Blood Cross

LV 4

Mel_Aniv

This is wonderful! The author's touch made it become more than it should be. Kudos for that! A nice setting with nice setups of scenes made it wonderful than it initially be. More power writing and more inspirations! Good luck! 👍

LV 12

BlaccLotus

The writing is i.m.p.e.c.a.b.l.e and the action is very well written. Fresh and unique story, very good premise and interesting style of writing. A unique romance of a regal and fiesty nun and playful vampire. All was executed well and the first two chapters are very good story. So far, I like both male's and female lead's character design. The way they're introduced is enough to make me crave for more. Everything is described well as I could feel the dark atmosphere in the story and the dialogue writing is intriguing. The action is great written as I found myself immersed on it. Technical writing wise, It's almost flawless. It's shame that there are only two chapters available at the moment. Hm, if anything, I just want to say that you should find a better nun picture for the cover, just look at the cover, the nun seems to be more "Ghoul" than the vampire. Good cover will bring you more readers. Overall it's good reading experience and I'm looking forward for more chapters. Good luck to you.

LV 3

JF_Fanai

Five baby! Nothing I said would ever praise this more than what the author had in store for your eyes. Read it this is top tier guys. And by any means if you don't found this worthy for your mouth to drool over, you are just being nitpicking and biased. But more chapters, that's my only criticism.

LV 3

NakedApron

I love blow-by-blow action and this is very addicting. Quality, is epic. What can I say. At first I was a bit weirded out by the dialogues that started in paragraphs, but now I'm used to it. Is very epic. There are some weird stuff here and there, but nothing you can't fix. World background, There's a few hints and unknown words being tossed around, and I find myself very excited to see what they end up being. Character design. It's been a long time since I read about a zealous nun with a rifle, so I'm instantly hooked. Story development. Nothing much to say here for now, but I enjoyed reading the chapters. I'm sure I'll enjoy whatever the author throws at us later on. Summary Pliz read <333

LV 3

silent_walker

First of all I think you should remove the unique fonts from it. There's a few inconsistency in transition of tense. In the first chapter I think you should defined more how terrifying vampires are. And why negotiate in the first place if you can kill it with few bullets. So in my opinion the fight scene needs to be a bit more violent and well described. - good day.

LV 15

SandiBell

This Book is GRIPPING from the very first sentence! It hits hard with action and a very evil enemy! The author is totally on her A game with this one. If you are looking for an rich action/fantasy novel, look no farther. GREAT BOOK! READ IT! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 3

MasterHexer

So... It's hard to talk about characters when there are only two chapters, but they seem at least good. The flow of the story is really well done. The mood is delivered. The only problem I have is no background. I don't know where it all is happening. There are also some grammar issues. You repeat some words too close to each other. For example 'bullets, 'bullets, and more 'bullets. It's too many bullets too close to each other. Overall, it's looking very promising. Keep up the good work.

LV 1

Halfie_x

This is a really good start to what I am sure will be an amazing story. The descriptions are really vivid and the pacing is great as well. I can tell that you put a lot of effort into this book (the different fonts are a really nice touch), keep up the good work!!

LV 1

Purpl3_Noodle

Spot on! The writing is smooth, and vivid descriptions + world building make this a pleasure to read. I can't wait to see how the plot develops, I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. keep up the great work Author!

LV 2

itslikeametaphor

FIVE STARS ALREADY and there's only one chapter here! oh wow this was a lot of fun to read. Excellent writing! I'm almost envious of the way you wrote this. I've been dying to write fantasy novels but I cannot, for the life of me, figure it out but your work is really good. I'm excited to read more!