Bored in Westeros

seriously in need of editing or even just proof reading from someone with a decent grasp on English. in just the first chapter there's already a rather large amount of grammatical, spelling and format mistakes. overly fast paced and goes about the story by telling you he did this, he did that and he did some other things as well. instead of actually going through the interaction with the ROB properly it's just glossed over. none of his decisions are explained or rationalised. the first 6 years of his life were completely skipped with barely a mention and all of a sudden we jump to him ruling the criminal underground out of nowhere. honestly feels less like a book and more like someone has just written out their idea for a potential book but as a monologue of the main character.