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I, Zatiel, Abyssal Lord, Ruler of Death and Destruction, Nightmare of Dys, have AWOKEN!!!!!.
His life contains events that can shake the universe:
-Fighting against Tiamat, Creator of Evil Dragonkind, in the first circle of hell, while billions of demons and devils butcher each other beneath them
-Start a World War against the Heavenly Race, and transform himself into a Golden Sun while he slaughters their greatest warriors, the Archangel.
-Enter the Final Gate and fight against the Outer Gods.
-Tearing the nine levels of Baator during his battles against the Prince of Evil, Asmodeus.
With his memories as a ruler of the Abyss and a Universal Existence, Zatiel will rise again.
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The story is fine nothing special. this is my experience from the frist 35 chapters. the mc is a man who died 2 times 1st time high tech world where he got his chip 2nd where he became a demon lord. He rencartenated again this time has a mage who is now trying to become strong. Characters mc strong demon man with special chip that take him from power level 1 to 50 in a single chapter, knows a lot don't need learn anything. Slave boy, was a beat up assaian boy mc found who wants to find freedom by losing it right away by joining the mc Annoying girl, speical girl who had expierment on making her very ugly untill the mc does ritual on her fixing her. World. not much given there is 3 kingdoms in the human world, and each plane has it's will.
Spoiler enthüllenBetter than the story it was based on in my opinion I liked Warlock of the Magus world but I think this stories an improved version and definitely more interesting Good job
Overall, this is your stereotypical 'System' based story where the MC relies on the 'System' as their crutch to develop and grow in power. Nevermind that the MC has reincarnated twice and have reached lofty heights in one of his previous lives. The MC is thoroughly reliant on that crutch instead of using his previous experience to get stronger, the MC is painfully immature to the point that you think he wasn't in any position by a servant in his previous lives. I cannot recommend this story despite so many 'glowing' reviews to it. Most of these reviews are just pandering and toe kissing with lack of any substance on why the story deserves its 5 Stars. You want my input? Here. Character Development : 2/5 Story Grounding : 2/5 World Building : 3/5 Sub-Plot & Arching Plot : 2/5 Conclusion: Worth the read only if you have nothing else to read. Or read if you find the story interesting to you. Seriously, leave actual reviews in Author/WebNovel staff. I am appalled that there is a distinct lack of proper reviews from the masses.
Honestly, the story was doing just great in the beginning, but you had to follow the same casual path. What do you even mean by ruler of death and destruction. This guy can't help himself but help every unfortunate soul he will meet, apparently as long as you have a strong 'Will' you are trustworthy. Really!! .do i have to remind you this a world ruled by magi and magi are known to be selfish and pragmatic beings.
The author is someone who doesn't care to improve his writing quality (grammar). Some readers are kind enough to correct some mistakes in the comment, but the author didn't event tried to change the pointed mistakes. It's normal if your english is bad. It's stupid if you don't even want to improve what you lacks. But the story is good, so if you can bear the grammar, it's worth to try.
Same thIng repeats every 100 chapters. Stale to almost non existant story building and has the same bs of I return my favors x100 and hate my enimes x100 young master slapping theme. Not worth your time, keep scrolling.
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So far I’m enjoying where the story is going and how it’s developing. However, and I cannot say this kindly. The grammar and spelling is absolute s**t. Author I would heavily recommend you edit the writing and get something like Grammarly. You’re going to lose a lot of readers by chapter 2.
I read a few chapters, but I stopped reading because the mc's personality really doesn't suit me. Because he was a demon in his previous life and now a wizard, I thought he would have a cold and selfish personality, but his personality doesn't match his experience, really strange.. in the end it's not a 100% bad book, but no try to compare with WMW, they are totally different levels.(I used a translator, so I don't know if it's right)
Spoiler enthüllenI decided to read this novel, because I actually read the "original". You could say I wanted to read a fanfiction of 'Warlock of the Magus World'. Instead I got a completely independent book that is very loosely based on the world of the prior mentioned story. This story has an old monster who actually uses his brain, but still experiences new things with an open mind, which makes for a very likeable mc. Sidecharacters are not cardboard cutouts, but get actual characterdevelopment, which allows realistic interactions and bonds. Mc is scheming and ruthless to his enemies, but amicable and open to friends, family and subordinates, which is, at least in my eyes, ideal. Worldbuilding is well done, the very bare bones are from WotMW, but everything else is original and very well thought out. At the end, if I am asked if I can recommend this story, I'd have to say: Wholeheartedly Please read this outstanding piece of fiction and decide for yourself. Have a nice day reading, folks
The beginning of the story was good, but since a girl entered the story, like Every time, the MC turns from the most dangerous demon into a person who cares about a ugly girl he has known for less than a year and there is no special relationship between them, but giving her his bloodline is something that completely angered me
This novel was very good at the start and I found something that could have been comparable to Warlock of the Magus World however the changes in the main character are very stupid and put me off. The mc was an Abyssal Demon Lord in his previous lives in which he has massacred billions and trillions of lives but 'suddenly' in this new one, he gets so angry if some random person from his clan is killed. He's supposed to be merciless and cunning, so instead of offending a highly powerful being, he should try to find ways to ally with them. Why should he care about the death or attack on a person that doesn't even affect him? This could have been an amazing story but instead, is ruined through senseless character changes, it would be much more interesting to read his life when he transmigrated into a demon of the Abyss. Hope author takes it into consideration.
I don't know if I want to read this, There isn't any negative reviews so either it's that good or deleted, I'm leading to the latter. I also read very little but can't get into it, so can someone give me a detailed also a little spoiler review in the replies. Also if you like it, tell me what you like and dislike about it and if you didn't like it, tell me what you liked about it and didn't. There's just no In-depth review just people saying "just read it, it's good". To the description to the fans base, it all seems a little child like.
It would have been perfect for me if the mc didn't have *** with his subordinate (Sofia) but to an outside instead like one night stand. It just gives very bad taste to me.😒 Specially Sofia is not an insignificant character she's one of the main characters that'll grow alongside the mc and not just side character who have only little part in the story. 😕😑
This was definitely a very good read, didn't read fully actually. Love the plot even though certain things are similar to warlock of the magus world. I've always been a huge fan of evil mc's and this novel just gave everything I needed till him taking subordinates, I don't actually mind that but him transforming the slave boy to a neo demon just totally spoils it , I don't even see the use of him , evil mc's are supposed to see self interest but this just goes on saving everyone. Author most readers love evil mc's because of their selfishness to share things with others and obviously no morals. And this guy just isn't it. That just spoiled it to me, maybe should have just taken the ezkeil as just a slave like the slave he is
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Don't be discourage because of lower audience. Most of the reader don't read until it have at least 200 chapters! :) Your time will come soon. KEEP IT UP!