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Dc as a demon bet!

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Autor: Sutadasuto

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A young boy that was abused by his girlfriend is then teleported to a universe more dangerous than his girlfriend could ever be the boys and God for wishes from a Demi god and his only mission is to live his life how he wants
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By the way if you want to know how the characters gonna look he’s going to look kind of like a mix between the Lil loaded and A little bit of polo g features by the way if you do not like this please do not click on this book and also if you do not like how I do things don’t be mean just say that I could’ve done it a different way because I do not feel like all of that hate also inside of very serious situations he might or might not say but I get hoes though also skip to second chapter if it is there first is just how he died

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yokedjaguar

The idea is different I guess. But after that theirs nothing good about it. By far some of the worst grammar I've ever seen. I tried to read it but I couldn't after the 3rd chp.

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Miki_Marlo75

I can't say much the grammar lacks a lot of work the plot is loose and empty it has many gaps and there are parts that cannot even be readI can't say much the grammar lacks a lot of work the plot is loose and empty it has many gaps and there are parts that cannot even be read The idea is fine but it lacks a lot of development so far I read it and nothing caught my attention

3yr
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Thissmithy_Manga

the grammar is absolutely atrocious, apparently this guy is from 🇺🇸 but when reading its worse than mtl and he writes like a non native speaker.

3yr
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Madara_Uchika

tras wrting cant read also how ur girlfreind bully u mans a beta male cmon now but good if u cant read whatever that THING called a fanfic is

3yr
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Darwin111111

Nothing is consistent and there are elements that appear out of nowhere.---------......-.-.-.-.-..-.-.-.-.-..-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-

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