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Es 5 estrellas por opinión personal, la verdad es que la historia es muy completa y se ve que el autor hizo su tarea, no se sienten agujeros muy obvios, la verdad es que el único problema es que son muy cortos los capítulos, saludos autor
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I enjoyed the novel before the rewrite; at least the main character had some personality. However, in this rewrite, I miss the original version. The MC feels bland, almost like a background character. The restaurant system is heavily underutilized, and while the chapters are longer, it feels like the novel isn’t progressing anywhere. The MC has been heavily nerfed compared to the original version. Overall, the rewrite is boring as hell to read and a waste of hours of your life. It doesn’t give you that dopamine rush from reading something enjoyable.
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La historis esta bien peeeeeeeeroooo el protagonista no me gusta no se porque ("tal ves porque solo tiene potencial" como dicen)
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It is like crack. How many authors try the multiverse angle and drop after a couple of chapters? Countless. This work is a gem. It juggles a plethora of verses with respect and love for them. Great job!
Uhh for some reason the old one seemed WAAAAAAAY better? The writing now just honestly how to say this nicely? Sucks. And corney as hell. Hugging Sakura and all that. Come on now.
I honestly preferred the old one. The MC in this one is like a side character imo.
Sin duda es un muy buen fic, aun mas considerando que es un crossover masivo. Si tuviera que poner una queja, o algo negativo seria que, quizas al querer avanzar con la historia se han apurado varias posibles interacciones que serian interesantes, por ejemplo Kisuke deberia haber tenido algun tipo de reaccion ante Ainz que es un no-muerto, ya que el es un shinigami, un ser que proteje el ciclo natural de las almas
One of the best I have been reading lately. I wish there would be more update. I am at p@treon. Love author. Best wishes. [img=strong][img=thinking][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Не пишите плохие отзывы, автор опять начнет себя плохо чувствовать от плохих комментариев и удалит работу чтобы начать ее же переписывать на fanfiction, чтобы через год начать переписывать ее уже здесь ещё раз... Переписывая те же главы дробя из на части ради камней.... 🤡🤡🤡
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Unique storyline. not usually a fan of multiple reincarnators but so far its working out. MC is interesting and the mashed of multiple stories has meshed well so far. Keep it up.
The starting chapters were a bit rough, to the point that they felt completely different from what I initially expected. It wasn’t bad, per se, but the MC came across as too much of a side character, lacking any standout traits or a unique personality imo. That said, it’s understandable for the MC to be overshadowed by others early on, given that he’s still weak and hasn’t gained any powers. Based on my observations, the archetype of the MC here is a neutral good type, with some semi traits of a Japanese light novel protagonist. So, don’t expect an MC who’s out to slaughter everything that offends him. Thankfully I've been seeing character development from him as of 30+ chapter and expect more to come. Also, much luv to ur other fic.
Very nice story, chill and relax. Been stressed for a while now and this story is just on time😁😁
This is one of the most well paced fan fictions that I have read in recent memory. The writing is not so slow that it would become boring, yet not so fast that it would cause someone to drop it after reading only a couple of chapters. The world background of the MC is vast and the powers are well balanced, which is very hard to find these days. The best thing is that it is not boring!
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This was a great chapter for all i can say I just want to say that author please don't add Rias Gremory to the harem because in most of the Fanfictions the authors have made her a part of the harem ,so I would like to see a change in this Fanfic
I read the original, so I’m glad it’s back. I like the way the characters interact with each other, especially when they’re crossing worlds. Keep up the great work!
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Es 5 estrellas por opinión personal, la verdad es que la historia es muy completa y se ve que el autor hizo su tarea, no se sienten agujeros muy obvios, la verdad es que el único problema es que son muy cortos los capítulos, saludos autor
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I enjoyed the novel before the rewrite; at least the main character had some personality. However, in this rewrite, I miss the original version. The MC feels bland, almost like a background character. The restaurant system is heavily underutilized, and while the chapters are longer, it feels like the novel isn’t progressing anywhere. The MC has been heavily nerfed compared to the original version. Overall, the rewrite is boring as hell to read and a waste of hours of your life. It doesn’t give you that dopamine rush from reading something enjoyable.
Я надеюсь что ты не забросишь этот фанфик)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
La historis esta bien peeeeeeeeroooo el protagonista no me gusta no se porque ("tal ves porque solo tiene potencial" como dicen)
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It is like crack. How many authors try the multiverse angle and drop after a couple of chapters? Countless. This work is a gem. It juggles a plethora of verses with respect and love for them. Great job!
Uhh for some reason the old one seemed WAAAAAAAY better? The writing now just honestly how to say this nicely? Sucks. And corney as hell. Hugging Sakura and all that. Come on now.
I honestly preferred the old one. The MC in this one is like a side character imo.
Sin duda es un muy buen fic, aun mas considerando que es un crossover masivo. Si tuviera que poner una queja, o algo negativo seria que, quizas al querer avanzar con la historia se han apurado varias posibles interacciones que serian interesantes, por ejemplo Kisuke deberia haber tenido algun tipo de reaccion ante Ainz que es un no-muerto, ya que el es un shinigami, un ser que proteje el ciclo natural de las almas
One of the best I have been reading lately. I wish there would be more update. I am at p@treon. Love author. Best wishes. [img=strong][img=thinking][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Не пишите плохие отзывы, автор опять начнет себя плохо чувствовать от плохих комментариев и удалит работу чтобы начать ее же переписывать на fanfiction, чтобы через год начать переписывать ее уже здесь ещё раз... Переписывая те же главы дробя из на части ради камней.... 🤡🤡🤡
Perfect SOL, concept, plot and action😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳😏😏😏🥶🥶🥶🥶😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄😃😃😃😃😀😀😀😀😇😇😇😇🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😉😉😉😉😌😌😌😌😌
Unique storyline. not usually a fan of multiple reincarnators but so far its working out. MC is interesting and the mashed of multiple stories has meshed well so far. Keep it up.
The starting chapters were a bit rough, to the point that they felt completely different from what I initially expected. It wasn’t bad, per se, but the MC came across as too much of a side character, lacking any standout traits or a unique personality imo. That said, it’s understandable for the MC to be overshadowed by others early on, given that he’s still weak and hasn’t gained any powers. Based on my observations, the archetype of the MC here is a neutral good type, with some semi traits of a Japanese light novel protagonist. So, don’t expect an MC who’s out to slaughter everything that offends him. Thankfully I've been seeing character development from him as of 30+ chapter and expect more to come. Also, much luv to ur other fic.
Very nice story, chill and relax. Been stressed for a while now and this story is just on time😁😁
This is one of the most well paced fan fictions that I have read in recent memory. The writing is not so slow that it would become boring, yet not so fast that it would cause someone to drop it after reading only a couple of chapters. The world background of the MC is vast and the powers are well balanced, which is very hard to find these days. The best thing is that it is not boring!
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This was a great chapter for all i can say I just want to say that author please don't add Rias Gremory to the harem because in most of the Fanfictions the authors have made her a part of the harem ,so I would like to see a change in this Fanfic
I read the original, so I’m glad it’s back. I like the way the characters interact with each other, especially when they’re crossing worlds. Keep up the great work!
It's very good story 💯✨✨✨✨✨ . Bnaj dbwnsmsnsndndm wmsnsndnd ndndbdnsnsnsnndndn no jnwnsnsnsnsnsnsnsnjejsbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbsnsnsnsndndndndndnnd