What is this Dimensional Chat???

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MARLENE_ANGEL

AUTHOR ADD HER IN THE MC HAREM...GHISLAINE FROM MUSHOKU TENSEI,.,,CMON AUTHOR YOUR NOT DUMB THIS IS HERAM NOVEL,THIS NOVLE HAS POTENTIAL FOR A GREAT MULTIVERSE STORY ..AUTHOR DO NOT FxUxCxK THIS NOVEL WITH BORING SOLO HERO STORY AND DESTROY OUR HOPES AND DREAMS.

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Coala_Voador

supporting because it is a chat group, I will come back for another review when I read 30 chapters[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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fakeDarkestknight2

let help him to cook his story ...seem i actually want funny mc ...not edge lord bullshit dude who love to cuck Issei (seem i bored with it)

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Panto_Dapur

Bagus min, kalo bisa jangan harem, tapi kalo kebelet harem haremnya jangan banyak-banyak kayak 2 atau 3 cewek aja biar biar biar biar biar biar...

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Theory18

don't drop it author, [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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fakeDarkestknight2

i do this seem is few indo Made group chat fanfic....and also my saddy to certain author who Made story of Isekai with end...all he happen just dream when him got coma

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Tommy_Obert

Honestly, I love the story itself. The fact that I'm still staying with it after the confusion with the side story updates making finding chapters harder says something .

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palkondasmu

the member of chat group was a bit generic and seems bland, aside from that there's not much to say. hope you write some more chapters so I could gave more detailed review

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Coala_Voador

Currently 27 chapters, some facts 1 He is from India 2 He has a "longinus" which is the fatalis from Monter hunter 3 His girlfriend is a yandere (Kiyohime Fate). 4 He has the Stand The Word I honestly liked the parts where he is in the world of DXD more than the trips to other worlds so far. About the personality of the protagonist, he is not a simp or a pervert, I think he is very cheerful, I don't know how to explain his personality much, I don't dislike him but I also can't like him I like the idea of ​​him being religious and not being Christian and being in the DXD anime, so far he hasn't shown any interest in reincarnating as a demon, and I don't think he will either, he even refused Irias' offer to become her pawn. Points I don't like but that's my personal opinion 1 Fatalis' personality. I was expecting an arrogant personality and refusal to lend his power to the protagonist, but Fatalis acts more like a close friend who keeps teasing you. 2 I don't like yanderes. It's a good and different read overall, I intend to follow it and hope it doesn't fall apart. 3 Sometimes I don't know if he knows the plot of DxD or not, for example there is an interrogation scene with Raynere where he asks her her objective and she says it was Kokabiel's order then he says "Kokabiel huh. That loudmouthed fool from cannon. Why does he want a war" but he already knows about Rias' wedding or about Asia, so he has knowledge of the canon so he gets confused

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SarukidoRen

Hey bud, it's ya boi, Saul, your follower of this fic of this remake, from the WP community. this is my honest review of your ff, just keep your pace of this fic. Have a great day bud. Peace.

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Skaviouz

Are many ideas from other fanfics? At first I thought this might be stolen, but when that scene of Esdeath was in Konoha, she didn't do anything special towards Naruto like I thought she was going to like I've read in another fanfic where Esdeath and Jiraiya are chat group members and there is a group mission for Konoha Crush. Then there was that fight against the Yeti with Spider-man and Esdeath, and now Spider-man summoned a servant... I feel that I've read this fanfiction before already, but some parts are different or modified?

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Xjzhgxjg_Nuocjgcyk_1607

God job bro,gua suka tulisan fanfic mu ini,untuk rating jangan di terlalu di pikirkan,aku hanya terlalu lelah dengan dunia Naruto yang kau masuk kan ke obrolan group,kita tau sendiri berapa banyak fanfic Naruto di situs ini [img=More pls][img=More pls],selain itu bagus semua

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Felhavon

Great story so far! Definitely has a unique taste with him keeping to his religion. Make sure you're prepared for some shounen cringe though, MC seems to have a flair for fun drama.