good book ....from the 1 percent i could understand ..and the other 99 percent that left me with a headache i am waiting until this gets an editor
The story is interesting but geez the grammer is horrendously bad I have to keep putting together words so that I can understand the sentences I'm usually not the type to ***** about grammar but this cuts the cake
A premium novel with this quality of grammar??......mehhhhh😕😕😕😕😕... Ur joking right??
The grammar is horrible, I dont understand anything I feel like losing brain cells ugh, and it is shameless to put something of this quality with locked chapters
Good story, but a horrible machine translate... pleas give this story a real translater, and reedit (and translate) the chapters............
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I am not sure this actually a book and more a random collection of words. It is pretty neat to read. Really feel the confusion from anyone with more than a few brain cells
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oh my God, what a garbage fire, I thought I found a good story, but the grammar, the sentencing, the word translation, are horrendous. it is simply unreadable.
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I have only read one chapter and the grammar is horrendous. From what I could gather from the comments it is horrendous in the later chapters too. Plus... chapters after 36 are locked... I dont know how shameless can you be to post something of this quality and put it on premium.
It seems like a good story but has serious bad spelling and alot of direct translate that means litterly nothing in English as the idioms don't match forcing you to puzzle the crude translation out. Honestly 'pig hand' is among several indirect things they mention that make no sense in English till you puzzle it out it's something like perverted hand. As well spelling has some error in the 21 pages I read so far... Grape was the last miss spelling I caught. So while Interesting enough story with a not stupid Mc, it's not really enjoyable given the amount of puzzling needed to do.. definitely not something fit for leisurely reading as it currently is.
No.........the translation is beyond bad you can barely understand it and they want coins sorry but no I understand if its rainbow turtle but this......just no get a better translation quality then I'll give coins
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This is so bad when it comes to the english and the grammar. Its unreadable. Writer either needs a better translater or a better editer. I had such a hard time understanding anything in the first chapter.