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I have mixed feelings about this story. On one hand, the concept is interesting; on the other, I feel that the author didn’t know how to make the most of it. When you read the synopsis, you expect a sweet and strange relationship between a father and his children. But what do you get instead? A supposed father who, on more than one occasion, has shown that he sees his son more as an object than as his child. It’s more than clear that Azu had mental health issues stemming from genetics (perhaps side effects of his powers), issues that the protagonist worsened by giving him a shallow upbringing with superficial advice, solely focused on the idea that he must take care of his family. In other words, the main character hopes that, in the future, Azu doesn’t become a villain and kill him. The protagonist knows his son has SERIOUS mental health issues, so what does he do about it? NOTHING. He says something superficial like “we need to correct him,” and by the next morning, he’s forgotten all about it. He’s a terrible father.
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i didn't expect for this story to be such a good read,shame there's only 20 chapters,really good job with the story
Começou bem mas depois virou uma merda, principalmente a trama do cemitério que foi um lixo desnecessário poderia simplesmente apagar tudo sobre ela que não faria falta, até deixaria a história melhor, coisas como a mulher tentando usar Criptonita pra ressuscitar seu filho, mesmo ninguém além do mc sabendo pra que ela serve, a mulher só teve meta conhecimento do nada e resolveu fazer isso, as interações de pai e filho também são uma merda o cm não interage direito com filho dele, e quando faz só diz merda, que não seria nenhuma surpresa se homelander vira-se um assassino pior doque na história original, já que a mente do mc foi escrita por um chinês logo não se espera nada além de merda saindo dela, não me surpreenderia se o mc o deixa-se matar outras pessoas que não fossem chinesas.
Strange concept, but it worked really well! It really surprised me! The plot of this novel is surprising very well developed. I recommend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
A new project! Let's goo!! .................................................................................................................................................
The author keeps changing the name of one of the characters. He can't decide between John or Azu for the character in questions name. It really is driving me to be irrationally angry. Other than that its a typical DC Story with the main character going through the TV Show: Smallville and probably other future DC Shows.
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I have mixed feelings about this story. On one hand, the concept is interesting; on the other, I feel that the author didn’t know how to make the most of it. When you read the synopsis, you expect a sweet and strange relationship between a father and his children. But what do you get instead? A supposed father who, on more than one occasion, has shown that he sees his son more as an object than as his child. It’s more than clear that Azu had mental health issues stemming from genetics (perhaps side effects of his powers), issues that the protagonist worsened by giving him a shallow upbringing with superficial advice, solely focused on the idea that he must take care of his family. In other words, the main character hopes that, in the future, Azu doesn’t become a villain and kill him. The protagonist knows his son has SERIOUS mental health issues, so what does he do about it? NOTHING. He says something superficial like “we need to correct him,” and by the next morning, he’s forgotten all about it. He’s a terrible father.
5 звезд определено..........................................................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i didn't expect for this story to be such a good read,shame there's only 20 chapters,really good job with the story
Começou bem mas depois virou uma merda, principalmente a trama do cemitério que foi um lixo desnecessário poderia simplesmente apagar tudo sobre ela que não faria falta, até deixaria a história melhor, coisas como a mulher tentando usar Criptonita pra ressuscitar seu filho, mesmo ninguém além do mc sabendo pra que ela serve, a mulher só teve meta conhecimento do nada e resolveu fazer isso, as interações de pai e filho também são uma merda o cm não interage direito com filho dele, e quando faz só diz merda, que não seria nenhuma surpresa se homelander vira-se um assassino pior doque na história original, já que a mente do mc foi escrita por um chinês logo não se espera nada além de merda saindo dela, não me surpreenderia se o mc o deixa-se matar outras pessoas que não fossem chinesas.
Strange concept, but it worked really well! It really surprised me! The plot of this novel is surprising very well developed. I recommend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
A new project! Let's goo!! .................................................................................................................................................
The author keeps changing the name of one of the characters. He can't decide between John or Azu for the character in questions name. It really is driving me to be irrationally angry. Other than that its a typical DC Story with the main character going through the TV Show: Smallville and probably other future DC Shows.