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The Alpha of the Eastern pack gave up his power for his daughter and must now learn how to parent alone in the savage wild, while looking for his dear queen, and keeping his cursed spawn safe from the realities of the world.
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I really like that it is about a pack of wolves out in nature. The descriptions of mossy rocks and wildlife is quite nice. The plot kicks in right away when Solar is exiled and finds his cub. If anything I would perhaps add a little more internal thought of Solar as he travels just to make the story line a bit clearer, and make sure not to overuse words like 'CRASH' 'BOOM' in place of actual descriptions of what's happening. All in all, the start of an interesting story!
I really love the characters! Luna is just too adorable, and you captured the innocence of a young child. I love that you gave a decent amount of background information about the traditions and the goddess. Solar needs to buck up and be a real father, but it’s great to see how much he is learning as well. I am so excited to see how their journey to find Luna’s mother will go! Great job 😊
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This novel is incredible and realistic.. Writing quality is good... Great work author👏👏👏✨✨✨Best of luck for WPC😁.
I love this book a lot so far and I really feel for Solar as a father. He gave up everything for his daughter. 5-5 Father points! The book is also very well written. The only thing I have to say is that wolf pips are not called cubs 😅🤦♀️
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I like this story! It's fast-paced, appeals to the senses, and is full of action. I wonder what happened to Sirus though. I love how descriptive the sentences are, and a few grammar and spelling tweaks here and there will make this story even better. A great addition to one's library!