Zusammenfassung
The weather turned even colder after the heavy rain this evening. I looked out the window taking in the view over the town.
I am definitely going to miss Maydawn Town. I will miss the peaceful environment, my private tutors, and of course my extravagant room. It is all for the best, finally taking a step forward from my boring routine life into an interesting one [I hope].
To top it all, I am finally going to meet my Mum after all these years. Although, I am nervous and uncertain I can barely contain my excitement.
#Mystery?Surprise?Suspense? Thrill?#
It is all packed in this novel. Get your popcorn ready for this fun ride.
PS: Dear Readers, I would love to know your opinion after each chapter [there is always room for improvement this way].
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The writing quality has really improved after the second chapter, making it much more flowing and easy to read. I respect how the author improved it after getting reviewed. I feel the story background is being built carefully and slowly, so you might want to read a few chapters to understand the story, the MC's background also seems interesting. The characters are hard-working, talented, and cheerful, I liked them. I hope you can continue the story, and I'd recommend it to anyone.
I wanna thank the author for lightening my mood with this book. It's an interesting book that I wanna recommend to everyone. Keep up you are doing a good work.
I have to say I really like the story. I love your writing style and story development . its 👍
Hmm! I must say this is very beautiful..your vocabulary,your write up,the characters they are just amazing keep it up hoping to see another beautiful write up and I must say that you have a good story line it's beautiful.....
This is a really captivating story that will leave you wanting more. The characters are delightful and I really like the writing style of the author 1st person POV is my favourite. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up, author!
The introduction of the lead's background and their feelings about leaving Maydawn Town and moving on to something new adds depth to the story. It makes me curious about what the lead's life was like in Maydawn and what their new life will entail. The mention of finally meeting his mother after years of being apart also adds intrigue and raises questions about their relationship and why they were separated. Recommended!
Wow! The beginning is so mind captivating... I love the write up arrangements it's really nice. Nobody is going to start this novel without finishing it 😊 Keep up, your going places. 🔥❣️
Really nice write up. lfg!! Love how the characters come together , nice choice of words and vocabulary, going place with your book Waiting to see more from you soon
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