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When an Astronaut full of wonder from earth came to the universe where unknown can be seen everywhere until during his journey a train he has seen and a train he shall take.
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Grammar needs to be worked on and sometimes it feels like you’re speeding through things such as when he first meets the astral express. I’m pretty sure they would have questions about him and the orb he was in among some other things but you pretty much skipped right past any of that. His interactions with them at that moment just felt stale and they should have been more worried about someone who was drifting through space.
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