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My first time giving a review, so let's see... I read till chapter 21: 1- The writing quality is good but suspicious as hell. Author says this is original but there are many instances where it hints this of being an MTL translation. For example/ In one chapter he gets general cultivation knowledge and sits on his ahh for hours to cultivate, then the next chapter to be exact this ability changes to Sun breathing. 2- The plot is there but turned slightly off at the end with out of nowhere his future self gets inside his dream giving him some sort of 'advice' if you could call it that which makes you confused if the system is evil or not and other things. This means that he ain't a singularity but many versions of him and his system exists out there which is a no no for many readers I guess, like seriously, the marvel universe does have enough nonsense and much more going on, and now many parallel versions on top of that which means MC will have to deal with an evil version of himself at some point which is a frustrating kind of plot. When he turned unconscious at the end and military stealing his blood for research, that's that too. Sometimes the system feels off too, the Author tried to make it simple at first but little by little things got strange, system now slightly looks sentient which again is a no no to do when you write a system based novel. 3- The MC is good, slightly unstable but you can't hate the guy at least I guess. 4- I don't know for updates. 5- World background gives Rick and Morty vibes but hope I am imagining it. Overall = It's decent.
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My first time giving a review, so let's see... I read till chapter 21: 1- The writing quality is good but suspicious as hell. Author says this is original but there are many instances where it hints this of being an MTL translation. For example/ In one chapter he gets general cultivation knowledge and sits on his ahh for hours to cultivate, then the next chapter to be exact this ability changes to Sun breathing. 2- The plot is there but turned slightly off at the end with out of nowhere his future self gets inside his dream giving him some sort of 'advice' if you could call it that which makes you confused if the system is evil or not and other things. This means that he ain't a singularity but many versions of him and his system exists out there which is a no no for many readers I guess, like seriously, the marvel universe does have enough nonsense and much more going on, and now many parallel versions on top of that which means MC will have to deal with an evil version of himself at some point which is a frustrating kind of plot. When he turned unconscious at the end and military stealing his blood for research, that's that too. Sometimes the system feels off too, the Author tried to make it simple at first but little by little things got strange, system now slightly looks sentient which again is a no no to do when you write a system based novel. 3- The MC is good, slightly unstable but you can't hate the guy at least I guess. 4- I don't know for updates. 5- World background gives Rick and Morty vibes but hope I am imagining it. Overall = It's decent.
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