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I'll put everything on 3 for now as the story is still starting and I'm raring to see where it takes you. Btw I'm the same dude that left a review on ffnet. But to add to what you said, the mc is gonna be a combination of Barkley, Draymond, and Rodman. Post-moves and rebounding is out of the question, he's gonna dominate. Rodman was a 7 time All defensive, Draymond was 8 time, Barkley wasn't a slouch on that end either. But some parts of Draymond's game that I want to just point out, it's up to you if you incorporate but Draymond was actually a good playmaker, in the way the Warriors used him as the center of offense, Draymond can pass the ball onto anyone out on the three point line which was heavily used in Warriors offense for Klay and Steph. Dray in his prime had a jumper like Barkley and he could throw a few threes too. Not saying he'd make all of it, but he'd land enough to keep the defense honest on the other team. So maybe as a future growth for the mc he could develop these parts of Barkley and Draymond's game to better help his team.
Hi! This is my first time writing fanfiction, but I’ve been a reader for many years. I hope you enjoy my take on this story! I felt like there weren’t many Kuroko no Basket fics out there, so I decided to give it a shot. With my background as a pro (second highest so it ain't shit), varsity basketball, watching the anime I thought I might have a unique perspective to share. That said, I’d appreciate it if you could take this story with a grain of salt. English isn’t my first language, and I also have dyslexia, so there might be some errors here and there. I’m always open to constructive feedback, though, and I’d love to hear your thoughts!
I don't know how you want to make the plot if you start from junior high but not from teiko, if you can't beat teiko at all it will annoy the general reader. But if MC beats them, then in high school MC should have no trouble at all to win against Gom, that would be boring, if you make MC have trouble to fight, that's a damn nerf
I'll put everything on 3 for now as the story is still starting and I'm raring to see where it takes you. Btw I'm the same dude that left a review on ffnet. But to add to what you said, the mc is gonna be a combination of Barkley, Draymond, and Rodman. Post-moves and rebounding is out of the question, he's gonna dominate. Rodman was a 7 time All defensive, Draymond was 8 time, Barkley wasn't a slouch on that end either. But some parts of Draymond's game that I want to just point out, it's up to you if you incorporate but Draymond was actually a good playmaker, in the way the Warriors used him as the center of offense, Draymond can pass the ball onto anyone out on the three point line which was heavily used in Warriors offense for Klay and Steph. Dray in his prime had a jumper like Barkley and he could throw a few threes too. Not saying he'd make all of it, but he'd land enough to keep the defense honest on the other team. So maybe as a future growth for the mc he could develop these parts of Barkley and Draymond's game to better help his team.
Hi! This is my first time writing fanfiction, but I’ve been a reader for many years. I hope you enjoy my take on this story! I felt like there weren’t many Kuroko no Basket fics out there, so I decided to give it a shot. With my background as a pro (second highest so it ain't shit), varsity basketball, watching the anime I thought I might have a unique perspective to share. That said, I’d appreciate it if you could take this story with a grain of salt. English isn’t my first language, and I also have dyslexia, so there might be some errors here and there. I’m always open to constructive feedback, though, and I’d love to hear your thoughts!
I don't know how you want to make the plot if you start from junior high but not from teiko, if you can't beat teiko at all it will annoy the general reader. But if MC beats them, then in high school MC should have no trouble at all to win against Gom, that would be boring, if you make MC have trouble to fight, that's a damn nerf