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Zusammenfassung

A man gets reborn in Young Justice with 3 wishes, see how he soars through the multiverse while having fun and growing more powerful.


The story will follow the show at first so the changes will be minimal and later everything will be different. the Mc is op from the beginning and there will be some Multiversal travel but i'm thinking about letting it be Dc only.

the Mc is a chill laid back guy but very smart and careful. He only wants to have fun and be powerful enough so no one will cause him problems. He only wish for happy and peaceful life.

He is not a Hero nor a Villain so he won't be going around saving everyone but he's not heartless or cold blooded killer either. This is a light hearted story where the Mc enjoy his life doing what he wants, there are some #sliceoflife, #romance, don't know about the #Harem but most probably. There will be fights, action, techs and magic, it won't be slow but not fast either.

i obviously don't own anything beside the Mc.
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Chapters will be 1-2 times a week it depends how long the chapter and quality is, which I'm trying to focus on but I'm new so be patient with me.

I'm trying to write at least 2.5k a chapter but i want more so don't be suprised if you have a 5k words in one chapter. It's up to my creativity.

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Kilaske

Sorry but this novel has too low of a rating for this level of writing. It's not that bad to be a 3 star. Seriously. I've read worse. Maybe not 5 star, but definitely not 3. Yes at the early chapters the writing seems a little bit confusing, but the later chapters were smooth to read. Was a little put off that MC actually was getting too close with the kids, but he did later say that it won't let him impede what he's going to do in the future. Also those saying he's being too biased and hating the League too much is the one being weird. MC doesn't really hate the League members too much; he even says that he looked up to them when he was a kid, but now that he's actually living in that world, you can kinda see where it gets a little bit hypocritical and understand MC's views. Was also getting kinda nervous when he was getting close to the doctor, but thankfully he didn't fully commit and the relationship is still okay. So again, for those who are turned off by the review and rating, give this novel a chance, since it's not that as bad as people are claiming. Those people are exaggerating.

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10mth
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_VOIDLESS_

You have started out pretty good to be honest, But the narrative is all over the place makes me feel like mc is a chaotic neutral being. But the rest is pretty much fine can't wait for more updates

11mth
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GodOfLight

The story is good, but the forced plots that the author does are starting to irritate me a little, which disappoints me, so I will give a slightly low rating this time, but will not remove the 5 star from another review

10mth
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YourDad_

What the f, man. Why this book has so many bad reviews. It's not the best there is, writing needs huge improvements - Character & story can be developed a bit more perfectly - BUT Still it's good. I don't even know how people in this platform thinks🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

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7mth
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KIKOwoods_gaming

great job so far and hope you continue to make this story.

10mth
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cfif_ybrekby

really like! completely different from others and gives variety! Usually everyone is a hero/vigilante/villain, but this one is just neutral! Also strong and smart! This is how an MC should be! The wishes are chosen very cleverly and without “inexplicable” protection, which should not be there! the pedigree of Doomsday and the Martian is simply Imba and why has no one written about it? traveling through the worlds is just the icing on the cake!

10mth
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merocamero

A good story where MC explores the world and doesn't turn into a superhero or idiotic edge lord. In fact, it's almost unique in the sense that dude simply says that he has more important things to do and just making a profit while having fun along the way.

7mth
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The_Twins_6816

did the Author quite the story I hope he didn't it is a real good story

8mth
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Ayden12g

The grammar is pretty dreadful along with having nonsensical plot points which makes it a pretty ruff read.

10mth
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GodOfLight

I liked the story and mc as well as his choice of wishes, the grammar is not super good but not super bad either, overall I liked everything but not the romance, it feels kind of forced and I don't think romance is appropriate for this story

10mth
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Darren_Carruthers

pretty good I have read this a few times and other than how short this is it is one of the good fanfics on this platform. Keep it up author

4d
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samflin

Everything about this fan-fiction is superb but updating of this fan-fiction is too slow . So please look into this matter kindly .

3mth
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LayEraser

An exellent read, too bad for the inconsistent uploads and late notes.

5mth
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Fanfiction_666616

This novel is good ,I don't know why others are rating low also hope u don't stop writing ..

6mth
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DetachedDreamer

Grammar falls apart when the MC tries to hate on heroing, the justice league, or when trying to throw shade at anyone. has a very distorted perspective of them (JL) as a whole, not comic accurate but from fanfics with authors who hate their own lives. Hes OP but plays at being some random clone under the nose of the JL. not my thing. not in this manner. ill try and keep reading and change this review if it gets better.

10mth
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TheFadedHaircut

The best dc or superhero fanfic I’ve read!!

13d
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Kinglur

I'm pleased with this story, and I hope whoever reads this gives it a chance

14d
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bikal_karki

it is very good 👍 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3mth
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AmissaVagus

It’s a good story I like it I give it 4 stars because that’s what I feel it deserves excluding biases, heads up this is a harem story

7mth
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