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This fic had potential but the main problem I have with it is that the POV keeps going all over the place never actually focusing on the main character but like one in three chapters the POV also jumps to the future without any explanation and basically tells us what's going to happen without giving us any explanations on why it happened then it backs tracks where it should have just started to begin with so in the in the story the jumble of different povs of the main character and other characters that a lot of times don't make sense until five chapters later it'd be fine if this was like a one or two times thing but it's all throughout the fanfic and it's just annoying
MC: SI-OC Mutant Rating: 6,5/10 It's a multiverse system travelling fiction , which I didn't expect , thought it will be exclusively a Marvel fiction with one system. Gramma like interactions I think are good. I especially like that the person summoned so far is not directly 100% loyal and he has to earn the trust. Too bad that of the current 55 chapters 18 are in a different universe than marvel.
ROBERTAAAAAAA other waifus choose em popular girls. but a non magic non super first waifu??
I thought it'd be really bad, but it's actually pretty okay. It's definitely better than most Chinese gacha/system MCs I've read at the very least. I can read it without having to restructure the sentences in my mind, and it's got a decent update rate. I'll just wait and see how the story goes to judge it further. I don't understand how they say it's written by ai though, can someone please elaborate on that part?
It's very good and very entertaining, honestly I only commented because it caught my attention that the story is so criticized when it is something so good, I just want to tell you that everything is excellent, I look forward to more.
The story is good the mc is good the characters are not enough 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💖💖💖👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I don't care if a fanfic is ai or not, but this is trash. Why can't you use a single braincell to make sense of the story? Not only that the author is playing a trivia game with us, why can't you just say what's going on. You are your own worst enemy at this point and let's not forget, there's no chance he will finish this fanfic. This is going to be dropped at any moment now.
boring not what i thought it would be and then add in the thing that very rarely makes a novel better (multiverse travel) and this is just not worth it for me.
the story is good just need more world building and more chapters keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
you're not an author. You're just mimicking one with this Ai generated shit and I hate those................................................
Pretty good so far, A bit slow and that's exactly why it's so good Street level fights are very interesting actually and you've shown it pretty well here.. Go for unique abstract templates maybe some game characters if possible He needs to be OP over a period of time but in a very unconventional way.. Not straight up fire fist or ryujin jakka
always improving constantly getting better chapter after chapter i got hooked after chapter 6 i highly recommend giving it a try (no romance so far ch33 which is good)
So far so good I'm still enjoy this fanfic 💯. Just hope you expend the world building more............................. ...... ...... ..... ............ ......
i like it................................................................................................................................................
Interesting concept and story, MC has suffered but not broken yet. lets see what this has to offer. For now, I am satisfied with what this story started. This has potential.
Spoiler enthüllen
I love stories that have peter parker in it where he is the main character and will have a harem because he is my favorite character in marvel and my one and only friendly neighborhood spider-man in my eyes and opinion.
There is a story on this site that is similar to this, but is 1 million times better with incredible writing and story, aswell as good characters, reading this is like reading dogshit in comparison, the other fanfic is called meta essence in marvel, smth like that?
This fic had potential but the main problem I have with it is that the POV keeps going all over the place never actually focusing on the main character but like one in three chapters the POV also jumps to the future without any explanation and basically tells us what's going to happen without giving us any explanations on why it happened then it backs tracks where it should have just started to begin with so in the in the story the jumble of different povs of the main character and other characters that a lot of times don't make sense until five chapters later it'd be fine if this was like a one or two times thing but it's all throughout the fanfic and it's just annoying
MC: SI-OC Mutant Rating: 6,5/10 It's a multiverse system travelling fiction , which I didn't expect , thought it will be exclusively a Marvel fiction with one system. Gramma like interactions I think are good. I especially like that the person summoned so far is not directly 100% loyal and he has to earn the trust. Too bad that of the current 55 chapters 18 are in a different universe than marvel.
ROBERTAAAAAAA other waifus choose em popular girls. but a non magic non super first waifu??
I thought it'd be really bad, but it's actually pretty okay. It's definitely better than most Chinese gacha/system MCs I've read at the very least. I can read it without having to restructure the sentences in my mind, and it's got a decent update rate. I'll just wait and see how the story goes to judge it further. I don't understand how they say it's written by ai though, can someone please elaborate on that part?
It's very good and very entertaining, honestly I only commented because it caught my attention that the story is so criticized when it is something so good, I just want to tell you that everything is excellent, I look forward to more.
The story is good the mc is good the characters are not enough 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💖💖💖👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I don't care if a fanfic is ai or not, but this is trash. Why can't you use a single braincell to make sense of the story? Not only that the author is playing a trivia game with us, why can't you just say what's going on. You are your own worst enemy at this point and let's not forget, there's no chance he will finish this fanfic. This is going to be dropped at any moment now.
boring not what i thought it would be and then add in the thing that very rarely makes a novel better (multiverse travel) and this is just not worth it for me.
the story is good just need more world building and more chapters keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
you're not an author. You're just mimicking one with this Ai generated shit and I hate those................................................
Pretty good so far, A bit slow and that's exactly why it's so good Street level fights are very interesting actually and you've shown it pretty well here.. Go for unique abstract templates maybe some game characters if possible He needs to be OP over a period of time but in a very unconventional way.. Not straight up fire fist or ryujin jakka
always improving constantly getting better chapter after chapter i got hooked after chapter 6 i highly recommend giving it a try (no romance so far ch33 which is good)
So far so good I'm still enjoy this fanfic 💯. Just hope you expend the world building more............................. ...... ...... ..... ............ ......
i like it................................................................................................................................................
Interesting concept and story, MC has suffered but not broken yet. lets see what this has to offer. For now, I am satisfied with what this story started. This has potential.
Spoiler enthüllen I love stories that have peter parker in it where he is the main character and will have a harem because he is my favorite character in marvel and my one and only friendly neighborhood spider-man in my eyes and opinion.
There is a story on this site that is similar to this, but is 1 million times better with incredible writing and story, aswell as good characters, reading this is like reading dogshit in comparison, the other fanfic is called meta essence in marvel, smth like that?