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Author I like your fanfic but it lacks details in the writing, you could detail the world around the MC more, and improve the dialogues too, they are very simple and without expressions. Another thing I don't like is that your elementary school friends are so committed, they are from the soccer club and are not specific to volleyball, they just help Hinata train a little, nothing special. To be honest, there is a lot to improve, so far the fanfic is rated 7/10 or 6.5/10, the fanfic does not give the feeling of haikyu but I will support and believe that the author will improve.
Its amazing how the author likes to give us some pretty funny dialogues to break the caotic moments in the games, I love that. Just some personal advice, try to write more cliff hangers, for me its amazing. THANKS!
very good fic, love to see Hinata with some buffs, the author is good at writing exciting games and very funny dialogues. THANKS FOR THE CHAPTERS KEEP GOING BRO DONT DROP!
I wanted to read Hinata getting good at receives and serves, before the start of inter-high school, maybe even mastering the Boom jump, but you increased Hinata's height to 6'2'' from 5'3'', it is an interesting concept of Hinata not being limited by his height but you now have to factor somethings: increased weight affecting his jumping prowess, increased hitting/spiking power, the burden of jumping on his legs increased do to increased weight (like taiga from Kuroko no Basket), etc. P.S. I would like to read a Tanaka Ryunosuke fanfic where MC is reincarnated and starts to train with the same intensity and love as Kageyama Tobio towards volleyball. (You know practicing jump serves, receives, and different spikes (self-time difference, flexible wrist, straight, cut shots), etc.) and not just be a budget Bokuto. so if anyone knows of such a fic please recommend.
Dude this is too good for me, just keep writing so I hope you can make it to the end.
Fun fanfic, the person who enters Hinata's body isn't an idiot, and the premise of starting before high school seems fun to me!
The beginning is really nice, I highly recommend it for those who enjoy volleyball... I hope it continues at the same level of writing in the future.
I hope you won't drop this it's really good and webnovel needs more Haikyuu fics. Highly recommended to people who see this review.
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Author I like your fanfic but it lacks details in the writing, you could detail the world around the MC more, and improve the dialogues too, they are very simple and without expressions. Another thing I don't like is that your elementary school friends are so committed, they are from the soccer club and are not specific to volleyball, they just help Hinata train a little, nothing special. To be honest, there is a lot to improve, so far the fanfic is rated 7/10 or 6.5/10, the fanfic does not give the feeling of haikyu but I will support and believe that the author will improve.
Its amazing how the author likes to give us some pretty funny dialogues to break the caotic moments in the games, I love that. Just some personal advice, try to write more cliff hangers, for me its amazing. THANKS!
very good fic, love to see Hinata with some buffs, the author is good at writing exciting games and very funny dialogues. THANKS FOR THE CHAPTERS KEEP GOING BRO DONT DROP!
I wanted to read Hinata getting good at receives and serves, before the start of inter-high school, maybe even mastering the Boom jump, but you increased Hinata's height to 6'2'' from 5'3'', it is an interesting concept of Hinata not being limited by his height but you now have to factor somethings: increased weight affecting his jumping prowess, increased hitting/spiking power, the burden of jumping on his legs increased do to increased weight (like taiga from Kuroko no Basket), etc. P.S. I would like to read a Tanaka Ryunosuke fanfic where MC is reincarnated and starts to train with the same intensity and love as Kageyama Tobio towards volleyball. (You know practicing jump serves, receives, and different spikes (self-time difference, flexible wrist, straight, cut shots), etc.) and not just be a budget Bokuto. so if anyone knows of such a fic please recommend.
Dude this is too good for me, just keep writing so I hope you can make it to the end.
Fun fanfic, the person who enters Hinata's body isn't an idiot, and the premise of starting before high school seems fun to me!
The beginning is really nice, I highly recommend it for those who enjoy volleyball... I hope it continues at the same level of writing in the future.
I hope you won't drop this it's really good and webnovel needs more Haikyuu fics. Highly recommended to people who see this review.
Хорошая история, как и сказал один из обзорщиков – по Haikyuu такого мало 👍