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A story with an extremely good translation and updating stability Story: can be kinda slow for some people more than 80 chapters if im not wrong were just spent in belobog which lead to extremely good world building as the story in belobog turned out completely different with a completely different build up towards the finale Characters: let’s talk about venti the mc of the story he takes a semi backstage role where he doesn’t take all attention and spotlight from other characters though he can while not completely standing in the backstage while when he acts he absolutely takes full control of the stage Romance: not to my liking though i know some people like this kinda of romance where when venti meets a girl and there’s a 50/50 chance she unintentionally falls for “him” though it doesn’t feel forced In my opinion it’s a very good story not the best but really good one
Really good story translation and the fact that venti is the main character is peak first time seeing venti as a main character overall really good
A very nice story of Venti and his carefree personality in the more serious world of HSR. I love the way Venti interacts with the characters in the world. There are other worlds that are not a part of HSR in the story and I like that as well.
Peak cinema definitely peak shit. Love the idea and hope to see more like this. I’m so starved of genshin and honkai fanfics. Imagine Zhongli in HSR that’d be funny.
Sheesh. More people need to write reviews. Come on guys. Anyways, to summarize what I’m about to say: read this story if you enjoy hoyoverse games. Where to start? If the synopsis didn’t properly summarize everything, this story is essentially Venti getting isekaied to the hsr world and how he impacts the plot. However, this story manages to dodge pitfalls that similar stories fall in, and becomes a masterpiece. The reason I dislike most fanfics in the hoyoverse community is because they focus too much on smut/romance. While these novels are good every once in a while, it’s incredibly difficult to write a proper fanfic with plot and character progression if the sole purpose of the story is to see Zhongli get laid with Childe. This story manages to subvert all of my expectations and gives the reader something that this community lacks: a story. Something that charismatic bards can sing about… something that heroic adventurers can aspire to for their journeys. Instead of needless fan service, we get genuine character development. Watching how characters such as Bronya develop across her arc was incredibly meaningful. The author managed to change her character while still staying true to the original source material. Almost no one here acts out of character or without reason. The characters in this novel are worth reading about. Speaking of characters, I’d like to talk about Venti. At the beginning, the story hints at “Venti” being transmigrated from Earth. In other words, it’s a random goober who gets transferred to hsr in the body of the anemo archon. Whilst this plot point will likely get uncovered later in the story, I’m honestly grateful that the early plot doesn’t focus too much on this. A lot of the time, the transmigration acts in ways that completely erase the original character that’s being possessed. The author managed to dodge this pitfall by making the transmigrated experience all 2700 years of Venti’s past. This allows him to act as and believe in Venti’s ideals without the transmigrator being completely assimilated into Barbatos. This is the first time I’ve seen this happen, and is probably my favorite way of handling this situation. Furthermore, I was pleasantly surprised to see that this story ISN’T a power fantasy. Crazy right? A transmigrator without a leveling system with rpg mechanics. Instead of brute forcing his way through issues, Venti prioritizes watching his peers shine instead of himself. He allows others to take the spotlight while he stays in the back and orchestrates everything. (Unless shit hits the fan, then he’ll intervene) It was such a nice break from your typical power fantasy. Lastly, I’d like to talk about the translator. If you’re worried about this story being discontinued/having poor grammar, I’d like to quash those worries. The translator Wise has done a phenomenal job with this story. The grammar is near perfect, (any mistake can be easily ignored. Mostly it’s names that get misspelled) and the updates are incredibly frequent. There’s a set schedule alongside a patron and everything. Even if you can’t support Wise on patreon, just writing a review or sending a powerstone would benefit him/her tremendously. Ok. I’ve yapped enough. Best wishes to everyone who read this! Rating: 5/5 star. Perfect!
A story with an extremely good translation and updating stability Story: can be kinda slow for some people more than 80 chapters if im not wrong were just spent in belobog which lead to extremely good world building as the story in belobog turned out completely different with a completely different build up towards the finale Characters: let’s talk about venti the mc of the story he takes a semi backstage role where he doesn’t take all attention and spotlight from other characters though he can while not completely standing in the backstage while when he acts he absolutely takes full control of the stage Romance: not to my liking though i know some people like this kinda of romance where when venti meets a girl and there’s a 50/50 chance she unintentionally falls for “him” though it doesn’t feel forced In my opinion it’s a very good story not the best but really good one
Really good story translation and the fact that venti is the main character is peak first time seeing venti as a main character overall really good
A very nice story of Venti and his carefree personality in the more serious world of HSR. I love the way Venti interacts with the characters in the world. There are other worlds that are not a part of HSR in the story and I like that as well.
Peak cinema definitely peak shit. Love the idea and hope to see more like this. I’m so starved of genshin and honkai fanfics. Imagine Zhongli in HSR that’d be funny.
Sheesh. More people need to write reviews. Come on guys. Anyways, to summarize what I’m about to say: read this story if you enjoy hoyoverse games. Where to start? If the synopsis didn’t properly summarize everything, this story is essentially Venti getting isekaied to the hsr world and how he impacts the plot. However, this story manages to dodge pitfalls that similar stories fall in, and becomes a masterpiece. The reason I dislike most fanfics in the hoyoverse community is because they focus too much on smut/romance. While these novels are good every once in a while, it’s incredibly difficult to write a proper fanfic with plot and character progression if the sole purpose of the story is to see Zhongli get laid with Childe. This story manages to subvert all of my expectations and gives the reader something that this community lacks: a story. Something that charismatic bards can sing about… something that heroic adventurers can aspire to for their journeys. Instead of needless fan service, we get genuine character development. Watching how characters such as Bronya develop across her arc was incredibly meaningful. The author managed to change her character while still staying true to the original source material. Almost no one here acts out of character or without reason. The characters in this novel are worth reading about. Speaking of characters, I’d like to talk about Venti. At the beginning, the story hints at “Venti” being transmigrated from Earth. In other words, it’s a random goober who gets transferred to hsr in the body of the anemo archon. Whilst this plot point will likely get uncovered later in the story, I’m honestly grateful that the early plot doesn’t focus too much on this. A lot of the time, the transmigration acts in ways that completely erase the original character that’s being possessed. The author managed to dodge this pitfall by making the transmigrated experience all 2700 years of Venti’s past. This allows him to act as and believe in Venti’s ideals without the transmigrator being completely assimilated into Barbatos. This is the first time I’ve seen this happen, and is probably my favorite way of handling this situation. Furthermore, I was pleasantly surprised to see that this story ISN’T a power fantasy. Crazy right? A transmigrator without a leveling system with rpg mechanics. Instead of brute forcing his way through issues, Venti prioritizes watching his peers shine instead of himself. He allows others to take the spotlight while he stays in the back and orchestrates everything. (Unless shit hits the fan, then he’ll intervene) It was such a nice break from your typical power fantasy. Lastly, I’d like to talk about the translator. If you’re worried about this story being discontinued/having poor grammar, I’d like to quash those worries. The translator Wise has done a phenomenal job with this story. The grammar is near perfect, (any mistake can be easily ignored. Mostly it’s names that get misspelled) and the updates are incredibly frequent. There’s a set schedule alongside a patron and everything. Even if you can’t support Wise on patreon, just writing a review or sending a powerstone would benefit him/her tremendously. Ok. I’ve yapped enough. Best wishes to everyone who read this! Rating: 5/5 star. Perfect!