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Bleach System in World Bleach
3.17 (14 Bewertungen)
Zusammenfassung
A sergeant dies in World War III he was orphaned and was adopted by an elderly couple who died as long as he was 16 so he went to be military to do the same as his father did when he was young before retiring from the military.
(he was 5 years old and was adopted he see animes, wuxias before going to be military)
I'm doing this fanfic for fun and my English is medium
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Don’t like it. I think the other bleach novel is way better. It’s called bleach system within bleach Ignore me if you want, I’m but a humble hater Sfzfzjfzgjdkgxkgdgkxkgxkyxgkxgkxmgxmgxgmxgkxgkxkyxykxjgxktxtkxkyxkyxkyxkyxkyxgkxykxkydkyxkgxxk
I think you missed something man,it's doesn't feel right. Sometimes the sentence illogical,but don't worry atleast I think your idea is good,you still need improvement,fight ouu!
It’s a good book and I’m sad that there’s no more chapters I just hope that for some reason somehow more will appear and that ghe author stays safe
Good story but too confusing to read I give up I read more than 9 chapters and I surrender I will read it if author fix his writing problem cause if we say there are many that would be an understatement
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I just read the 1st chap and half way i zoned out so many times i read again just to get what the auther way developing the story but still didnt get the story so dont like to do hard work when relxcing , i quit
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You need a translator or a helper.. But story's interesting.,........ RgbfbgSbjvfabdjsjdjdjsjsjb jsjsjjsjsjdbsjjakskxjsjhsjsjsbsbbsbdhhs Shusjsususjdjdjsjsjskosjsjs Sijsjsjsisk
Good story but extremely hard to read (many sentences are really weird). I'm pretty sure author-san write in his native language then use google traduction to make his story.
Story is pretty good. Keep it up.Story is pretty good. Story is pretty good. Keep it up. it up.Story is pretty good. Keep it up.Story is pretty good. Keep it up.
The story is great. There were some questionable areas was found kind of confusing though. Overall, it is an excellent story. Filler words...Filler words...Filler words...Filler words...Filler words...is it at 140 words yet?...
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎
Interesting, to my library ------------------140 characters must die 140 characters must die 140 characters must die 140 characters must die 140 characters must die 140 characters must die
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I don't understand the synapsis and why is it so hard find a goob bleach fan fic. I also don't understand why almost every fan fic author is obsessed with naruto and one piece.