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Honestly I love this FF. I like the concept, I like the MC, I like how the characters are depicted, and I like the fact that the romance is well paced. Nothing is too fast nor too slow combined with the really fast updates it gives us a perfect combination when you progress in the story regularly and not like some other stories where it's too slow paced and you have only 1 chapter per week. The two downsides that I see are: - Some errors sometimes, like Ah Yin or Xiao Yu who are 100,000 years soul beasts but author (or translator I didn't look) write that they are 10,000 years soul beats. - The use of the diary, at start it was regularly used and present in every chapter, later MC instead do a session from time to time, sometimes with months between two sessions, while for use it's like 2-3 chapters I still think it's dumb to discard potential rewards just because MC didn't write just 1 or 2 lines in his diary.
One of the interesting stories, the description is good. Keep updating, Thank you [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
La historia es entretenida pero luego la intervención del autor mediante el uso del sistema dejando mensaje innecesarios a mitad del capítulo comenzaron a molestarme, esto se volvió cada vez más frecuente, por otra parte no me importaba que el sistema prohibiera a los personajes ciertas cosas, aunque hubiera preferido que amenazara con quitar todo lo que les dio y borrar de sus mentes el conocimiento que les transmito, pero luego del capítulo 56 perdí mí entusiasmo por leer, en ese punto el sistema amenazó con matar a alguien solo para cumplir el deseo del protagonista, esta intervención fue más allá de lo que creo correcto, si el protagonista tiene que recurrir a amenazas solo para conseguir chicas, no veo el sentido de molestarse con Tang San, no se si fue intencional, pero el autor mostro que su protagonista es un inútil que no puede hacer nada por su cuenta, solo esperar a que se le entregue todo de regalo, sus supuesta indignación con Tang San son solo celos, la verdad es que no me importa mucho si estos es así, pero al menos esperaba que fuera alguien inteligente capaz de usar el engaño para conseguir lo que quiere, pero no hay esfuerzo, es solo el sistema (autor) haciendo todo, en este punto cualquier tipo al azar podría ser el protagonista y no importaría porque no cambiaría nada.
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Vergonzoso! Esos mc chinos si que son desvergonzados, incluso yo no me atrevo a escribir tantas estupideces en mi diario, pero mc llama "esposas" a todas las chicas que conoce de la serie original, sin embargo, la serie es divertida, aunque siento que ya he leído 10 novelas con la mismas tramas, no es culpa de nadie, es bien sabido que todas las novelas chinas son copias de las 10 novelas originales.
Tiene muchos capítulos, tiene buenas reseñas, y no parece una mala historia, Que más puedo pedir, directamente a la biblioteca y ya lo comienzo a leer.
I strongly recommend the novel, even though I'm abandoning it here (chap 67) because the system wasn't to my taste, but in all aspects it's a good story. Maybe I'll come back in the future. Good job translator!
At first I was really excited to find another good fanfic. The translation was good and with 5 chapters released daily I was thrilled! Unfortunately the author messed up right on the second chapter. Such a shame... I really liked the system concept and the rewards it gave the MC too. The MC got a journal where he can write his thoughts and based on the words count he writes he receive a rewards each day. But why did the author need to make it weird and let all the female leads see his journal content??? Right off the bat the MC write he is a reincarnator and continues to give details on the world he is now, how it was a novel in his previous world and its plot - letting all the female lead know their future in a how much of a pervert the MC is and his his deepest secrets... Such a shame!! Except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability which I give five stars, everything else receive only one star.
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Readers should at least give this novel a chance. Good thing I didn't drop this novel in the early chapters. The MC might be a perverted hypocrite, but he is still somewhat a good guy, willing to sacrifice himself for the heroines.
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I never expected to find a good translator here. I thought this is going to be just somewhat good. But well, it was exceptionally great for the Douluo Dalu Fanfic.
If you like it you will probably change your mind at ch.56. The female characters who can read the diary have no freedom, and the system becomes more and more of a person who's only goal is to give the carrot and the stick to the female characters forcing them on the road to become the MCs harem. In this chapter the system literally tells (female characters) them that they are Not allowed to appear where the don't in the plot, at the risk of death.
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It's such a good story as well as the quality is high. I am so happy to find this story keep it up author!!!!!!!
I went into this expecting somewhat translation level but this actually looking great as of chapter 100. The system seems to be working towards an excellent life for MC and not randomly screwing him over which is nice to see.
never give up! and to write lemons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hmm wimpy and selfsacrificial MC with a bad system. A lot of Nerfs and others benefit honestly more from it than him... you could think he is ron weasley and the system the weasley family... unwanted orangeheaded stepchild in a way. have i already mentioned the bad rewards from the system und dumb random nerfs? welp good point would be currently the high update frequency and the rather high writing quality. also some reactions can be funny... even though often things get repeated like 3-4 times for wordcount
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Finally another comedy based on soul land............................had been waiting for long time..............................................
Hello author here,..I am not planning t drop this series until i finish uploading everything.....10 chapters per day, that's the plan for now......so read with peace of mind and do review as much as possible thanks....
If you want to read advanced chapters, go to my patreon, patreon(.)co(m)/Shadow_D_X, just ignore the brackets, i will be done translating this series by this month in patreon. 10 chapter/day
Honestly I love this FF. I like the concept, I like the MC, I like how the characters are depicted, and I like the fact that the romance is well paced. Nothing is too fast nor too slow combined with the really fast updates it gives us a perfect combination when you progress in the story regularly and not like some other stories where it's too slow paced and you have only 1 chapter per week. The two downsides that I see are: - Some errors sometimes, like Ah Yin or Xiao Yu who are 100,000 years soul beasts but author (or translator I didn't look) write that they are 10,000 years soul beats. - The use of the diary, at start it was regularly used and present in every chapter, later MC instead do a session from time to time, sometimes with months between two sessions, while for use it's like 2-3 chapters I still think it's dumb to discard potential rewards just because MC didn't write just 1 or 2 lines in his diary.
One of the interesting stories, the description is good. Keep updating, Thank you [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
La historia es entretenida pero luego la intervención del autor mediante el uso del sistema dejando mensaje innecesarios a mitad del capítulo comenzaron a molestarme, esto se volvió cada vez más frecuente, por otra parte no me importaba que el sistema prohibiera a los personajes ciertas cosas, aunque hubiera preferido que amenazara con quitar todo lo que les dio y borrar de sus mentes el conocimiento que les transmito, pero luego del capítulo 56 perdí mí entusiasmo por leer, en ese punto el sistema amenazó con matar a alguien solo para cumplir el deseo del protagonista, esta intervención fue más allá de lo que creo correcto, si el protagonista tiene que recurrir a amenazas solo para conseguir chicas, no veo el sentido de molestarse con Tang San, no se si fue intencional, pero el autor mostro que su protagonista es un inútil que no puede hacer nada por su cuenta, solo esperar a que se le entregue todo de regalo, sus supuesta indignación con Tang San son solo celos, la verdad es que no me importa mucho si estos es así, pero al menos esperaba que fuera alguien inteligente capaz de usar el engaño para conseguir lo que quiere, pero no hay esfuerzo, es solo el sistema (autor) haciendo todo, en este punto cualquier tipo al azar podría ser el protagonista y no importaría porque no cambiaría nada.
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Vergonzoso! Esos mc chinos si que son desvergonzados, incluso yo no me atrevo a escribir tantas estupideces en mi diario, pero mc llama "esposas" a todas las chicas que conoce de la serie original, sin embargo, la serie es divertida, aunque siento que ya he leído 10 novelas con la mismas tramas, no es culpa de nadie, es bien sabido que todas las novelas chinas son copias de las 10 novelas originales.
Tiene muchos capítulos, tiene buenas reseñas, y no parece una mala historia, Que más puedo pedir, directamente a la biblioteca y ya lo comienzo a leer.
I strongly recommend the novel, even though I'm abandoning it here (chap 67) because the system wasn't to my taste, but in all aspects it's a good story. Maybe I'll come back in the future. Good job translator!
At first I was really excited to find another good fanfic. The translation was good and with 5 chapters released daily I was thrilled! Unfortunately the author messed up right on the second chapter. Such a shame... I really liked the system concept and the rewards it gave the MC too. The MC got a journal where he can write his thoughts and based on the words count he writes he receive a rewards each day. But why did the author need to make it weird and let all the female leads see his journal content??? Right off the bat the MC write he is a reincarnator and continues to give details on the world he is now, how it was a novel in his previous world and its plot - letting all the female lead know their future in a how much of a pervert the MC is and his his deepest secrets... Such a shame!! Except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability which I give five stars, everything else receive only one star.
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A tradução está muito boa, espero que o autor não desista da tradução. 👍🙏👍🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️🙏👏👍✍️🙏👏👍👊👏🙏🙏🙏👏👍👏🙏✍️✍️🙏✍️🙏🙏🙏🙏👍✍️👍👍✍️👍👍👍👍✍️👍✍️🙏✍️🙏✍️✍️🙏✍️🙏
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Readers should at least give this novel a chance. Good thing I didn't drop this novel in the early chapters. The MC might be a perverted hypocrite, but he is still somewhat a good guy, willing to sacrifice himself for the heroines.
Spoiler enthüllen I never expected to find a good translator here. I thought this is going to be just somewhat good. But well, it was exceptionally great for the Douluo Dalu Fanfic.
If you like it you will probably change your mind at ch.56. The female characters who can read the diary have no freedom, and the system becomes more and more of a person who's only goal is to give the carrot and the stick to the female characters forcing them on the road to become the MCs harem. In this chapter the system literally tells (female characters) them that they are Not allowed to appear where the don't in the plot, at the risk of death.
Spoiler enthüllen It's such a good story as well as the quality is high. I am so happy to find this story keep it up author!!!!!!!
I went into this expecting somewhat translation level but this actually looking great as of chapter 100. The system seems to be working towards an excellent life for MC and not randomly screwing him over which is nice to see.
never give up! and to write lemons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hmm wimpy and selfsacrificial MC with a bad system. A lot of Nerfs and others benefit honestly more from it than him... you could think he is ron weasley and the system the weasley family... unwanted orangeheaded stepchild in a way. have i already mentioned the bad rewards from the system und dumb random nerfs? welp good point would be currently the high update frequency and the rather high writing quality. also some reactions can be funny... even though often things get repeated like 3-4 times for wordcount
Spoiler enthüllen Finally another comedy based on soul land............................had been waiting for long time..............................................
Hello author here,..I am not planning t drop this series until i finish uploading everything.....10 chapters per day, that's the plan for now......so read with peace of mind and do review as much as possible thanks....
If you want to read advanced chapters, go to my patreon, patreon(.)co(m)/Shadow_D_X, just ignore the brackets, i will be done translating this series by this month in patreon. 10 chapter/day