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Tension, trauma and drama. I love how it drags you in with frustration for the lead due to the arising situation. Keep it coming!
The opening chapter is well-written, but I feel that the theme and premise are somewhat common. Well, maybe it's because there are still only a few chapters, so the intrigue in the story hasn't fully emerged yet. The character of Vivian is successfully portrayed as very annoying. I hope that, as the male lead, Ryder can become a stronger character and not appear weak. Overall, this story has the potential to become great if it can be developed properly.
Giving 5 star... I am not into this genre but i liked the start and i hope it will get better. However i am from fb group review swap so i hope u will also check mine ❤️
Good novel, with a lot of future potential, I can't wait to finish it and see how it turns out, and I love the chemistry between the characters
I may be an unexperienced writer but i can see that your novel have so much potential.... Overall it's very good....
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if you fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Certainly a good read😊 It takes a turn rather than having women venture into contract and the plot , character and writing quality is just right . A must read
OK, this first few chapters were very good. I mean, the plot of tragedy mixed with tension. I felt so appalled...Good work
So far, I love the chapters. Beautiful description and dialogue between the characters. Just hope Ryder would have a happy ending😭
Tension, trauma and drama. I love how it drags you in with frustration for the lead due to the arising situation. Keep it coming!
The opening chapter is well-written, but I feel that the theme and premise are somewhat common. Well, maybe it's because there are still only a few chapters, so the intrigue in the story hasn't fully emerged yet. The character of Vivian is successfully portrayed as very annoying. I hope that, as the male lead, Ryder can become a stronger character and not appear weak. Overall, this story has the potential to become great if it can be developed properly.
Giving 5 star... I am not into this genre but i liked the start and i hope it will get better. However i am from fb group review swap so i hope u will also check mine ❤️
Good novel, with a lot of future potential, I can't wait to finish it and see how it turns out, and I love the chemistry between the characters
I may be an unexperienced writer but i can see that your novel have so much potential.... Overall it's very good....
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if you fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Certainly a good read😊 It takes a turn rather than having women venture into contract and the plot , character and writing quality is just right . A must read
OK, this first few chapters were very good. I mean, the plot of tragedy mixed with tension. I felt so appalled...Good work
So far, I love the chapters. Beautiful description and dialogue between the characters. Just hope Ryder would have a happy ending😭