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Action_Potential

the translation and original work are written excellently. background is 5/5 cause its naruto the character are nice and some are original. the story development tho has left alot to be desired. the character is very shallow guy with protect my comrades mentality and no original thoughts. just goes with the flow. the kid romance is very jarring to read as I don't really like to read about two kids mooching or hugging or flirting tbh. esp when the main character is an adult mind transmigrator. honestly its just ew. and the glazing in the chapter is insane. sometimes the glazing of background character could take 4-5 chapters. after he got some fame every move he does background npcs must glaze him for 2 paragraphs minimum. its really annoying and makes me skip chapters. overall 3.5/5

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Ahzek_Ahriman69

The translation is very well done best ive read so far the mc is intresting and normal not some typical boring edgelord like 90% of other mcs and the plot is pretty good. Would recommend.

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Maicol_R

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23d
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Daoist669967

I think that if it weren't for the repetitive comments that are obviously there to reach the word quota per chapter and unnecessary comments that are there for the same reason, this would be a good story. I keep skipping the story and that ruins the immersion, not to mention... Never mind, read whoever wants to.

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Sabrina_Esa

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26d
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TheFoolexists

Great story and love how the mc is ,He’s not to strong and not that weak either love this ❤️❤️❤️

28d
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VolkBert

I want to know, how to you get the raw chapters? do you pay for it on faloo? or do you have other methods?

1mth
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hexagonal_01_shape

I thought having cultivator abilities will remove the charm of Naruto fanfic where fighting is based on boring cultivation level. But this novel does not do that. The fighting and action is exactrliting. So with that 5/5.

1mth
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Britcio
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Una genial lectura 😆 tiene una buena gramática y traducción dejando un exelente desarrollo de la trama bastante fluido evitando y aprovechando sucesos de la historia original a su favor, junto con el crecimiento sólido y escalonado del MC en fuerza e ingenio y ya por tener Yuan Qi Primordial su potencial está OP 😎💪🏻

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Phantom5001

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Lucius_SS

It's a good power fantasy story where the mc becomes strong pretty quick. The romance could be better. Not much focus is on that, but at least its there and hopefully will be expanded upon.

1mth
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Ouroboros_00

hey author don't listen to what people say i love the work and it is good some people only read few chapters and starts saying that they don't like it , at first i also had some problems with MC's name but now it's fine , overall it's very good

1mth
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Musyirok

Overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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birtek89

I know it's a translation, but it's very annoying having to read full names all the time, especially the mc. Reduce it to just Hui please, I think it's possible to do that in translation. The story itself is a little poor, with an excess of praise for the MC's appearance, there is also the fact that 6-year-old girls make declarations of love and seek relationships, which is quite silly and unrealistic, at most there could be admiration juvenile (that's what we expect from many Chinese authors and their strange fetishes). I'm still at the beginning of the story. Regarding cultivation with different powers, I don't see a problem, as long as it is well planned and doesn't make the mc too op immediately and of course an idiot. And I hope the other ninjas aren't portrayed as idiots where only the MC can do something (there's a lot of Chinese history that you can't follow because of this).

1mth
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Mostafa_Hamza

i hate cultivation(qi) and swords(sword aura) based stories... it's just too simple and predictable...

1mth
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A420Snackattack

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2mth
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exgarex_123

Me Encanta el ambiente que genera el protagonista y como conocé a los Futuros Líderes del Mundo Ninja por Excelencia. Pero me quede comiendo la curiosidad por la pelea de Hui con los Invasores de la Aldea Uzumaki

2mth
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Sooooyaaaaa

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2mth
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Ricardo_Miloos

Really good translation. Liked the premise and hoped it delves into village management after he becomes Hokage. Full Raw name?

2mth
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cozyatbed

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_Harsh_
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currently around chapter 60, the story is going in a good direction for me, I especially like how the author has developed the character of mc and how side characters feel real aswell especially is squadmates.

2mth
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Reimoss
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Boring sword user, energy cheat used in probably the weakest way. I can't be bothered to read further.

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2mth
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Tesouraria_Lac

Nice fanfiction with SI and immortal energy in naruto universe jdjdnsbsbddndndjdjsjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjsjsjsjdjsjsjsjjsjsskskskjsjsjsjsjsjdjdndndndndndnsnsn

2mth
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Jeremiah_Loggains

I am really loving the story just wish there where more chapters!

3mth
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Kil0
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Really love the cheat that the MC gets in this story, I always love Naruto fics with cultivation. Unfortunately the writing quality is poor and story is just bad. MC is arrogant, obnoxious, and too stupid to survive a few days without plot armor. Lot of wasted potential here

3mth
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reva20p4

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Hipposarecool

Story seems good, no harem and it seems pretty interesting and the translation is really good

3mth
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Action_Potential

the translation and original work are written excellently. background is 5/5 cause its naruto the character are nice and some are original. the story development tho has left alot to be desired. the character is very shallow guy with protect my comrades mentality and no original thoughts. just goes with the flow. the kid romance is very jarring to read as I don't really like to read about two kids mooching or hugging or flirting tbh. esp when the main character is an adult mind transmigrator. honestly its just ew. and the glazing in the chapter is insane. sometimes the glazing of background character could take 4-5 chapters. after he got some fame every move he does background npcs must glaze him for 2 paragraphs minimum. its really annoying and makes me skip chapters. overall 3.5/5

11d
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Ahzek_Ahriman69

The translation is very well done best ive read so far the mc is intresting and normal not some typical boring edgelord like 90% of other mcs and the plot is pretty good. Would recommend.

17d
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Maicol_R

,........djdhshsjsmzbdjwnzvnsjvffjejsbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbfh excelente historia..........,................shshdhsjshshsvsxhbxbdehhsbdjddhdhdbfhfjjdjddbfbbfdbdbbddbbd

23d
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Daoist669967

I think that if it weren't for the repetitive comments that are obviously there to reach the word quota per chapter and unnecessary comments that are there for the same reason, this would be a good story. I keep skipping the story and that ruins the immersion, not to mention... Never mind, read whoever wants to.

25d
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Sabrina_Esa

Good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

26d
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TheFoolexists

Great story and love how the mc is ,He’s not to strong and not that weak either love this ❤️❤️❤️

28d
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VolkBert

I want to know, how to you get the raw chapters? do you pay for it on faloo? or do you have other methods?

1mth
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hexagonal_01_shape

I thought having cultivator abilities will remove the charm of Naruto fanfic where fighting is based on boring cultivation level. But this novel does not do that. The fighting and action is exactrliting. So with that 5/5.

1mth
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Britcio
LV 13 Badge

Una genial lectura 😆 tiene una buena gramática y traducción dejando un exelente desarrollo de la trama bastante fluido evitando y aprovechando sucesos de la historia original a su favor, junto con el crecimiento sólido y escalonado del MC en fuerza e ingenio y ya por tener Yuan Qi Primordial su potencial está OP 😎💪🏻

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1mth
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Phantom5001

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1mth
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Lucius_SS

It's a good power fantasy story where the mc becomes strong pretty quick. The romance could be better. Not much focus is on that, but at least its there and hopefully will be expanded upon.

1mth
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Ouroboros_00

hey author don't listen to what people say i love the work and it is good some people only read few chapters and starts saying that they don't like it , at first i also had some problems with MC's name but now it's fine , overall it's very good

1mth
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Musyirok

Overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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1mth
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birtek89

I know it's a translation, but it's very annoying having to read full names all the time, especially the mc. Reduce it to just Hui please, I think it's possible to do that in translation. The story itself is a little poor, with an excess of praise for the MC's appearance, there is also the fact that 6-year-old girls make declarations of love and seek relationships, which is quite silly and unrealistic, at most there could be admiration juvenile (that's what we expect from many Chinese authors and their strange fetishes). I'm still at the beginning of the story. Regarding cultivation with different powers, I don't see a problem, as long as it is well planned and doesn't make the mc too op immediately and of course an idiot. And I hope the other ninjas aren't portrayed as idiots where only the MC can do something (there's a lot of Chinese history that you can't follow because of this).

1mth
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Mostafa_Hamza

i hate cultivation(qi) and swords(sword aura) based stories... it's just too simple and predictable...

1mth
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A420Snackattack

......................... ................

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2mth
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exgarex_123

Me Encanta el ambiente que genera el protagonista y como conocé a los Futuros Líderes del Mundo Ninja por Excelencia. Pero me quede comiendo la curiosidad por la pelea de Hui con los Invasores de la Aldea Uzumaki

2mth
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Sooooyaaaaa

scoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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2mth
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Ricardo_Miloos

Really good translation. Liked the premise and hoped it delves into village management after he becomes Hokage. Full Raw name?

2mth
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cozyatbed

i love love love love loveee thisss aahhh💳💥💳💥💳💥💳💥

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2mth
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_Harsh_
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currently around chapter 60, the story is going in a good direction for me, I especially like how the author has developed the character of mc and how side characters feel real aswell especially is squadmates.

2mth
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Reimoss
LV 14 Badge

Boring sword user, energy cheat used in probably the weakest way. I can't be bothered to read further.

Spoiler enthüllen
2mth
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Tesouraria_Lac

Nice fanfiction with SI and immortal energy in naruto universe jdjdnsbsbddndndjdjsjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjsjsjsjdjsjsjsjjsjsskskskjsjsjsjsjsjdjdndndndndndnsnsn

2mth
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Jeremiah_Loggains

I am really loving the story just wish there where more chapters!

3mth
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Kil0
LV 4 Badge

Really love the cheat that the MC gets in this story, I always love Naruto fics with cultivation. Unfortunately the writing quality is poor and story is just bad. MC is arrogant, obnoxious, and too stupid to survive a few days without plot armor. Lot of wasted potential here

3mth
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reva20p4

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Hipposarecool

Story seems good, no harem and it seems pretty interesting and the translation is really good

3mth
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