Child of Infinity in Omniverse

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Hidden_shadows

Most female leads will be mostly mature minded , not some annoying bee and ask every single question from mc and will not be completely dependent on him.

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Sleepy_head_2828

I like that it doesn't have the system stuff, a main character whose previous life is explained and how he gain his power by himself in case of getting OP power, system for free by some good old man/god.

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Hidden_shadows

Author Chan reviews In this author every female character will have their own character and goals they will grow stronger with mc and not will become a drag.

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Darnelljoe

"Most female leads will be mostly mature minded." Proceeds to have over twenty women. Cruddy grammar too. .

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Sleepy_head_2828

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DivinDragonEmperor

This review is as of chapter 15 So far the fanfic has a good story line and plot, however, the author seems to forget that there is such things as punctuation, there are virtually no commas at all, meaning entire chapters would just be a block of text where there is a lack of full stops, commas and paragraphs. Hopefully the author realises this and gets an editor or edits the chapters himself to fix these errors. But apart from this, great effort author!

Writing Quality: 2 stars - Authors Writing is really bad, his grammar is not too good either. (I'm not trying to put you down or anything but its just not good). Story Development: 1 star - Mc gets mad op powers which even a fool could become strong with, there is no reason to relate to the mc, hardly any character development. Character design: 1 star - As mentioned above there is no character development. Mc feels bland and is a flat character. Stability of updates: 3 star World background (its a fan fic so author didn't make the world) - 4 star. - Now the parts of the world the author did make like the power system and such are actually quite good but the grammar and op powers from the start ruin the novel

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Rimuru_Reader

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Devil023

Instead of Novel it looks like a long long essay. There is no conversation at all just a narration. It was a good story at the beginning but to him overpower you mold the story very badly.