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I can’t stop reading. This book has so much potential and especially after Volume One everything starts to pick up speed. Believe me countine to read until you read a little bit of Volume Two before dropping. I really hope this book doesn’t get dropped.
I know this book might seem similar to others you’ve read—maybe it even shares some familiar tropes—but let me assure you, it’s not the same. This story has a real sense of direction, so it might feel a bit slow at times. That’s because it’s not just about constant leveling up, blowing up planets, or seducing people (honestly, I don’t even know how to write that last part, so you’re safe there!). I’ve put effort into building a solid plot, so please be patient—you’re in for a lot!
I don’t understand the author. Have you read too many Chinese novels? It feels like you design characters based on them. As for the MC in this story, I feel like there’s nothing outstanding about him—nothing that makes him truly a protagonist. You’ve taken the flaws of Chinese MCs but none of their strengths. The strength of a Chinese MC is that they are special, more talented, luckier, and more outstanding than others in the story. Their flaws are usually being an orphan or having an incomplete family, being poor—barely surviving—and because of this, they are weak, lack many things, and end up owing many people along the way. But this MC? He has the flaws—being poor, being ordinary—but none of the strengths of a Chinese MC. His class is just rare, only mid-tier, not even a unique class. He doesn’t even have a secondary class, while side characters do. His race isn’t anything special. His Undead slots aren’t unique—only two per level, while some people have five. He’s not a genius in training or learning, which makes him seem not particularly smart—just average and unremarkable. He has a unique talent that seems interesting, but it doesn’t make him stand out much. I can hardly find a reason to read about such an ordinary character. Seeing him is like seeing my own life—nothing great, nothing terrible—which makes me feel like I’m wasting my time.
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Just a great book excellent work! I hope for more chapters but author you should do it at your pace and make sure to not burn out or do sloppy work ,take your time. Wish you the best author keep up the good work !❤️
Pros The novel is pretty good the MC is pretty good the power system is pretty good the world building is pretty good the writing is very understandable. Cons Too few characters, about 6 mc,aunt,cousin,receptionist,brian and those 2girls he conquered the level 2 crack with. each of the characters besides the mc have under 6 appearances and being included in about three paragraphs. Really slow pacing 126ch in 5days have passed. Mc has started seeing himself as a higher being than humans after gaining a little bit of strength And while i can understand his hunger for power i still think that he's neglecting the ones who took care of him a little bit and yes someone may say "but that's not even his real family" mc still states that he obtained the one who he transmigratet to's memories and views them as family Overall I would give it about 5.9/10 if it had a good pacing 6.3/10
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I really like this novel. It mixes cultivation with game-like elements, where you have people who are Cultivators, and others (Awakeners) that use a level-up system. The protagonist, Micheal, is not bad. Although there are a few dumb moments, he's mostly a smart protagonist (for now), and he's not scared by challenges. The world is well-developed, with a bunch of stuff explained so it's very clear, but this is also one of the issues. The author takes a lot of time to explain the world, so even after 150+ chapters (as I'm writing the review), there's actually not that much stuff that happened. Now, don't get me wrong, the protagonist got stronger, a bunch of stuff was explained, and there are a few events, but due to the amount of explanations and repetition, it's not what you'd expect after reading this much. The repetition part is one I don't like. It goes from the copy-pasted status/skills description in multiple chapters, when we just read about them 1 or 2 chapters before. It repeats concepts that are already clear, as if the author is concerned with the readers being too stupid to remember. All in all, I really liked the novel, and I'm hopeful for the academy arc (which seems far away since only like 1 week passed in 150 chapters). I'll have to wait for more chapters to be released, tho.
I saw that this story has romance, and I thought it would be an interesting idea if he got a tamer sub class that because of his necromancer class allowed him to contract anything he could make an undead. This way he could “contact” his loved ones to make sure they grow with him. If he got the tamer class he could also get healing/ holy or other beasts that you couldn’t have otherwise. Or it could just be a skill to get a familiar ever like 10 or so levels. Just a thought. This way he won’t leave his family behind and they won’t be in as much danger. Of course he should ask them first and explain the benefits at least partly. Sorry if this suggestion is rude or something you were already thinking of.
Very Strong World building, roots are clear and story is heading in right direction, I never really read novel that much or even if I do, i drop them after few chapters, but even with this slow start, you got me hooked! Your hard work is paying off! [img=strong]
150 chap read and still interesting, no little sister to look after, no i'll mother in the hospital, their is a family he live with (mc is an orphan but live with aunt and female cousin) and it look natural. The power system in this world, although generique and see in a lot of novel is not bad and have it's own twist. The peanut gallery DON'T GO in the wuxia shit département, wich is really refreshing. The only problem i have with the story is the ''no permanent death" in the (how to say it 🤔) ''game world'' the awakened have acces to. Mini spoiler (apparently can be permanent in some rare case).
well i really like the novel so far (im on chapter40)and I have a question will he cultivate or he will just go lvl up path?
I really, really like this novel and think it has incredible potential but it also has a pretty glaring problem that's seriously hurting it for many people. One of its biggest flaws is that something that could be easily and succinctly done in 2 chapters is more often than not stretched out to encompass at least 5 or more chapters by the author using filler, for seemingly no reason but to artificially slow things down. Combine that with the extreme over explanations of things that either don't need to be explicitly explained for one reason or another for the audience to naturally understand it, or are about things that feel misplaced and aren't relevant to that moment, the short term plot, near future or even overall story for a long time to come but is explained in excruciating detail anyway right then and there, putting the whole plot and story on hold until the info dump is over, many times happening several times a chapter and often repeating the same exact info just one or two chapters later without changing anything about it, just a complete copy/paste from before. Further add on the seemingly endless (and mostly off topic) tangents he goes into before, during and after he does anything at all, but especially especially so for fights, meaning he'll need several chapters to kill a low level mob (like a slime) because he's spends so much time on random superfluous tangents that 90% of the buildup and aftermath is just the MC yapping about nothing and repeating the same thoughts and reflections he's already had many times so far, without actually learning from these reflections and needing to go through the same thought processes over again to relearn the conclusion you already came to multiple times before, repeating the steps every 10 chapters or so. Plus the stats and descriptions of things are very often repeated multiple chapters in a row without changing anything, leading to between 30%-40% of a chapter can relatively often be nothing but the same info said in the previous chapter(s), and with the size of each chapter it only feels that much shorter with all the filler and repeats. It kinda feels like if you were to reedit the novel and it's chapters, you could probably remove around 40% of the words and reader would still have the same amount of info and knowledge of the world, the plot and the MC as you would get reading the original novel, only with less filler and faster/(debatably)better pacing Don't get me wrong though because i truly do like this and i know this makes it sound really bad but i do strongly believe others should give it a chance and try it for themselves, i just want it to improve, get better and eventually become one of the all time goats of a story (like "the second coming of gluttony" for example) like it so clearly has the potential to be if its a bit more edited and trimmed down.
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Very good but too slow. I read 70 chapters but the story has been going on just 3 days Please fix it. It's a shame to ruin such a good story with this.
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story and everything is good but OMG author loves to copy paste a lot there are time the entire chapter is either copy paste from before or extremely unnecessary detail on some random matters , in general when you decide to read this be ready to skip at least 60% of the text you see
Good setting and everything, my main issue is just the insane amount of info dumps and exposition without action, both actual action and dialogue
Characters and setting seem to be well fleshed out,though with odd, somewhat justifable hiccups. Power scaking and growth of the mc is acceptable. What really kills the story is the writers habit to either ramble on in a circle and often repeat information. Perhaps in later chapters the writer will learn to right more fluidly, I, unfortunately will not be there to read it. This work does not deserve a ranking spot on the golden ticket list.
Pretty good, with a few annoying issues for me. System just immediately warping personality based on class is dumb. MC becoming some weirdo who is so full of himself that he can sympathize demonic cultivators and would freak out if he had to wait in line with someone who isn't strong in like a week after awakening is a little much. But the real annoying thing is how much he thinks about the difference between awakeners and cultivation when it is honestly completely irrelevant. It is the same nonsense over and over with absolutely no relevance.
best thing is the world building. very nice. characters are alright but it's still early on so can't say much. quality is good and editor ensures it's consistentancy. updates frequently. I like the vibes, mc op but not that big of a deal, kinda(?) like the dynamics of the world building. spoiler ahead** like Brian, bro feels very real. he is a very very nice character and the dimension Crack arc is intense! Isabelle deserved better sad for that kid
Look, I like the story a lot, and I plan to read it all. However, it feels like I’m in the story irl with ADHD because this motherfuckin MC goes on tangents SO frequently that I’m being driven insane. The amount of tangents that went on between fighting his first slime and writing his post makes me feel like the MC needs adderal immediately.
What !!?? A monster I can't kill let's go back and upgrade....kill the monster take 2 steps and another monster pops up that he can't kill... let's go back and upgrade...Ill def kill you next time !!! let me guess it will repeat a third time I bet ya...Story progression is non-existent... The only thing is level-up and minion upgrade as of ch 95
The story is good, and I do actually like how it’s written and enjoy the power system and characters, but the only bad part is the sheer amount of Info dumps in the initial chapters, but after those chapter the story speeds up and gets sooooo much better.
This a story where a select few gain special powers in the form of a simple system style progression. If you're looking for a story that the MC carefully plans and optimizes his powers then look else where. The world doesn't allow have any structured learning for awakeners until you're level 26 or rank 2(the ranking and level systems are very confusing.) Its basically a free-for-all and no hand holding when people awaken. The only information is asking random power users question or a restricted forum (basically trying to get all of your knowledge from reddit.) Opportunities are constantly missed from the get go. For example, the only way to dual class is getting a life seed before you awaken but they don't tell you until after you awaken. So besides all of that, the story is engaging and it does tell an interesting tale about an MC with imperfect and human traits powering through with an OP talent.
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great story with good character development. I am excited for every new release. There Is just one thing that Is not so good and that Is over explanations, dear author se are not stupid. Story progression Is great a I am all for slow stories but that Is with relevant side stories or some interesting gimick. MC loosing in his thoughts Is not interesting side gimick. overall great novel
First 40ish chapters are a little slow because of the foundation being set up for the book, but after that it was amazing and I couldn’t stop reading until I caught up to the current chapter. Highly recommend giving this book a shot if you’re interested 🫡🫡🫡
i like it so far but I have a couple of issues with how the plots written like what events happen exactly not just general terminology at least with the lore
A lot of early info dumps and stat screens. gets better as the story goes on.Power system feels...confusing still. MC acts like he should in most cases in my opinion. world building is there. pacing I feel could be sped up slightly. 126 chapters in and it's only been 4 days. but a LOT of shit happens during that time. just.....a LOT of stat screens. truly hope he's able to hold onto his humanity to a certain degree. I also hope Micheal: 1) gets the necro heart thing, 2) ACTUALLY CULTIVATES!! but I really believe this novel is good and could be great. worth the read.
story seems to have a lot of potential, not fast-paced, which is a good thing. As seen to many of these stories, just shoot off and lose all integrity. it is my hope this book stays on the good path and has many chapters ahead of it.
I can’t stop reading. This book has so much potential and especially after Volume One everything starts to pick up speed. Believe me countine to read until you read a little bit of Volume Two before dropping. I really hope this book doesn’t get dropped.
I know this book might seem similar to others you’ve read—maybe it even shares some familiar tropes—but let me assure you, it’s not the same. This story has a real sense of direction, so it might feel a bit slow at times. That’s because it’s not just about constant leveling up, blowing up planets, or seducing people (honestly, I don’t even know how to write that last part, so you’re safe there!). I’ve put effort into building a solid plot, so please be patient—you’re in for a lot!
I don’t understand the author. Have you read too many Chinese novels? It feels like you design characters based on them. As for the MC in this story, I feel like there’s nothing outstanding about him—nothing that makes him truly a protagonist. You’ve taken the flaws of Chinese MCs but none of their strengths. The strength of a Chinese MC is that they are special, more talented, luckier, and more outstanding than others in the story. Their flaws are usually being an orphan or having an incomplete family, being poor—barely surviving—and because of this, they are weak, lack many things, and end up owing many people along the way. But this MC? He has the flaws—being poor, being ordinary—but none of the strengths of a Chinese MC. His class is just rare, only mid-tier, not even a unique class. He doesn’t even have a secondary class, while side characters do. His race isn’t anything special. His Undead slots aren’t unique—only two per level, while some people have five. He’s not a genius in training or learning, which makes him seem not particularly smart—just average and unremarkable. He has a unique talent that seems interesting, but it doesn’t make him stand out much. I can hardly find a reason to read about such an ordinary character. Seeing him is like seeing my own life—nothing great, nothing terrible—which makes me feel like I’m wasting my time.
Spoiler enthüllen Just a great book excellent work! I hope for more chapters but author you should do it at your pace and make sure to not burn out or do sloppy work ,take your time. Wish you the best author keep up the good work !❤️
Pros The novel is pretty good the MC is pretty good the power system is pretty good the world building is pretty good the writing is very understandable. Cons Too few characters, about 6 mc,aunt,cousin,receptionist,brian and those 2girls he conquered the level 2 crack with. each of the characters besides the mc have under 6 appearances and being included in about three paragraphs. Really slow pacing 126ch in 5days have passed. Mc has started seeing himself as a higher being than humans after gaining a little bit of strength And while i can understand his hunger for power i still think that he's neglecting the ones who took care of him a little bit and yes someone may say "but that's not even his real family" mc still states that he obtained the one who he transmigratet to's memories and views them as family Overall I would give it about 5.9/10 if it had a good pacing 6.3/10
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I really like this novel. It mixes cultivation with game-like elements, where you have people who are Cultivators, and others (Awakeners) that use a level-up system. The protagonist, Micheal, is not bad. Although there are a few dumb moments, he's mostly a smart protagonist (for now), and he's not scared by challenges. The world is well-developed, with a bunch of stuff explained so it's very clear, but this is also one of the issues. The author takes a lot of time to explain the world, so even after 150+ chapters (as I'm writing the review), there's actually not that much stuff that happened. Now, don't get me wrong, the protagonist got stronger, a bunch of stuff was explained, and there are a few events, but due to the amount of explanations and repetition, it's not what you'd expect after reading this much. The repetition part is one I don't like. It goes from the copy-pasted status/skills description in multiple chapters, when we just read about them 1 or 2 chapters before. It repeats concepts that are already clear, as if the author is concerned with the readers being too stupid to remember. All in all, I really liked the novel, and I'm hopeful for the academy arc (which seems far away since only like 1 week passed in 150 chapters). I'll have to wait for more chapters to be released, tho.
I saw that this story has romance, and I thought it would be an interesting idea if he got a tamer sub class that because of his necromancer class allowed him to contract anything he could make an undead. This way he could “contact” his loved ones to make sure they grow with him. If he got the tamer class he could also get healing/ holy or other beasts that you couldn’t have otherwise. Or it could just be a skill to get a familiar ever like 10 or so levels. Just a thought. This way he won’t leave his family behind and they won’t be in as much danger. Of course he should ask them first and explain the benefits at least partly. Sorry if this suggestion is rude or something you were already thinking of.
Very Strong World building, roots are clear and story is heading in right direction, I never really read novel that much or even if I do, i drop them after few chapters, but even with this slow start, you got me hooked! Your hard work is paying off! [img=strong]
150 chap read and still interesting, no little sister to look after, no i'll mother in the hospital, their is a family he live with (mc is an orphan but live with aunt and female cousin) and it look natural. The power system in this world, although generique and see in a lot of novel is not bad and have it's own twist. The peanut gallery DON'T GO in the wuxia shit département, wich is really refreshing. The only problem i have with the story is the ''no permanent death" in the (how to say it 🤔) ''game world'' the awakened have acces to. Mini spoiler (apparently can be permanent in some rare case).
well i really like the novel so far (im on chapter40)and I have a question will he cultivate or he will just go lvl up path?
I really, really like this novel and think it has incredible potential but it also has a pretty glaring problem that's seriously hurting it for many people. One of its biggest flaws is that something that could be easily and succinctly done in 2 chapters is more often than not stretched out to encompass at least 5 or more chapters by the author using filler, for seemingly no reason but to artificially slow things down. Combine that with the extreme over explanations of things that either don't need to be explicitly explained for one reason or another for the audience to naturally understand it, or are about things that feel misplaced and aren't relevant to that moment, the short term plot, near future or even overall story for a long time to come but is explained in excruciating detail anyway right then and there, putting the whole plot and story on hold until the info dump is over, many times happening several times a chapter and often repeating the same exact info just one or two chapters later without changing anything about it, just a complete copy/paste from before. Further add on the seemingly endless (and mostly off topic) tangents he goes into before, during and after he does anything at all, but especially especially so for fights, meaning he'll need several chapters to kill a low level mob (like a slime) because he's spends so much time on random superfluous tangents that 90% of the buildup and aftermath is just the MC yapping about nothing and repeating the same thoughts and reflections he's already had many times so far, without actually learning from these reflections and needing to go through the same thought processes over again to relearn the conclusion you already came to multiple times before, repeating the steps every 10 chapters or so. Plus the stats and descriptions of things are very often repeated multiple chapters in a row without changing anything, leading to between 30%-40% of a chapter can relatively often be nothing but the same info said in the previous chapter(s), and with the size of each chapter it only feels that much shorter with all the filler and repeats. It kinda feels like if you were to reedit the novel and it's chapters, you could probably remove around 40% of the words and reader would still have the same amount of info and knowledge of the world, the plot and the MC as you would get reading the original novel, only with less filler and faster/(debatably)better pacing Don't get me wrong though because i truly do like this and i know this makes it sound really bad but i do strongly believe others should give it a chance and try it for themselves, i just want it to improve, get better and eventually become one of the all time goats of a story (like "the second coming of gluttony" for example) like it so clearly has the potential to be if its a bit more edited and trimmed down.
Spoiler enthüllen Very good but too slow. I read 70 chapters but the story has been going on just 3 days Please fix it. It's a shame to ruin such a good story with this.
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story and everything is good but OMG author loves to copy paste a lot there are time the entire chapter is either copy paste from before or extremely unnecessary detail on some random matters , in general when you decide to read this be ready to skip at least 60% of the text you see
Good setting and everything, my main issue is just the insane amount of info dumps and exposition without action, both actual action and dialogue
Characters and setting seem to be well fleshed out,though with odd, somewhat justifable hiccups. Power scaking and growth of the mc is acceptable. What really kills the story is the writers habit to either ramble on in a circle and often repeat information. Perhaps in later chapters the writer will learn to right more fluidly, I, unfortunately will not be there to read it. This work does not deserve a ranking spot on the golden ticket list.
Pretty good, with a few annoying issues for me. System just immediately warping personality based on class is dumb. MC becoming some weirdo who is so full of himself that he can sympathize demonic cultivators and would freak out if he had to wait in line with someone who isn't strong in like a week after awakening is a little much. But the real annoying thing is how much he thinks about the difference between awakeners and cultivation when it is honestly completely irrelevant. It is the same nonsense over and over with absolutely no relevance.
best thing is the world building. very nice. characters are alright but it's still early on so can't say much. quality is good and editor ensures it's consistentancy. updates frequently. I like the vibes, mc op but not that big of a deal, kinda(?) like the dynamics of the world building. spoiler ahead** like Brian, bro feels very real. he is a very very nice character and the dimension Crack arc is intense! Isabelle deserved better sad for that kid
Look, I like the story a lot, and I plan to read it all. However, it feels like I’m in the story irl with ADHD because this motherfuckin MC goes on tangents SO frequently that I’m being driven insane. The amount of tangents that went on between fighting his first slime and writing his post makes me feel like the MC needs adderal immediately.
What !!?? A monster I can't kill let's go back and upgrade....kill the monster take 2 steps and another monster pops up that he can't kill... let's go back and upgrade...Ill def kill you next time !!! let me guess it will repeat a third time I bet ya...Story progression is non-existent... The only thing is level-up and minion upgrade as of ch 95
The story is good, and I do actually like how it’s written and enjoy the power system and characters, but the only bad part is the sheer amount of Info dumps in the initial chapters, but after those chapter the story speeds up and gets sooooo much better.
This a story where a select few gain special powers in the form of a simple system style progression. If you're looking for a story that the MC carefully plans and optimizes his powers then look else where. The world doesn't allow have any structured learning for awakeners until you're level 26 or rank 2(the ranking and level systems are very confusing.) Its basically a free-for-all and no hand holding when people awaken. The only information is asking random power users question or a restricted forum (basically trying to get all of your knowledge from reddit.) Opportunities are constantly missed from the get go. For example, the only way to dual class is getting a life seed before you awaken but they don't tell you until after you awaken. So besides all of that, the story is engaging and it does tell an interesting tale about an MC with imperfect and human traits powering through with an OP talent.
Spoiler enthüllen great story with good character development. I am excited for every new release. There Is just one thing that Is not so good and that Is over explanations, dear author se are not stupid. Story progression Is great a I am all for slow stories but that Is with relevant side stories or some interesting gimick. MC loosing in his thoughts Is not interesting side gimick. overall great novel
First 40ish chapters are a little slow because of the foundation being set up for the book, but after that it was amazing and I couldn’t stop reading until I caught up to the current chapter. Highly recommend giving this book a shot if you’re interested 🫡🫡🫡
i like it so far but I have a couple of issues with how the plots written like what events happen exactly not just general terminology at least with the lore
A lot of early info dumps and stat screens. gets better as the story goes on.Power system feels...confusing still. MC acts like he should in most cases in my opinion. world building is there. pacing I feel could be sped up slightly. 126 chapters in and it's only been 4 days. but a LOT of shit happens during that time. just.....a LOT of stat screens. truly hope he's able to hold onto his humanity to a certain degree. I also hope Micheal: 1) gets the necro heart thing, 2) ACTUALLY CULTIVATES!! but I really believe this novel is good and could be great. worth the read.
story seems to have a lot of potential, not fast-paced, which is a good thing. As seen to many of these stories, just shoot off and lose all integrity. it is my hope this book stays on the good path and has many chapters ahead of it.