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when you turn off your brain then its okay to read this novel. Honestly the grammar and the translation is just horrible. Idk how this is published.
3.8 i'd give the writing quality more than just 3 stars if there wasn't snippets of Chinese (untranslated) in it. sometimes the mc is referred to as "Wu", sometimes the techniques like red and blue are "He" and "Cang" respectively. . as for updates? currently its obviously good, considering its only been out for like 9 days. and there are currently 50 chapters. (I'm at 30) . story development... at chapter 30 the mc is 5 years old and already graduated from academy but that doesn't really bother me since there'll probably be some time-skip or something (just a guess). . character design is alright I suppose. he isn't really sasukes twin but instead the middle brother or at least acts it. itachi is like 10 I think considering its said to be 3 years from massacre. satoru(mc) being 5, sasuke 3(?). i could be wrong about it and sasuke could be 5 too and I just missed something. mc's personality is pretty much gojo's but its not really that bad to me. oh yes, there's a system too but its not a bad one, not controlling. mc looks like gojo. . world background is a little iffy tbh. i had seen a paragraph comment where the author(publisher/translator) had called it an AU so some things might be more different than canon. orochimaru is in konoha still. some things are a bit off like how he is supposedly sasuke's twin yet it doesn't really seem like they are twins.. like at all. hmm... as for other things? its alright from what I can tell, nothing else seems to be off and it all seems to be mostly correct for the naruto world. . overall? its an alright binge read or to just burn some boredom, nothing amazing but its cool.
when you turn off your brain then its okay to read this novel. Honestly the grammar and the translation is just horrible. Idk how this is published.
3.8 i'd give the writing quality more than just 3 stars if there wasn't snippets of Chinese (untranslated) in it. sometimes the mc is referred to as "Wu", sometimes the techniques like red and blue are "He" and "Cang" respectively. . as for updates? currently its obviously good, considering its only been out for like 9 days. and there are currently 50 chapters. (I'm at 30) . story development... at chapter 30 the mc is 5 years old and already graduated from academy but that doesn't really bother me since there'll probably be some time-skip or something (just a guess). . character design is alright I suppose. he isn't really sasukes twin but instead the middle brother or at least acts it. itachi is like 10 I think considering its said to be 3 years from massacre. satoru(mc) being 5, sasuke 3(?). i could be wrong about it and sasuke could be 5 too and I just missed something. mc's personality is pretty much gojo's but its not really that bad to me. oh yes, there's a system too but its not a bad one, not controlling. mc looks like gojo. . world background is a little iffy tbh. i had seen a paragraph comment where the author(publisher/translator) had called it an AU so some things might be more different than canon. orochimaru is in konoha still. some things are a bit off like how he is supposedly sasuke's twin yet it doesn't really seem like they are twins.. like at all. hmm... as for other things? its alright from what I can tell, nothing else seems to be off and it all seems to be mostly correct for the naruto world. . overall? its an alright binge read or to just burn some boredom, nothing amazing but its cool.
Absolute gold, Satoru is hilarious even when he is purposefully annoying people. 😂