Kapitel 30: Fun deal/NEW MESSAGE

I was just kidding about the 1000 hell yeahs just smth funny I wanted to do u all will be getting a new chapter ight im just havin trouble with it so I'm gonna post it by like 9 or 10 at night.This is gonna be the longest chapter I've ever written ngl I feel like it's gonna be a 7/10 but just having problems with grammar,fight scenes,POV and other stuff I might need to get someone smarter than me to proof read it and lmk what I should add or get rid of.