Zusammenfassung
As Orson read the novel written by the girlfriend who had left him, he gently remarked on how terrible the story was. But then, noticing a foul smell coming from the kitchen, he went to investigate. He realized there was some kind of gas leak. Already furious about being dumped, Orson became even angrier at the state of his kitchen, and in his rage, he hit the light switch with a powerful punch. Naturally, the explosion that followed killed him instantly, and Orson passed into the afterlife.
After spending some time in limbo, he found himself reincarnated in an unfamiliar world. However, he quickly realized he had been reborn inside the cliché-filled novel written by his ex-girlfriend. As if that wasn’t enough, he had ended up in the body of Neonidas, a useless duke who was also the fiancé of the story's villainess.
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There may be a bit too much swearing and slang in the first chapters, but it gets less afterwards.
There will be no yuri, bl or ntr in Neonidas(MC) harem
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionThe grammar is a major let down for this novel. The interactions between the characters are very bland, robotic you may say. The plot however is interesting nonetheless. But I didn't really like how the mc easily revealed a vital information about his future knowledge which can lead to bad development if the author runs out of ideas. Also this seems to be going more on the wish fulfilment side, I didn't like the pokemon ahh harem. Not my cup of tea [img=faceslap]
Spoiler enthüllenI've found another potential diamond !! . my luck is insanely good these days. pacing is good. mc is slowly getting stronger and has likeable personality. World building is decent.. though power system is not explained till now ,hope author does it in future . I like the info-dump in this novel where it is slow and gradual unlike when authors simple put 3 pages worth info at the very beginning ( which I'll definitely skip lmao🤣). nice start .. hope author keeps it up and doesn't bottle potential banger
absolutely perfect. There is not a single chapter where u will feel bored. great job author ,will be waiting for upcoming chapters👍. And yes if possible increase Romance scenes with Solara.
The story has an interesting premise, but the way the mc is acts is nothing short of a letdown . He doesn't want to survive with the way he acts and talks . The only reason he'll survive in the future chapters is that i speculate , is through sheer plot armors.
The story overall has promise but dude the MC is a fcking dickhead for 90% of the story for absolute no reason. No wonder his irl girlfriend left him, the fact he had one is already a miracle. It's really hard to continue reading from his POV and cheering for him. It's not even he is a villain with charm, just insufferable, the kinda side character you would want the MC to bitch slap.
I like this. I wanted to get into a villain type mc again and this is really nice. Mc isn’t annoying and just does what is needed. Personality is also funny and the fight club reference was funny.
This novel was rather interesting. I was at first very put out by the MCs attitude throughout but came to understand a bit more as I read on in the novel. The parts that I disliked was the very descriptive torture scenes which made me wonder if this was the authors personal fetish, as it was overly intense. Anyways, I have read everything up to the current chapter I am at, I recall swearing not to purchase any more chapters but the author would release something that would cause me to purchase the chapter ahead in the want to know more, which is really a first for me in a long time. Overall it is a rather meticulously written novel, it captures many elements that a Novel should have and delivers these. As I mentioned above, the one retraction was the vivid torture scenes and I firmly believe that they could have been delivered in a more constructive manner… Just thinking now. I feel somehow the novels title should be different, as he is really more the villain than his wife to be is. After all he is armed with knowledge of the story and has actively taken away all the good things to be discovered by the protagonist and removed threats before they became serious threats with utter ruthlessness, so yeh maybe a different title. To sum up.. it ain’t bad !
Sorry to say this, but the story is a bit wierd, same with the main character, not in any world will he survive with his mouth.
It has a story that gets better and better, even if I had a little difficulty reading it at the beginning. I would be happy if only the harem parts do not increase too much. Great job author!
really good read with lot of potential characters are not love brains at least till where I seen...world building could use some work Mc may feel like a complex character..but felt annoying to read but may change in the future
I really loved this novel author keep it up the story is going good i just have a suggestion don't go too deep on harem or sex story is more important but having some fan service is also nice and i just saw character illustration and i love it it doesn't feel to unreal and another thing i just saw that solara was on number 1 on popularity so I just used all my coins and everything to increase the popularity on empress mother of allea i have increased it by 11,000 so now she's number one my mommy [img=update]
The premise is great. I love the idea and the world building but... what is that character? i dont mind hating a MC but why does he try to make enemies when he's trying not to be killed by them? He's just plainly stupid, not even a villain...
Этот роман хорош, 3 попытка была удачной. Мне нравится, но меня беспокоят некоторые тенденции MC, будет ли он готов в случае необходимости пожертвовать кем-то? Или ему не хватит на это сил? Персонажи не однобокие, что очень радует, много интриг и заговор, обид и вражды, и личных интересов у всех! Приятного чтения всем, кто не опробовал ещё данный роман.
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