Ben 10: OFA

LV 1

Taranpreet_Badh

Kid got really annoying attitude chapters are way too small all the Mc interactions are bad ........................... . . . ...........................

LV 4

Helia_King

Some sentences are confusing and grammar needs work.

LV 3

MIGHTY_ALPIO

It's good and I hope you don't drop it half way I am supporting your work it's nice and new concept mc has growth not too op but can become op and writeing is not bad it's totally worth to get attention

LV 15

Patrick_hell123

I like your storytelling but it would be nice if the chapter was longer

LV 4

Rehman_Muneeb

I hope you don't drop it is really good novel i can't wait to read more this good novel