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- Veröffentlichungsstabilität
- Geschichtenentwicklung
- Charakter-Design
- Welthintergrund
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Protagonista irritantemente irritante... tentei me forçar a ler, mas, simplesmente não dá
The translation is good but could be way better if you changed his name to English as well. The development is a** and the mc feels like an edgy teenager who thinks the world revolves around him. I get that this is a translation but to make a good story you shouldn't tell the story a out you instead you should tell it from the character. Like what the character would do, not the author.
Protagonista irritantemente irritante... tentei me forçar a ler, mas, simplesmente não dá
The translation is good but could be way better if you changed his name to English as well. The development is a** and the mc feels like an edgy teenager who thinks the world revolves around him. I get that this is a translation but to make a good story you shouldn't tell the story a out you instead you should tell it from the character. Like what the character would do, not the author.
needs a lot of work ....................