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author i have a suggestion rather than making mc too op why not have him summon a living armor and no i don't mean a armor with sentience but a armor than moves on it's own but is empty in the inside so mc can just stay inside and have the armor as his bodyguard which would move on it's own or a golem with a proper place inside for mc to sit inside kinda like a mecha but the golem moves on it''s own i think they are good options for summons that would make it so that mc won't be a glass cannon while still being a summoner
A terribly attempted knockoff of Solo Leveling. If your expectation is for a caster mc with summons, don’t hold your breath, mc goes full melee as a proper assassin. While still bossing impressive summons. All in all it has potential provided author is able to stay focused on one novel. Writing is good, grammar issues seldom occur. World building so far hard to judge, with so few chapters… honestly I’m not overly impressed, granted it’s 60 chapters or so deep. Really wished that this would be a caster mc for once, but was sorely disappointed for issues mentioned above. I read to chaper 60 and will drop at this point. Generally tired of assassin mc’s, regardless of this novels mc’s high potential for magic due to his class.
Great story so far, the summons have personalities. Especially the lazy cat lmao, great read for slice of life and online game genre so far. I will fo another review later.
Author here, its my first time writing a game novel. So i hope you let me know how you find it and if any improvements can be made. The novel will be focused on the Aramageddon and on reality. It won’ be fixed only on the game, reality will also have crucial and significant impact on the Mc’s life. The novel will also have romance, and some sort of slice of life into it. The mc is just 14 years old whilst his sister is 15, so don’t expect him to do everything perfectly although he isnt dumb and will mostly pick the right decision. The mc is op, but the pacing will be slow to medium, do let me know if you like it or hate it. Ask any questions here, and thank you for reading this far.
Read first 40 chapters and found it very interesting but author had just been uploading for 1 month so I am stacking until he uploads more than 300 chapters. Hope author doesn't drop this novel really liked it and also upload atleast 3 chapter per day hopefully 4 but will make do with 3
author i have a suggestion rather than making mc too op why not have him summon a living armor and no i don't mean a armor with sentience but a armor than moves on it's own but is empty in the inside so mc can just stay inside and have the armor as his bodyguard which would move on it's own or a golem with a proper place inside for mc to sit inside kinda like a mecha but the golem moves on it''s own i think they are good options for summons that would make it so that mc won't be a glass cannon while still being a summoner
A terribly attempted knockoff of Solo Leveling. If your expectation is for a caster mc with summons, don’t hold your breath, mc goes full melee as a proper assassin. While still bossing impressive summons. All in all it has potential provided author is able to stay focused on one novel. Writing is good, grammar issues seldom occur. World building so far hard to judge, with so few chapters… honestly I’m not overly impressed, granted it’s 60 chapters or so deep. Really wished that this would be a caster mc for once, but was sorely disappointed for issues mentioned above. I read to chaper 60 and will drop at this point. Generally tired of assassin mc’s, regardless of this novels mc’s high potential for magic due to his class.
Great story so far, the summons have personalities. Especially the lazy cat lmao, great read for slice of life and online game genre so far. I will fo another review later.
Author here, its my first time writing a game novel. So i hope you let me know how you find it and if any improvements can be made. The novel will be focused on the Aramageddon and on reality. It won’ be fixed only on the game, reality will also have crucial and significant impact on the Mc’s life. The novel will also have romance, and some sort of slice of life into it. The mc is just 14 years old whilst his sister is 15, so don’t expect him to do everything perfectly although he isnt dumb and will mostly pick the right decision. The mc is op, but the pacing will be slow to medium, do let me know if you like it or hate it. Ask any questions here, and thank you for reading this far.
Read first 40 chapters and found it very interesting but author had just been uploading for 1 month so I am stacking until he uploads more than 300 chapters. Hope author doesn't drop this novel really liked it and also upload atleast 3 chapter per day hopefully 4 but will make do with 3