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I Love Date A live [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
It's not a masterpiece, but it's ok, it's entertaining and it amuses me, the author wants to try to do something out of the conventional in DxD fanfics (which is just putting the main character to solve Rias problems) here the main character (Aiden) is alone with his group (the Date A Live girls) and is building relationships with other characters ( like the Vali team, or the Phenex house) so for now I really like it, I hope this story will be completed, and author please add Mio to the group.
Very good, the Date a Live girls are in the harem so that buys me completely, although I wish you'd put Ingvild in the harem as well. I also liked the idea of artificial Sacred Gears with the spirits at the core.
Quite good and entertaining. The author manages to connect several worlds, but not with the typical quest system or anything like that; simply, the protagonist jumps to other worlds randomly. So far he's only made it to two (DxD and the Isekai on the phone). Truth be told, the story is good and has potential for improvement, but hey, the author is a beginner, so it's understandable. Plus, the protagonist has the powers and the Date A Live girls, which has me completely sold.
I have read till chapter 22, and while I did like it I must say that the promised slice of life, is nowhere to be seen till now. I must also say that the Author have a problem with details. It is nothing mayor but it does makes the storyline move chaotically sometimes and even more so with the unspecified time skip of unknown timeframes. Also I had quite the good distraction with this story so far, but the approach is quite rushed with the fighting and the romantic parts. It seems like the author wanted to finish them at the moment they start. Well anyway, I must say that while entertaining the story need a bot more polishing in the writing structure, details about things whether that may be object description or fight scenes, and a more slow approach to the romantic love life between mc and the spirits. Thanks for the fic, hope you continue to polish you writing skills in the future.
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broooooo the story intro is making me so excited, i want to wait till at least 50 chapters but this is so hard, no pressure man but if this messes up i will be extremely disappointed.
Overall so far, it's like if dxd was written with the characters having some personality; as opposed to where other authors write dxd where the characters have single digit IQ. The author added a nice touch by taking a different route into the dxd world than usual. It added some depth to characters that are usually neglected or pushed aside in dxd. The only real issue with the story is the pacing and jumble of characters that's been attacted to the protagonist from the start. It makes for a confusing and albeit annoying read when the plot is held in place by the already large inclusion of his harem, randomly chatting nonsense. There was a lack of character development for them, and they more or less are not placed well into the structure of the story. They're attached to the MC, have been around basically 100 years; the reader has really no idea what's going on with them beyond the massive random chat dumps from them. In my opinion, it really destroys the potential of creating links and relationships between other characters, as it's taking multiple chapters to move even a simple meeting between the MC and a dxd character. This would be fine if there was 2000 chapters or something, but moving at the current pace of the story, you'd probably expect any plot development in a few years at best. Again though, it's a pleasant start author, and it is nice to see that you've developed routes people don't usually take for dxd. a
Very good... I mean, I won't lie to you, it's cliché, but what fanfic isn't cliché? There will only be two or three... Anyway I love Date A Live so I'm glad to read about it.
It's not the best I've read but it's ok , what else do you look for in a fanfic seriously, the writing is decent and the story progresses with each chapter, in short it's ok, it's not a masterpiece but it's good, period.
Really good. Author translates from his original language to english using chatgpt and editing. Its honestly waaaay better than most novels here in webnovel. I quite like how things are going but I would like him to write some lemons and show more intimate acts with the girls.
This is a good novel, I'll read it if I can after the highschool DXD world, I hope to go to Fate/Grand Order...if possible.😞😞😞
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Good novel but not the best. Author 100 years means MC has braincells so you actually need to write like his a human with actual intelligence. Not like a naive idiot like issei like bro??? Why else so you think they say wisdom comes with age??? But maybe the MC is more like Hunter Biden and never learns??? Either way author I think u nerfed the MC's IQ so much that you ruined the quick development part MC needs to act like he lived "100" years like the devil's in DXD they act the way u would expect a long loved figure too do so.
Please dont drop this Fanfic Its way too Good to be drop[img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
The writing is decent—not amazing, but not terrible either. One of the main issues is the frequent use of time skips. It’s not the concept of time skips that’s the problem, but how often they occur without warning. This makes it confusing to follow the timeline, as it’s unclear whether months or years have passed. Based on the title, The Day-to-Day Life of Sephiroth, I expected more of a slice-of-life focus. However, the poorly timed skips take away from that experience. For example, one moment he’s planning a date with a girl, and in the next, two more girls are introduced, and they’re already very close to him. The author tends to skip over the moments that truly capture the essence of a slice-of-life story, leaving readers feeling disconnected from the narrative.
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I've not read it yet 'cause i have a question, does the MC act like someone who is more than 100 yrs old? someone who spent a "century" alive fighting?
Great action and character dialogue but the future plans of building a faction ain't my cup of tea
Honest Review The story feels rushed overall, and it often skips over crucial details that would make the scenes more engaging. For example, the author introduces elements like flames or swords but doesn’t describe them in any meaningful way. It’s not enough to just say, flames appeared or a sword appeared at his waist. Take the time to paint a picture for the reader. For instance, are the flames roaring with heat, flickering in shades of crimson and gold, or casting shadows that dance across the battlefield? Is the sword sleek and polished, with intricate carvings along its hilt, or does it have a rugged, battle-worn appearance that tells a story of countless battles? These small details create immersion. The same issue applies to the fights—they’re too short and lack proper buildup or choreography. Action sequences need to feel dynamic, with clear descriptions of movements and the emotional intensity of the moment. Instead, the fights often come across as abrupt and underwhelming. And the dialogue during these scenes? It’s repetitive and drags the pace down. A good fight should seamlessly blend action and dialogue, with each enhancing the other, rather than interrupting the flow. Overall, the story could be much more compelling with better pacing, richer descriptions, and more thoughtful integration of action and dialogue. Right now, it feels like a first draft with a lot of untapped potential.
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Whats the untranlated name of the novel or the name of the author i want to read the raw
I Love Date A live [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
It's not a masterpiece, but it's ok, it's entertaining and it amuses me, the author wants to try to do something out of the conventional in DxD fanfics (which is just putting the main character to solve Rias problems) here the main character (Aiden) is alone with his group (the Date A Live girls) and is building relationships with other characters ( like the Vali team, or the Phenex house) so for now I really like it, I hope this story will be completed, and author please add Mio to the group.
Very good, the Date a Live girls are in the harem so that buys me completely, although I wish you'd put Ingvild in the harem as well. I also liked the idea of artificial Sacred Gears with the spirits at the core.
Quite good and entertaining. The author manages to connect several worlds, but not with the typical quest system or anything like that; simply, the protagonist jumps to other worlds randomly. So far he's only made it to two (DxD and the Isekai on the phone). Truth be told, the story is good and has potential for improvement, but hey, the author is a beginner, so it's understandable. Plus, the protagonist has the powers and the Date A Live girls, which has me completely sold.
I have read till chapter 22, and while I did like it I must say that the promised slice of life, is nowhere to be seen till now. I must also say that the Author have a problem with details. It is nothing mayor but it does makes the storyline move chaotically sometimes and even more so with the unspecified time skip of unknown timeframes. Also I had quite the good distraction with this story so far, but the approach is quite rushed with the fighting and the romantic parts. It seems like the author wanted to finish them at the moment they start. Well anyway, I must say that while entertaining the story need a bot more polishing in the writing structure, details about things whether that may be object description or fight scenes, and a more slow approach to the romantic love life between mc and the spirits. Thanks for the fic, hope you continue to polish you writing skills in the future.
Spoiler enthüllen broooooo the story intro is making me so excited, i want to wait till at least 50 chapters but this is so hard, no pressure man but if this messes up i will be extremely disappointed.
Overall so far, it's like if dxd was written with the characters having some personality; as opposed to where other authors write dxd where the characters have single digit IQ. The author added a nice touch by taking a different route into the dxd world than usual. It added some depth to characters that are usually neglected or pushed aside in dxd. The only real issue with the story is the pacing and jumble of characters that's been attacted to the protagonist from the start. It makes for a confusing and albeit annoying read when the plot is held in place by the already large inclusion of his harem, randomly chatting nonsense. There was a lack of character development for them, and they more or less are not placed well into the structure of the story. They're attached to the MC, have been around basically 100 years; the reader has really no idea what's going on with them beyond the massive random chat dumps from them. In my opinion, it really destroys the potential of creating links and relationships between other characters, as it's taking multiple chapters to move even a simple meeting between the MC and a dxd character. This would be fine if there was 2000 chapters or something, but moving at the current pace of the story, you'd probably expect any plot development in a few years at best. Again though, it's a pleasant start author, and it is nice to see that you've developed routes people don't usually take for dxd. a
Very good... I mean, I won't lie to you, it's cliché, but what fanfic isn't cliché? There will only be two or three... Anyway I love Date A Live so I'm glad to read about it.
It's not the best I've read but it's ok , what else do you look for in a fanfic seriously, the writing is decent and the story progresses with each chapter, in short it's ok, it's not a masterpiece but it's good, period.
Really good. Author translates from his original language to english using chatgpt and editing. Its honestly waaaay better than most novels here in webnovel. I quite like how things are going but I would like him to write some lemons and show more intimate acts with the girls.
This is a good novel, I'll read it if I can after the highschool DXD world, I hope to go to Fate/Grand Order...if possible.😞😞😞
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Good novel but not the best. Author 100 years means MC has braincells so you actually need to write like his a human with actual intelligence. Not like a naive idiot like issei like bro??? Why else so you think they say wisdom comes with age??? But maybe the MC is more like Hunter Biden and never learns??? Either way author I think u nerfed the MC's IQ so much that you ruined the quick development part MC needs to act like he lived "100" years like the devil's in DXD they act the way u would expect a long loved figure too do so.
Please dont drop this Fanfic Its way too Good to be drop[img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
The writing is decent—not amazing, but not terrible either. One of the main issues is the frequent use of time skips. It’s not the concept of time skips that’s the problem, but how often they occur without warning. This makes it confusing to follow the timeline, as it’s unclear whether months or years have passed. Based on the title, The Day-to-Day Life of Sephiroth, I expected more of a slice-of-life focus. However, the poorly timed skips take away from that experience. For example, one moment he’s planning a date with a girl, and in the next, two more girls are introduced, and they’re already very close to him. The author tends to skip over the moments that truly capture the essence of a slice-of-life story, leaving readers feeling disconnected from the narrative.
Termasuk fanfic terbaik yang pernah saya baca, tentang kehidupan sehari-hari yang santai di padukan dengan beberapa pertempuran dan pengembangan bisnis
I've not read it yet 'cause i have a question, does the MC act like someone who is more than 100 yrs old? someone who spent a "century" alive fighting?
Great action and character dialogue but the future plans of building a faction ain't my cup of tea
Honest Review The story feels rushed overall, and it often skips over crucial details that would make the scenes more engaging. For example, the author introduces elements like flames or swords but doesn’t describe them in any meaningful way. It’s not enough to just say, flames appeared or a sword appeared at his waist. Take the time to paint a picture for the reader. For instance, are the flames roaring with heat, flickering in shades of crimson and gold, or casting shadows that dance across the battlefield? Is the sword sleek and polished, with intricate carvings along its hilt, or does it have a rugged, battle-worn appearance that tells a story of countless battles? These small details create immersion. The same issue applies to the fights—they’re too short and lack proper buildup or choreography. Action sequences need to feel dynamic, with clear descriptions of movements and the emotional intensity of the moment. Instead, the fights often come across as abrupt and underwhelming. And the dialogue during these scenes? It’s repetitive and drags the pace down. A good fight should seamlessly blend action and dialogue, with each enhancing the other, rather than interrupting the flow. Overall, the story could be much more compelling with better pacing, richer descriptions, and more thoughtful integration of action and dialogue. Right now, it feels like a first draft with a lot of untapped potential.
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just......bad