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I love the plot, character development, and how detailed the story is set. Currently, at chap 78, hopefully, more chaps to come. I didn’t expect his house tho, that ancient hat can hold a grudge hahahaha
Great book. The author really tried and gave it a good direction along with huge potential. But the most important thing is that there is no harem and even if there is love, the book is still great. Moderately cruel and moderately kind, in my opinion she is very good.
It's something fresh but not to diffrent, i like the mechanics of the spels and tools he uses to battle . In the beginning the characters like him a bit fast but it's not horrible.
It's a very good fanfic and I like the Mc's personality a lot. He's got that mad scientist vibe but without the willingness to give up his morals for it. And the overall quality is top notch.
Es una lectura entretenida, lo más interesante que encontré fue como interactúa con los "sangre pura" y les baja los humos también como lidia con los mortifagos, a pesar de ser un reencarnador y no tener conocimiento previo de la trama al menos tiene entrenamiento militar, algo es algo 🤷🏻♂️
I liked this novel, so I gave it 5 stars, it has a small variety of magical techniques, and although gg is trying to help his friends, he will not help a complete stranger, so there is a "world hero" syndrome here, but it is weak.
I love it, pretty good to read if you're bored. I love the MC, Vivian, and how the story is set before Harrys's birth, 11 years before the first movie. I hate little to no complain except that, why did the Potters have to die, why did the Longbottoms have to suffer (is it because MC needs to develop skills in Legilimens and connect with young Lockhart?), and why did the McKillian* have to die alongside the Prewett, damn I just realized Quirrel is a student here thats's cool. And damn, I love the story, keep it up please.
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Awesome. MC is OP compared to people his age and possibly more. Don't know why this has low reviews. One of the good novel right now and it has low reviews... Tf. Some novels felt like an AI wrote it and those have high reviews. I'm not getting some people lately. The only thing I'm hoping for right now though is that MC actually tries to follow up on Sirius' case and not just let him rot in Azkaban.
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Lots of unique ideas and interesting differences from a standard HP fanfic. Really good world background, and writing quality. Sadly the character and story pacing are a bit off. Not terribly off, but enough from allowing this story to truly shine. Bit of flip-flop on the protag's personality, which lends the story to stutter-start/stop without progressing towards a plot.
I’m really enjoying the story so far. 100 chapters in. Curious to see how Harry Potter will fit in here, time will tell.
Stopped reading at ch 98. An mc with no knowledge of the franchise just doesnt excite me or interest me. Kind of loses the point of an other worlder/reincarnator if he has no knowledge or have so little of it that he cant utilize it at all
If the story just abt mc that’s it…. Well it’s alright ig…. No one cares abt the cannon stuff but mc has been acting stupid…… to be forced to follow plot of cannon which makes the overall work suck…. Plot… follows cannon to the letter… author isn’t creative enough to make an actual story… so he is just copying the plot… mc is virtually useless… and also reincarnation his past life, which should’ve been useful is useless…. Before chapters 80 up it’s good and can be called its own story…. Now it’s just like most other novels a copy pasta… I’m not mad with the death thing I’m disappointed in everything else…. Like sure that’s important and need to follow fate…. But what happens after just shows how useless and how much Mc just follows what everyone else tells him… he acts like a dog to everyone… if Mc killed people or actually looked for revenge or stood up for himself in a better way… I would respect and like the story and it would earn it self full stars… it would be an original story…. But Mc becomes stupid…. Plot hole: treat a death eater with respect and beg for forgiveness….. Plot hole: letting a man be thrown in prison…. Which is future plot if for mc but he still let it happen…. Plot hole: letting death eaters get away from prison bc of excuses… and not doing anything (what is the actual point of mc in this world? I can see this as the only way mc has anything else to do or proved an actually story…. That could be interesting but nothing let the murders of only people who loved u run away free…. Even his best friend has more balls and a spin then Mc….) Plot hole: how accepting he is of everything…. Plot hole: he is a lapdog for dumbledore…. Being told to shut up sit still and bark on command…. How well trained…. Well great idea for a novel ig… and good start…. Mid way thru / plot sucks but probably new author with not refined skills… if that isn’t the case well… try again next time I’m sure one day u can do a great story…. But that’s overall and a holistic view….
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If your expecting a smart mc then this ain’t it. I love the writing but it’s pretty cringe in the stuff he says and his actions portray him as another Naruto and somehow all the other characters immediately after meeting him already consider him as family while they’re in war and he’s a slytherin? It just seemed unrealistic. I had to drop since he didn’t save some people
I don’t quite understand what the point is in showing off your abilities so much and inventing spells for a common attack (echo and infrasonic strike), he is already an adult and should understand the presence of such hidden cards, and he gives it to others without receiving any benefit except that in the future against they will use his own spell on him 🤦
one of the best ffs I've read on here, granted most of the storys on here suck with mc who's a psychopath. who kills off all the main characters and somehow gets all the girls. I have to read with my brain turned off and most of these virgins say they like that kind of ff, but hey good story hope u keep it going and don't listen to the idiots.💯💯💯
I like most of what I've read which is up to chapter 60. I like the way the MC is hardworking he is OP but he works for it and it makes sense. Updates are good from what I can tell the author posts 2 chapters a day.
One of the best harry potter fanfictions. It has an interesting main character. It’s an interesting timeline, that I haven’t seen used yet. The story is interesting. I think this is a must read here is five stars to keep you going.
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5/5 Mostly because Bob is a bum. See first review for reference. he wanted a side quester MC. what a loser. anyways, the story so far is decent. a few spelling/grammar issues but for the most part it's fine. I like the MC so far and this time period isn't usually focused on either. With so many fanfics written, everything is partially generic or cliche but how you navigate through it all is a major factor in a quality fanfic. so far this story hasn't strayed from that blueprint. if it does start to fall off, since its early, ill revise my rating but until then keep it up.
Why? Why fight Voldemort? Why make the protagonist a fool with a stupid hero complex? Personally, I think it is necessary for the protagonist to risk his life fighting Voldemort in vain, except for a self-esteem problem that drives him to want to be the center of attention.
I see many ask and complain how it follow similar plot with the movie, i will not spoil more, but it just look like that as mc were still too young he will still change everything in the future, with magic the potential is endless
Spoiler enthüllen I love the plot, character development, and how detailed the story is set. Currently, at chap 78, hopefully, more chaps to come. I didn’t expect his house tho, that ancient hat can hold a grudge hahahaha
Great book. The author really tried and gave it a good direction along with huge potential. But the most important thing is that there is no harem and even if there is love, the book is still great. Moderately cruel and moderately kind, in my opinion she is very good.
It's something fresh but not to diffrent, i like the mechanics of the spels and tools he uses to battle . In the beginning the characters like him a bit fast but it's not horrible.
It's a very good fanfic and I like the Mc's personality a lot. He's got that mad scientist vibe but without the willingness to give up his morals for it. And the overall quality is top notch.
Es una lectura entretenida, lo más interesante que encontré fue como interactúa con los "sangre pura" y les baja los humos también como lidia con los mortifagos, a pesar de ser un reencarnador y no tener conocimiento previo de la trama al menos tiene entrenamiento militar, algo es algo 🤷🏻♂️
I liked this novel, so I gave it 5 stars, it has a small variety of magical techniques, and although gg is trying to help his friends, he will not help a complete stranger, so there is a "world hero" syndrome here, but it is weak.
I love it, pretty good to read if you're bored. I love the MC, Vivian, and how the story is set before Harrys's birth, 11 years before the first movie. I hate little to no complain except that, why did the Potters have to die, why did the Longbottoms have to suffer (is it because MC needs to develop skills in Legilimens and connect with young Lockhart?), and why did the McKillian* have to die alongside the Prewett, damn I just realized Quirrel is a student here thats's cool. And damn, I love the story, keep it up please.
Spoiler enthüllen Awesome. MC is OP compared to people his age and possibly more. Don't know why this has low reviews. One of the good novel right now and it has low reviews... Tf. Some novels felt like an AI wrote it and those have high reviews. I'm not getting some people lately. The only thing I'm hoping for right now though is that MC actually tries to follow up on Sirius' case and not just let him rot in Azkaban.
Spoiler enthüllen Lots of unique ideas and interesting differences from a standard HP fanfic. Really good world background, and writing quality. Sadly the character and story pacing are a bit off. Not terribly off, but enough from allowing this story to truly shine. Bit of flip-flop on the protag's personality, which lends the story to stutter-start/stop without progressing towards a plot.
I’m really enjoying the story so far. 100 chapters in. Curious to see how Harry Potter will fit in here, time will tell.
Stopped reading at ch 98. An mc with no knowledge of the franchise just doesnt excite me or interest me. Kind of loses the point of an other worlder/reincarnator if he has no knowledge or have so little of it that he cant utilize it at all
If the story just abt mc that’s it…. Well it’s alright ig…. No one cares abt the cannon stuff but mc has been acting stupid…… to be forced to follow plot of cannon which makes the overall work suck…. Plot… follows cannon to the letter… author isn’t creative enough to make an actual story… so he is just copying the plot… mc is virtually useless… and also reincarnation his past life, which should’ve been useful is useless…. Before chapters 80 up it’s good and can be called its own story…. Now it’s just like most other novels a copy pasta… I’m not mad with the death thing I’m disappointed in everything else…. Like sure that’s important and need to follow fate…. But what happens after just shows how useless and how much Mc just follows what everyone else tells him… he acts like a dog to everyone… if Mc killed people or actually looked for revenge or stood up for himself in a better way… I would respect and like the story and it would earn it self full stars… it would be an original story…. But Mc becomes stupid…. Plot hole: treat a death eater with respect and beg for forgiveness….. Plot hole: letting a man be thrown in prison…. Which is future plot if for mc but he still let it happen…. Plot hole: letting death eaters get away from prison bc of excuses… and not doing anything (what is the actual point of mc in this world? I can see this as the only way mc has anything else to do or proved an actually story…. That could be interesting but nothing let the murders of only people who loved u run away free…. Even his best friend has more balls and a spin then Mc….) Plot hole: how accepting he is of everything…. Plot hole: he is a lapdog for dumbledore…. Being told to shut up sit still and bark on command…. How well trained…. Well great idea for a novel ig… and good start…. Mid way thru / plot sucks but probably new author with not refined skills… if that isn’t the case well… try again next time I’m sure one day u can do a great story…. But that’s overall and a holistic view….
Spoiler enthüllen If your expecting a smart mc then this ain’t it. I love the writing but it’s pretty cringe in the stuff he says and his actions portray him as another Naruto and somehow all the other characters immediately after meeting him already consider him as family while they’re in war and he’s a slytherin? It just seemed unrealistic. I had to drop since he didn’t save some people
I don’t quite understand what the point is in showing off your abilities so much and inventing spells for a common attack (echo and infrasonic strike), he is already an adult and should understand the presence of such hidden cards, and he gives it to others without receiving any benefit except that in the future against they will use his own spell on him 🤦
one of the best ffs I've read on here, granted most of the storys on here suck with mc who's a psychopath. who kills off all the main characters and somehow gets all the girls. I have to read with my brain turned off and most of these virgins say they like that kind of ff, but hey good story hope u keep it going and don't listen to the idiots.💯💯💯
I like most of what I've read which is up to chapter 60. I like the way the MC is hardworking he is OP but he works for it and it makes sense. Updates are good from what I can tell the author posts 2 chapters a day.
One of the best harry potter fanfictions. It has an interesting main character. It’s an interesting timeline, that I haven’t seen used yet. The story is interesting. I think this is a must read here is five stars to keep you going.
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5/5 Mostly because Bob is a bum. See first review for reference. he wanted a side quester MC. what a loser. anyways, the story so far is decent. a few spelling/grammar issues but for the most part it's fine. I like the MC so far and this time period isn't usually focused on either. With so many fanfics written, everything is partially generic or cliche but how you navigate through it all is a major factor in a quality fanfic. so far this story hasn't strayed from that blueprint. if it does start to fall off, since its early, ill revise my rating but until then keep it up.
Why? Why fight Voldemort? Why make the protagonist a fool with a stupid hero complex? Personally, I think it is necessary for the protagonist to risk his life fighting Voldemort in vain, except for a self-esteem problem that drives him to want to be the center of attention.
I see many ask and complain how it follow similar plot with the movie, i will not spoil more, but it just look like that as mc were still too young he will still change everything in the future, with magic the potential is endless
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