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A Demon Princes Rise
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A young man with the name of Eduard is thrust into the deep end of a world chock full of monsters and magic, after being forsaken by is so called Nobel family. In his fight to not only survive but to thrive He will discover the mystery's of his birth and what he truly is.
In the chapters I am currently writing there are no are 18 scenes but I do plan to add them in the future if I continue writing this. Constructive criticism and grammar advice are appreciated since I'm my own editor. if you hate my story please leave a one star review then fuck off please don't bitch for the rest of the novel.
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I found this Story by sheer luck and devoured it in a view houers. Upon realizing it hadnt any reviews jet I took the job, because it realy deserves one. The writing quality is definitely on the better site of the spectrum. I found a view errors but nothing that affacts the reading expirience, the language is fluent and over all very captivating. Please note that english is not my first language and therefore I might make qite a fiew mistakes myself. I cant write much about the stability of Updates. After the first bunch upload in the beginning we hvent got any but hope lives on ;) Story Development is definitly one of this storys main strong points. The plot is amazing with many unforseen twists and turns. It speeds up in the right places, keeps you captivated and surprises you over and over again. Really love it. Characters are well buildt at this early point in the story and i am full of anticipation how they will grow in the future. The world reasonable constructed up to this point. As our little DK hasnt traveld far and we ar not jet into politics, the hard part for logical and interesting world building is still not there but i am confident that this story will make it.