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Baby-Making System
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Dark red eyes, the shade of blood, locked into sapphire blue ones. They were tinged with lust, growing with her every move.
Kanae held her breath, not wanting to inhale the seductive scent that was oozing out of this man-wolf's body.
But before she could react, a burning palm roughly grasped her chin and her tender lips were smothered by his hungry mouth.
She let out a gasp in shock as his tongue greedily entered in, making her knees go weak. This scent of his was going to drive her crazy.
Her hands clutched at his shirt, sharp nails ripping the fabric in desperation of feeling his skin.
And then—
He pulled his lips off her, breathing heavily as he whispered into her ear, "For someone who was avoiding me, you really are acting like a b*tch in heat."
Kanae's cheeks flushed in anger, and yet she couldn't utter a single word. The need she had for him at the moment could not be suppressed by the rage building up inside.
Pulling him down by his collar, her wet lips grazed his red ear. She whispered coldly, "Shut up and open your mouth like a good dog."
His eyes grew darker, fangs popping out as he nuzzled her neck.
"That's my line."
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A/N: all the r18 scenes will mostly be in the male pov (still third person but it'll focus on what the male is feeling).
I'm new to writing smut so go easy on me :)
Smut starts from chapter 20 onwards!
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At first when I saw the name of the book I thought the book will be boring but when I started reading it I saw that the book was amazing. So don't judge a book by its cover ( and it's name )
I really like it! Most systems aren’t really my speed but you’ve managed to make it more than bearable, it’s enjoyable ❤️you’re amazing, go go go!!!
This is a job well done. I like the originality of the novel . Honestly I was sold at the synopsis 😅. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for more chapters 😍
Haha! This is one of the most different novel of this genere. The dialogues flow naturally and I love the interactions. I will point out that I got hooked as soon as I read the synopsis. Keep it up!
It's prolly one of the better and exception system original stories that you can find for many reasons. First, the english is good. Second, it written humorously and the humor isnt a slap on the enemy but the mc herself. Also, it is a rare heroine system story too. And right from the start, u get to the system story by knowing how it happens.
so lewd ;-; but... i mean... ;-; praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui praise lord yui
While this type of novel isn't really my cup of tea, it's important to note that's not for lack of well-crafted dialogue, bad flow, or anything along those lines. The story is very nicely crafted with an easily digestible writing style and nice imagery. Very nicely done. :)
This is what the pinnacle of modern literature is. Please keep going. Praise Lord KEK.Praise Lord KEK.Praise Lord KEK. Praise Lord KEK.Praise Lord KEK.Praise Lord KEK.